Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Neruk, Jul 22, 2005.
qualitys cool ...beat sounds like a jazzy phae reject lolol
flows coo tho.... like when u speeding up n shit rhyme scheme coulda been more complex dats all ima say n it woulda sounded better... deliverys pretty good its jus ur voice im not a fan of really.... lyrics iight... decent commercial lyrics..... n yeh the chorus wasnt too catchy n yo u know jus so u know when u make commercial songs dont jus say the same shit u see on tv cause u gota have a ear for what sounds good n what will work alota mainstream cats dont know have that which is why they flop, so basically what im saying is make a club song yes but say something different like when u go to the club dont u notice certain things about how girls act or the dj or the ambience or something n then write about it n make ppl relate to it n then make it catchy so ppl be like ohh yeh that happened to me lolol n then they will sing along n u will get good sales n shit thats how u gota do it... neways this was a cool song..... n sorry for my long feed but jus tryna make ppl know how to do a club song n shit stop being cliche pppl....
PLZ RETURN FEED
word, i hit you back
im gonna for sure up this at least 89 more times
ok i lied last 1up
not really feelin you on the club steeze
you got skills -- and this is on point from a technical standpoint but i just cant get into the concept/beat it just seems a bit cheesy
i say put the skills to use over some more original shit
i respect ya grind tho
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