[New Audio]Still Dre Freestyle (Drop Links!!)

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  1. DMH.

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    yo, I didn't like this at all. Sounds to much like a begginer. Your ability is low. Practice is needed.
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  5. MisterE

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    beats been used alot homie.......for future reference, use shit that aint commercial.....and if you happen to, make sure its right after release



    your emotion needs alot of work, just polishing in general.....you sound like i did on my first recording, except your actually on beat, lol......




    lyrics were cool for a free, but it was hard to understand in parts.....just work on your presence.....



    one key thing i can tell you, is that you gotta make every word count.....make every word fuckin IMPACT THE TRACK.......you gotta say your shit like its fucking important........when you first start spittin, you feel like an idiot if you do it with too much emotion or volume......fuck that, because thats exactly whuts holding you back......get confident, get alone so no ones around.......and just practice, rap your fuckin ass off to instrumentals playing on the box......write rhymes to beats, record experimental shit and just play with whutever recording shit your using





    also, you need overdubs.....which is basically layering your vocals......record a track, then record another track layering it, where you say effects over your vocals......add a "bitch" at the end of a punchline type shit.......also do overdubs over your multis, see if you like it.......





    keep workin at it partna




    and return the love



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  6. DMH.

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    Actually I am a beginner...at audio that is. I'll hit the rest of ya'll up right after I get back from work.

    Thanks for feed.
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    Aight, I got all of you back that left feed. Uppin for more...
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    Quality = shitty

    The flow is alright, but you lack delivery... Sounds more like you're reading, not a real freestyle... If it's a freeverse, then say so... Don't lie about it...

    If it's a legit freestyle, you really need to work on your delivery and emotion...

    Other than that, you're straight...

    Get better equipment, and practice more.. You'll get better delivery and emotion... Just take your time on the tracks if you need to, don't rush them if you want them to sound good..
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  9. DMH.

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    It was a freeverse..I usually just refer to my 1 long verse tracks as freestyles because that's where I put them on Soundclick.
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    C'mon peeps, uppin...
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    Mister E pretyy much said it......

    lotta practice my nig.....nice effort though....u read this or memorized it..cuz memorizin has it come out betta...

    and..FEEL ya lyrics ..dun just write em....when u spit put mass emotion and catch a flow rythm....define ya self nah mean??

    stay at it

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12629671#post12629671
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    ^Thanks for feed, I got both of you back. Uppin for more feed...
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