My Sample Game Has Improved For Real Check It Out... Ok's Finest

Discussion in 'Beats/Producers' started by KWICBOYZ, May 27, 2005.

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  1. KWICBOYZ

    KWICBOYZ New Member

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    ok this is a remake of my 'Beat 2' except i just used 1 loop but i just kept the drums bangin and switched up some stuff... my 1st "KANYE STYLE BEAT" so go ahead and gimme honest feed and as always ill hit u back!!

    JUST E BEATS

    ITS CALED "BEAT 11"
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  2. Blackhart

    Blackhart BH The General

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    ok yea compared too some of ya other stuff yes ya sample game went way up im lovin dis beat. man if i wasn't so broke id buy it but yea good shit return the favor
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  3. midwestTHUG

    midwestTHUG New Member

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    returnin tha favor
    samples aiigh...aint really my steez (sample beats) but you mos def layin it down on this...bass sound hott...drums is real simple...should be a lil mo complex...pianos iz hott go good wit dis shit
    keep doin dis i could see you gettin way good reallll soon *****
    stay up n be ez
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  4. DjayCasper

    DjayCasper Eh Fuck It.

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    nice lil sample here
    its effective it kinda pulls u in... the piano complicates it...too much man, mute that..
    maybe use a higher note..or slower it so you dont hear it too well

    the beat is straight on its own
    normally im a fiend for the sound the piano makes, butttt
    i dunno that didnt blend well
    but the sample was nice man

    allz you gotta do is keep workin at it. everyone has room to improve
    an if u like ur own shit, fuck what other people think.
    keep practicin wit the samples
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  5. Milli Monotone

    Milli Monotone Mr. Like I Give A

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    Beat 11 - first thing i notice is i dont like the drums, they dont fit the sample, too much reverb on the kick, cymbals/percussion would go nice with the multiple snare hits, i like the piano on the hook but i dont think it fits this track too well, alone it could be hot or maybe if u take off the vocal sample it would help

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12039956#post12039956
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  6. KWICBOYZ

    KWICBOYZ New Member

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    ok kool kool stuff preciate the feed....ya DUBL i wuz thnkn bout the verby kick prob need 2 take it out and ill look n 2 the perc... /w tha piano i wuz feelin it mayb ill turn it down or suttin but ya

    hittn back all links now
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  9. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    Just E-74
    -This can't be the right one. This isn't sampled; This is synthed out.

    OK, Beat 11
    -Voice gives it the Kanye/Just Blaze quality. Otherwise, this is a cool rock-solunding break. Sounds like you supplemented the track with a little live piano. Pretty good.
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  10. IkeDomino

    IkeDomino New Member

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    sample sounds nice, I like the vocals in the bck they fit clean, the only problem is the drums, u did step ya game up and keep buildin g.
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  11. KWICBOYZ

    KWICBOYZ New Member

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    thnx all this is my 1st sample wit vocals so ya... thnx 4hittin me back
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    oops i mean 4 :)
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  17. KWICBOYZ

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    thnx man u 2
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  18. Lou-Ville Sluggah

    Lou-Ville Sluggah Aka Louis Premier

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    pretty tight. I think the bassline drowns out the sample a little too much, maybe a crash at the begining of each bar would make it tight too. the snare is ok, could probably turn it down a notch. What exactly is the sample saying? I know its the chipmunks but i can't understand the words.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=892580
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  19. KWICBOYZ

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    ok thanks l ville...its sayin ricky,ricky was a young boy.. ricky was a young boy, he had a heart of stone(on tha hook) thanks im hittin ur link now
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  20. I SUCK AT POKER < DONKEY

    I SUCK AT POKER < DONKEY who fuen CARES

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    why would u want the hook to say that for one? also the drums are STIFF. the bassline sounds off on a couple notes to me too, either that or the patch u used doesnt fit. samples aiight, might wanna step ya sample game up a bit more.
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