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  1. Tacky Jones

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    honestly, this is hard to write
    breaks my heart to try, i almost start to cry
    feelin dark inside, i bark a sigh
    but i gotta get this outside of my hardened mind
    you came into my life when i was young
    and was kinda enough to not be the type to judge
    gave me the type of love, that i could fuck...
    ...up and still be the bright light to shine your life up
    unconditional from the get go
    unprovisional, thats why its so hard to let go
    youre supposed to be here because i said so
    but you're gone, and thats why im so upset, yo
    i miss my kid sister and wish to kiss her
    chin until my lips've blistered
    wish her to be here, could grant it if i were a wizard
    but i wish the lord to lift her as my soul turns to a blizzard

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    i miss my sister
    wheres she at
    i cant find her, so im shook like a scaredy cat
    i miss my sister
    i want her back
    i love you so much, lets just leave it at that
    i miss my sister

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    11 years you were always there
    to cheer me up when i had tears or i was scared
    and im prepared to say there will never be another
    i jus want you to know, down the road you'll see your brother
    the cancer spread, it was a fast death
    got to hold you close, feel your last breath
    bawled like a baby, laying besides you
    only deep down i knew it was the right move
    the fact this is about a dog shouldnt take away
    the fact there is no worse pain than havin your pet taken away
    beggin to gain another day, but its jus a waste
    cuz i could never let go, i'd just want another day
    and when otheres say these puppies will numb the pain
    i jus look at them like that was dumb to say
    cuz i wish she could understand if i said this to her
    we had to get two, no dog out there is half the one you were

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    i miss my sister
    wheres she at
    i cant find her, so im shook like a scaredy cat
    i miss my sister
    i want her back
    i love you so much, lets just leave it at that
    i miss my sister

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    2 legs, 2 arms, and 4 paws
    my baby girl, youre always in my thoughts
    and im stuck, idunno what now
    i love you always, my sister, TouchDown

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    i had a dream the night you passed, i was hopin to
    you came back, but the tumors in your throat did too
    and there was these rings on you, chokin you
    and you fell dead instantly after i broke them loose
    it took me a while to realized i free'd you
    from suffering with a throat you couldnt breathe through
    girl i need you, you held out as long as you could
    and in my heart you've stood, even if youre gone for good
    i jus miss my kid sister, and jus wish to kiss her
    chin until my lips've blistered
    wish her to be here, even if wishes isnt true
    i wish you could listen to me when i say the family misses you
    i miss my kid sister and jus wish to kiss her
    chin, until my lips've blistered
    wish her to be here, could grant it if i were a wizard
    but i wish the lord to lift her as my soul turns to a blizzard
    i miss my sister...
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    Great flow,, details, structure, and all .. Third verse took it up too... what a story ... I'm gonna go cry now .. this must have been hard to write. I can tell you had great feelings for her.
    It isn't over here, though ... one day, you will be reunited.
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    lol it was hard, but i think it makes it easier that it took me 3 months to write it. i'd start and i'd jus be like "fuck i cant do this now". but yeah, this is prolly my favorite i've ever written. thanks man.
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    Ever record any a this?

    Come drop a couple bars in the cypher section biatch.
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    lol i wanna record after i learn how to make beats. i dont have a mic or nothing. just the shit built into my laptop.
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    damn dude. wasnt expecting that. that first song you fuckin ripped. dope shit man

    and the reason im trying to learn to make beats first is cuz i flat out cant rap lmao. no flow at all. gotta work on that also. but saying i wanna learn beat making first is a good cover up.
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    haha

    don't put it off any longer. You have the tools and practice makes perfect.

    You also still have your youth. I have maybe 3 years left till I'm corny.
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    haha true. eh, and if i suck, i dont have to show anyone. lmao. itll be like it never happened.
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    This is true. I originally started rapping because I hated everything that was out. I basically made my own shit to bump in my car.
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    lol that beat for whats wrong is sick. was that a soundclick one or your boy make it?
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    He made them all. He's twice as sick now if you can imagine that.

    I haven't posted new shit in a while.
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    lol you got Stace rapping too?

    but fuck. does he have a soundclick?
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    haha no. I tried for a while to get her on.

    He doesn't, but I will get back to you with his myspace of facebook. He's broke as fuck so he'll want to sell some shit. Don't let him rip you off though. He's dope as fuck but he's still a nobody. Don't forget that.
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    lol well im not gonna buy nothing until im good, but i wanna check his shit out. bookmark him for later, possibly
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    I'll aim you some shit when I get home. He's a sick rapper too. SIIIICK. His new songs have some of his new beats. I'll show you some other tracks of me and him also. You'll like.
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    word. pm me when you're on aim. ill hop on
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