[New Audio]DMH - I'm Ready For The Industry(DROP LINKS!!)

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  1. DMH.

    DMH. The G.O.D.

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    I'm Ready For The Industry - 1:22

    Just posted up a new audio, I'd appreciate it if you peeped it and left some feed either here or on my soundclick message board. If you got somethin you want me to check in return just drop the link and I'll get to it asap.

    Thanks Peace
    test
  2. KaSe_MuNNy

    KaSe_MuNNy New Member

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    Beat is aiight, I think the drums should hit harder though.

    As far as the rapping on this, my advice to you would be to slow down. It sounds like you're trying to fit too many words into a bar and its not really clear.

    Also, as for content, honestly, people dont wanna hear about how your bout to take over the rap game and what not. Try to come up with more unique topics and develop a style.

    It's a million and one things to rap about, you'll find somethin. Keep workin on it and stay up.

    Peace
    test
  3. DMH.

    DMH. The G.O.D.

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    Yeah I just tried to do somethin different by rappin fast but after listenin to it a few times it'll probably be the only time you hear my spit like that. Rappin fast isn't for me...but I just didn't wanna trash the track all together, so I just posted it up. And by the way, this is an older track that I did and I never posted it up...so here it is.

    Thanks for feed...
    test
  4. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

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  5. ClassX

    ClassX Member

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    ehh.. beat is wack.. but im into the underground scene more..

    ouch quality is hurtin.. flow is ok... lyrics are ok.. delivery needs alotta work.. same with presence.. once u get more comfrotable ull improve on both.. put more energy in ur voice.. listen to this again ull notice ur fairly monotone.. but it sounds like with good quality ud have a good voice.. decent drop man.. peep my ish


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=935210
    peep it
    test
  6. DMH.

    DMH. The G.O.D.

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    Aight I'll hit both those links right after I get back from work tonight...thanks for the feed.
    test
  7. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    aiight Listening,
    quality is eehhhhh, but i understand the quality shit, i see a lot of kats doing tracks wit radio shack mics, ha, lyric wise this could be improved, flow is coo, work on presence and cadence, stay on ya grind son,,

    Rhymes
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=930024
    ^LOok
    test
  8. DMH.

    DMH. The G.O.D.

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    Aight I hit all them links...thanks for the feed, uppin...
    test
  9. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    I listened to this earlier....didn't really get a chance to reply
    I didn't really feel the beat, it was too quick for my liking.
    On to the flow, I think since the beat was so quick you had
    a hard time trying to keep up which made your words
    come out slurred and muffled. also the quality was kinda
    bad too which took away from this song. I think you should
    rap on a slower beat and try to make your rhymes more concise.
    Keep elevating man, you'll get alot better over time and with practice

    check me out
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=929777
    test
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