Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Neruk, Jul 22, 2005.
I cant be me! People will laugh because i have no toungue
I'll take your word for it
Beat was tight, but the track was plain lame. You sound too white to be doing these kind of tracks and it ends up sounding like a joke.
You dont know shit. Im Peach. And i sound peach.
aight... beat does sound mad clubbish - but it sounds dope
that hook is pretty cool ... wait i dont think thats the hook lol the flow is dope - the beginning sounds like a hook but flow and energy is dope and im sure thats all u wanted
hook is nice n simple
2nd verse - i didnt like the start(2nd verse gets worse) but again - flow and energy is dope so it sounded good
3rd verse - i hated the repeating shit but sum ppl like that - overall this was pretty good for a club track - i didnt like that 2nd verse and 3rd verse it gets worse shit but whatever - good job
fuck, soundclick is down lol.. ill peep in a minute...
beat is dopeeee
wow im impressed so far man, at the intro and shit.. sounds sickk
Verse 1 sound nice, flow and energy is on point
hook is dope, easy but catchy
Woooo @ the fast rappin on 2nd verse man, good shit
3rd verse also on point
track is dope overall man!, im feelin this
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lol sounds like you're trying waay too hard.. mad sugar & pop, just not for me man lol..
cant please em all.. whatever floats your chode
Beat is hot, on that club vibe...
Lyrics are on point although i think it would flow a little nicer if the flow was, hmm, a little more simple. I say simple only cuz of "commercial acceptability" but for the sake of hiphop, it was hot.
shit was tight.... beat is kinda weird.... but its all good. but yo flow and lyrics are tight stay up
p.s. its time for u to do some metal-rap-death shit!!!
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Ok this aint a song's topic...allthough woulda been nice if u had sum crazy lyrics but u don't really need it....this is a song where flowing ill an delivering wit energy is most important.....def feeling the flow....an liking the delivery where u slow up an fluctuate ya voice....the hook coulda alot stronger...u shoulda layered it more an maybe had sum addlibs around it to give it more energy....your quality is nice....the beat is real generic but nice......this was a decent song for what it was....stay up son.........1
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