N.E. - Round 2: 14. Millz -vs- 6. Got Life?

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  1. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

    RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ


    The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced



    • Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
    • Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
    • Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
    • During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
    • Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.

    Voting:
    • If you do not show you can’t vote in any matches. .
    • No bias votes! If you have a personal investment in wanting someone to lose, whether because that member voted against you once, or you just don’t like that person, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match. If have a personal investment in wanting someone to win, whether because they’re crew member, or because you want to face that person in the next week’s brackets, whatever the reason, do not vote in the match.
    • ”Bias” must be confirmed by a Moderator.
    • 3-ways are inevitable. In order to provide a tie-breaker in a 3-way, you are now required to indicate in what order the contestants finished (1st, 2nd, 3rd).
      anyone who does not show or vote is suspended one week and must sign-in again to be inserted the following week.



    Topics: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1032063




    From now on if you don't vote in the tournament and win your match, you will be deducted a vote from your next match for every vote didn't give the previous week. If you show late and your partner allows the extension as long as it’s less than a day late, it can count, but you will be deducted 2 votes for showing late regardless.

    These rules will be put in effect starting now and won’t be modified again. I’m not bending or breaking anymore rules for anybody.


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    Must READ: You must pick one of each topic to give your opponent some protection from choices and also so there isn't several verses written on the same topic that everyone has picked to be used.

    So pick one of the Title and Phrases, one of the Quotes and one of the Pics for your opponent.

    Thursday is the deadline for choosing topics or your opponent will get to pick their own topic. Topical choices must be posted in match threads by deadline.


    All other rules that are applied in the league will also be enforced for regulating the tournament. If you're not familiar with the rules of the RSTL, please read them.


    The only difference will be that in this tournament, your opponent will get to pick your topics for you. Topics must be picked and posted within the match thread within 1 day. If it's not posted, the opponent of the person that didn't pick a topic in time will get to choose his/her own topic. You must choose one of each kind of topic for some variety.


    So... topics will be up Wednesday 12am PST every week and topical choices are due Thursday 12am PST and verses are due Monday 12am PST, 3am EST, 8am Greenwich with votes due Wednesday 12 am PST, 3am EST, 8am Greenwich

    Also, there will be no recycling allowed. Nothing you've ever posted anywhere online will be allowed. The mods will be checking verses for authenticity with online search engines.

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  2. _millz_

    _millz_ New Member

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    yo...you down for choosing our own topics?
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  3. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    before I forget...


    here are your topics buddy


    makes this tournament's concept actually have a point...otherwise this would just be "random tournament with nothing special about it":

    Anxiety issues

    Those who make peaceful revolution impossible will make violent revolution inevitable.
    John F. Kennedy


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  4. _millz_

    _millz_ New Member

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    wtf dude......you cant agree and say i can pick my own topic and then edit that out with topics dude...wtf...this is the first time ive seen these topics...if you really wanted to change your mind you should have posted so i realized something was up....fuck you..herb... i aint switchin topics day of.
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  5. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    Got Lifes requesting a slight extension to Monday 12am UK time. You can have until then as well Millz if you accept.
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  6. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    ooohhh, sorry Millz, but I think he pulled a move on you.. kinda bluff bullshit if he did agree to not have topics and then editted that out. However, I didn't see it and even if he did, it doesn't actually break the tournament rules.

    anyway though, you have to grant this extension.... regular due time is posted in the title thread so this will be a 4 hour extension if you allow it.

    smh@ yall needing another extension...
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  7. _millz_

    _millz_ New Member

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    ill allow the extension if im allowed to finish on the topic i orginally choose and have a piece all but finished for.
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  8. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    lol... well, I guess we have to wait for lifeless to accept that now...
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  9. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    THAT's 3 Times your homo, I can't raise a child so i'm going to be a retard self has posted in my thread without casting a vote...you're not voting on this match DIC...simple and plain...saying what I said is not racist at all...if I wanted to be racist...trust me I could be, but i'm not...hence you're still a reject..

    Seriously...go end your life looking to nit pick shit with me...you're a whack faggot...

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  10. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    Karma's Quarrels...

    The bare trees cast a masquerade for those portrayed,
    In every line that I write as words hide in the shade,
    Part of me tries to escape but can't fathom a fate,
    Where I don't gra.pple for grapes, it's a menacing trait,
    Of life passing me by, I sit back and laugh at the sky,
    The laugh turns to a cry-
    Perpetually wheezing darts at my head, asking me why?
    I'm maskin my pride and basking inside of this casket, I lie.
    Such a cackling cry is heard from the window that I can't deny,
    Death seems sweeter when you're just waiting to find,
    The reason that the demons have escaped with your mind,
    It's a jungle sometimes, so I stay devoted to rhymes,
    Having seen the path to my crimes followed like mimes-
    Upon an invisible wall where i'm clawing and scraping,
    Oh I can't take it...fighting against all of the raping,
    Meanwhile the guards sit making bets while videotaping,
    And it never ends until another throat is wide open gaping,
    So my heart keeps escaping, leaving me colder at night,
    Yet the gleam of my plight is why they leave me to fight,
    Knowing I might, just one day snap and glare at the site,
    Of a man laying beneath my perilous right, a heretic's bite,
    Because the devil takes flight and gets high off the blood,
    As i'm beating dude senseless, the halls start to flood,
    To me it's a hollowing thud, that leaves me empty inside,
    But my patience resides, in a part of my brain that collides,
    With my veins and it thrives off the pain in these lines,
    Leaving me waiting to blow like a field full of mines.

    It's funny though cause I use to be so patient, I debated,
    My actions before acting, unlike those that were sedated,
    Yet it didn't matter when I saw him between her knees,
    In the next instant she's at my knees, begging please,
    But loving her has been my disease, So I think it's swell,
    To bury him past the trees, a winterfresh hell-
    Of a home, or maybe I should have put holes in his dome,
    As my hands grew steadily prone towards making his home,
    Six feet deeper-
    Motherfuck this cheater, as a frenzy elopes with my mind,
    All the work...all the grind...
    But if I'd rewind you could hone in on the fact,
    That I turned my back, indeed this was my deadliest act,
    Leaving no lovers in tact, my life lost meaning and that,
    Brings me forth to when I thought I could play with a gat,
    But the shells went astray and with that, a little girl died,
    It's fucked with my pride...breaking me down,
    I can't help it, can't take it, can't stay escaping the crown,
    As i'm haunted-
    By memories flaunted, of a white dress turning dark maroon,
    Enveloping myself in the ever flowing tears of the moon,
    So I tried to find God in the midst, but it seems he exists,
    Only to people that twist his words and persist.

    But loving her has been my disease, So I think it's swell,
    To bury him past the trees, a winterfresh hell-
    Of a home, or maybe I should have put holes in his dome,
    As my hands grew steadily prone towards making his home,
    Six feet deeper-
    Motherfuck this cheater, as a frenzy elopes with my mind,
    All the work...all the grind...
    But if I'd rewind you could hone in on the fact,
    That I turned my back, indeed this was my deadliest act,


    So when I cheated on her...I should have killed myself,
    Instead I kept living a lie, let the Karma run dry...
    And one day killed an innocent girl,
    Who's smile haunts me as her ghost does a twirl....
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  11. _millz_

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    "Lost in the Rain"


    "We travel through the distance, the wind is at our backs,
    and we erase our steps to give us no witness to our past.
    So secrets keep within us, and are hidden by our laughs.
    While the weepings of forgiveness tend to rip us from our paths."


    The gentle zephyr blew down the coulee valley grass
    softly testing at the roots of the bloom of summer's past.
    The time had finally come as a blessing to the truth
    as I spied a flight of doves in an event of timely muse.
    They had commanding presence as they climbed across the sun,
    and had released an amber essence, defining what was love.
    I was traveling off to grace, and my peace was ever present
    as I walked across terrain to release my own depression.
    So I peddle down the path, from my past in soft escape
    without ever looking back as a traveler lost in space.
    As I entered through the foliage, admist the hollow trees
    I couldnt help but notice that my footsteps followed me.
    My past wasn't etched with love. I had felt so hopeless
    that I was always messin up, and never held my focus.
    I was abused by my parents when I wasnt man enough
    until i formed a cold appearance that couldnt handle trust.
    I tried to stick to my faith hoping that god would here it,
    but he didnt exist in a place sulken and robbed of spirit.
    Was this his test of love that i must cringe and face,
    or just enough to dump me into the lonely dimmest place.
    The horizons glow of crimson spray had shone and stretched above
    towards a special hidden place as daylights death had come.
    Dusk approached and stemmed to night with all her vicious hate
    with creeping hopes to spread her fright in any given place.
    Beating to thier sick parade, shadows began a quest for life,
    and almost as if to lift the strain, I saw the heavens cry.
    The tears had fallen on the trees, formed in drips of rain,
    and played a song upon the leaves, glistening mists of jade.

    "We travel through the distance, the wind is at our backs,
    and we erase our steps to give us no witness to our past.
    So secrets keep within us, and are hidden by our laughs.
    While the weepings of forgiveness tend to rip us from our paths."


    So i peddle down the path, from my past in soft escape
    without ever looking back as a traveler lost in space.
    I exit through the foliage, fleeing what had caused me all the pain,
    and I cannot help but notice my that footstep's lost in the rain

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  12. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    I told your stupid fat ass, there will be no racist shit allowed in here. White idiots sayin nigga is racist shit... you're not permitted to do.... period. Do it again, you will be kicked the fuck out of the league. Try me if you want bitch.

    you were already warned dumb ass. lol... you don't tell me wtf to do bitch. I run this place, get it straight ugly ass.


    PS.. Aye idiot, you don't run shit here. you don't get to ban votes, try being less of a punk ass fag and maybe you'd feel more respected. but yea, I am voting on this match. Deal with it... haven't read it yet, but I will before due dates are over.

    white punks calling me a nigga... it's racist, I don't give a fuck what you think it is cuz you're not entitled to a fuckin opinion anyway... you're not black dumb ass. go get a dictionary and look up racism since you can't seem to grasp the meaning.


    SMH... and I fuckin dare you to do it again. It will be the last match you have in here under that wack ass name.
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  13. Linxz

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    oh word....Ayo Got Life jump'n out his skin like that!
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  14. MrMister

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    vote - millz

    GL - this was a really vague piece I was lost in it like all the time
    the wording was nice and each line was nice but it didnt make a whole IMO
    it read away easy and only at the ending did I get the rest but it still
    didnt really make the lines harder cus I understood them it still made them
    a bunch of nice lines put together nice effort tho
    I can see what you were trying to do but it didnt really succeed

    Millz - same goes for you really vague piece but at the same time the emotion
    running through it was nice cus you kept it on topic but vague at the same time
    it read away mad quick and eventho I was lost at some times I just kept going on
    cus the words made that possible so ya flow is real nice

    Millz took this one with his imagery and his flow Gl came nice but
    it just didnt do it for me this time around

    there you go
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  15. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    well seeing how neither one of you really followed the rules with the topics.... the penalties will just offset and mean no penalty at all.

    gravyness....

    GotLife, this started strong, even the flow was really well done as I was expecting the content to develop, but it didn't really. SEems like you used the topic anxiety issues, but I don't know because you didn't name what topic you chose so that's your bad. The rhymes impressed me as it started off, almost like it wasn't written by you at all. The second half seems more like the kind of shit I'd expect from you though. It didn't have a good transition, the flow was simple and the wording totally changed too like there was another writer on that segment. The emotional development is all I can give any credit to in the second part of this verse. It seems like it was put together from 2 different verses though and they didn't go too well together.

    Millz, this was really poetical and well worded with an excellent touch on the narration of it all. The flow was very smooth, the wording was well developed and mature and the personality of the person portrayed was well developed within the depressing holds of life.

    The tears had fallen on the trees, formed in drips of rain,
    and played a song upon the leaves, glistening mists of jade.

    That part really stuck in my brain and made read it over. I was feeling the imagery of that rhyme along with the wording and rhyme of it... it was a perfect rhyme in every element. This was a very smooth read..... clear cut and poetical at the same time, but keeping the rhymes strong, which I appreciate in verses.

    Vote Millz
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  16. ConstantFlows

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    1st vote...here wo go

    Got life -- I was impressed by the rhymes@the start, but then u started repeating rhyme words and they stuck out in my head making me think more about how u wrote this than what u were writing...at first I thought u were going with an indirect metaphor but when I got to the second stanza and saw u meant it all literally I was dissapointed, it ended up to be another cliche ass thing with nothing to it really, just a loop in time of a demented story.....the stories acctually not demented but in the mind of the character it would be. U didn't develop the writers voice corectly, he felt to calm to be beating his victims, usually people beating people don't use words like 'plight' you should've just focused on imagery and raw emotion instead of trying to coat it with rhymes

    Millz -- I was feeling this, ur strongest attribute was utilization of words, the writing was focused, very clear, the rhymes were crisp and the story, while poetical, made for a very enjoying and refreshing read. I like the footsteps follow me line, not only is it conceptually thought provoking it fit well with your verse. Props on outshining gl after he tried to cheat u


    Vote millz for overall more rounded and crisper piece
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  17. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    Dude wrote a verse on a topic that wasn't given to him...he didn't give me a topic so I don't see what it matters if I listed the topic or not...

    This tourney is biased as fuck and some bullshit...the fuck is the point of me pickin his topic if he can just go ahead and do w/e the fuck he wants anyway.
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  18. _millz_

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    stfu....you agreed to the choose your own topic....and then when you thought you would need an extension you edited your fuckin post....baron confirmed it...you told him it...face it...im better than you.....better luck next tourney homie.
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  19. Brains

    Brains The Phantom

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    ^ maybe cuz you agreed to pick your own topics which nobody should be doing anyway because it kills the whole purpose of the tourney.

    Anyhow

    ScornedBiter- Your fat ass started out solid but that didn't last at all. One thing I've noticed about your verses is that I tend to have little or no clue what your talking about untill the twist, which is something that is unique to you and you only. I actually thought you would have beaten millz this week because I really didnt like his piece last week, but in this match you weren't nearly as clear, expressive or smooth as he was.

    Millz- This was really nice in my opinion. I liked that traveler lost in space line. Your ryhme scheme was consistent and much more complex than what you had last week. This was vague too but it was symbolic and well thought out. Word choice and description were on point and I dont think they fell off, but instead stayed very consistent.

    Vote - Millz
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  20. Brains

    Brains The Phantom

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    That wasn't pointed at you millz, it was pointed at biter.
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