My Last Poem

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by iLL Script., Jun 9, 2004.

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  1. DaJackle

    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    very creative...i liked this alot, the personification of the paper really helped express your debt to the paper...very heartfelt and i think as writers, we all can relate one way or another...but sadly, though this is the first piece i've read of yours (i think), it was great, i enjoyed it a lot...good luck with what you do, maybe we'll see you again...PEACE!
    test
  2. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Ayo man stop fucking upping this shit, I think everyone in the poetry realm and their momma has replied to this piece, let it go.
    test
  3. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    kING YOU AIN'T GOIN KNOW WHERE...
    yOU'er GOING TO STAY RIGHT HERE,
    wRITE HERE, continue to cHANGE WAYS HERE...
    wHY WOULD YOU LEAVE HERE,
    kING YOU BETTER NOT GO NO WERE..
    Then I might have to become KINg...lol. Nice piece... very good piece...
    test
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