My Task

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  1. Wicked5744

    Wicked5744 Last I awoke, it was morn

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    To sit without words to place down on the paper,
    Is to sit alone.
    To sit blind,
    Sit without a purpose and mind,
    So I take my hands,
    Help them find the path to take with the pen.
    Let their magic create worlds all could feel,
    All could hear,
    And the blind could see.
    Such a potion spilled onto this surface.
    How I could pass by a day of death, I do not know.
    But to be here now to write this passage into sight,
    This throughway for the blind,
    Is simply sanctuary.
    So sit without purpose I do not,
    Sit without words I will not,
    And to see, I always shall.
    These are words toward poetry.
    These are words from a missionary,
    A visionary,
    A clarity that allows me to enter serenity,
    Tranquility,
    What ever you wish to mean peace in the vocabulary.
    This is my task as a word in the sentence of God.
    I am the translation for the sightless,
    I will be the path for the lost.
    test
  2. Soular Guided

    Soular Guided Soulful Dike...

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    Nice... this seemed distant to me.. more sporadic than anything which added to the complex effect.. nice as far as I'm concerned!
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  3. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    have you posted this before?

    dope piece but it seems like i've read this before...


    This is my task as a word in the sentence of God.
    I am the translation for the sightless,
    I will be the path for the lost.

    dope...really pulled the entire piece together

    UPin
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  4. Wicked5744

    Wicked5744 Last I awoke, it was morn

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    Never posted this before. I might have posted the concept.
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  5. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Nice approach to get out of writers block. Every technique I try to come up with to help me out of it doesnt never seem to work. Just gotta sit out the days and suffer while I wait for it to come back to me! Great piece though wicked


    one luv
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  6. Lord RAH

    Lord RAH Grandeur's illuminant

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    I thought you really got your flow going to wards then end and then I thought....WHY DID YOU STOP????
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  7. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    ^^ i thought the same way as Lord Rah

    good piece... wicked

    peace tooshort
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