My Nigga For life

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  1. Poetic Concept

    Poetic Concept New Member

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    This is for my best friend...just happened just ventin the only way i kno how right now

    Laying in a room with tubes and a oxygen mask,
    7 shots, the cops confiscated a life and found no contraband
    I asked myself the question
    If I was there to step in; would it have progressed then,
    I’m filled with an aggression that I’ve never felt before,
    I’ve explored not knowing I cant help no more,
    19 shots in his door, after he took 3;
    he gave back 4 while he lied on floor; bleeding
    How should we perceive it
    Then leaving him barely breathing; for 4 hours
    Family outside receiving messages, he’s not cooperating, that’s nonsense
    Its kind of hard surrendering, when your lying unconscious
    My conscious is in a constant state of division
    Calling the men in blue heroes; who put him in this condition
    A death sentence was given, man I miss em
    Real nigga for sure, I’ll hold the pot he piss in
    Most niggas stand in back and listen, and play a position
    I grabbed my smith n wanted to smash in the district
    He’s not submissive, he lives cause he’s loved by his kindred
    Officers of law, flawed taken off their badges,
    The madness grabbed them,
    I could fathom the phantoms they manage to carry cause I have them
    Actors of a stage, illuminated by rage, not possible without hate
    Left him to die and face fate; but today we pray for each other
    United cause another brother has fallen cause of his color
    Reach out, leave without doubt, And pray that he’ll be Ok
    A silver lining still lives, when thoughts seem gray
    Another day another wish, Even on days like this
    When all hope fades and he lays like this
    Put our hope in GOD cause miracles still exist.
    RIO I LOVE YOU BRO!
    test
  2. Artiphax

    Artiphax New Member

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    bruh...this shit was really dope..felt this shit..RIP to your friend..

    by the way u wrote this i can tell u can spit so,if not this, iwould like to hear sumthin recorded....good shit man and again my condolence goes out to u n whomever else is close to him.

    u think u can peep sumthin else i did? would appreciate it...the post called i gets it in...pz
    test
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