Neruk-Musical Expression[my 1st pro tools song (DROP LINKS!!)]

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  1. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    Neruk - Musical Expression

    I think this turned out really good considering the 1st time i sat down with pro tools this is what came of it, let me know what you think [rwa]
    (Rock it beat)
    Drops ya links!

    www.soundclick.com/neruk

    Hi-Fi
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    Mp3 DL
    Lyrics
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  2. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    dah hdde
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    Neruk Runky Runky

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    exothermic Well-Known Member

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    lolol everyone sleeping...

    listening....

    qualitys pretty good yeh it sounds good with protools im guessing this is le shit dont sound too too professional good for the net tho.... beats pretty good.... flows nice... rhyme scheme is only iight can switch it up alil here n there... deliverys good.... lyrics decent..... hook is coo iono bout ur singing tho lolol but it came out cool...

    n i luv how u dont look nuthing like a rapper... shows how far hiphop has come
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  5. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    ^^ Thanks, and the quality will get better, this is my 1st time opening up pro tools, so i had no clue what i was doing. But i was happy with the finished product non the less. Thanks for the feed.
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    Neruk Runky Runky

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    Bumpa Bumpee
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    Neruk Runky Runky

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    durr//
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  8. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    neruk, interesting name

    not really feeling this beat, sounds like something an rnb singer would tear down though



    ur flow is sickness, but sounds too hyped up for this mellow beat though, not bad though


    content is sick


    not feeling the hook at all

    quality is good


    i think u would much iller on a different beat, but this wasnt bad at all

    u got some real skill



    check out my new shit when u got some time son


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=914346

    "Its Been a Long Time" ft Storz and Celph Centered
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  9. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    thanks man, ill hit that link tonight, pz
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    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  11. Fernelity

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    Everything's tight, but I don't like the hook too much.

    I think your voice goes illy over this beat. Your flow sorta, blends well. Idk, it sounds good. The hype flow and mellow beat just sounds nice to me.

    The last stanz of the second verse was a little wierd, sorta fell off. Idk, didn't sound as good as the rest. Sorta sounded off.

    Good track overall, and sorry it's taken me so long ot hit it back. Been busy with my girl and work..

    K-Town! Heh, Idk..

    Once again, dopeness
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  12. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    Thanks, i was trying to make the end sound kind of like that.. like struggling to get the words out to explain getting stuff off my chest when its hard for me to express how i feel

    and kam ill hit you back tonight , bump
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  13. FinesseNYC

    FinesseNYC FinessetheGreat

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    beat is mad amateurish son. the lyrics are deep though.

    i actually like the hook. sounds like you passionate about music forreal man.
    this some straight shit. like you on an atmosphere tip..poetic


    drop some feedback
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=914421
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    Neruk Runky Runky

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    thanks, i got you soon
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    Neruk Runky Runky

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    bump.. startin to hit links now
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  17. kaveh

    kaveh New Member

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    listenin..
    i got this beat! lol Rockit Productions
    yeh it sounds like your very passionate about music man
    voice goes very nice over this beat
    dope flow
    dope delivery
    this kinda gettin slept on man, this aint bad at all, im really feelin this..
    great track overall man!

    Return the Favor:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=914538
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    Neruk Runky Runky

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    ^ I hit you back, and thanks!
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