My Last Poem

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by iLL Script., Jun 9, 2004.

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  1. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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    i just don't have anythin' more 2 say dats new. thankz everyone on tha love :)
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  2. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    "I start to think, and then I sink into the paper like I was ink. When I'm writin' I get trapped inbetween the lines, I escape when I've finished the rhyme"-RAKIM

    That's what this reminded me of...not gonna say bye, but rather I'll see you later....
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  3. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    There is always something to be said
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  4. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    Tony a poet always has something to say. You need to be inspired is all! Please do come back!

    That piece was excellent and so are you!
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  5. InTheStars

    InTheStars Reflective

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    This is an excellent farewell piece no doubt, and I am not one to try to make anyone do anyhting they don't want, but...it will be a real shame to see you go. You are an extremely excellent poet and I am honored to have read some of your poetry. I wish you the best of luck in all of your endevours.
    MUCH LUV
    LUCK
    AND HAPPINESS
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  6. v-Dynamo Kidd-v

    v-Dynamo Kidd-v Dynamite

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    wow this was nice...very expressive and deep...explains alot on the subject...this was great tony...u shouldnt quit.
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  7. Killumin

    Killumin Be happy with what u got!

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    keep ur head up in there son and the pen flowing like ur wrds

    deep shit no doubt


    see ur wrds soon on the pages

    -1- [fro]
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  8. Killumin

    Killumin Be happy with what u got!

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    Black Liquid its so easy to confide yourself to an inanimate object, everyone needs outlets. a notebook is like an inner sanctum, if you read a broads diary you may as well seen her naked. if youre gonna be out, this was a good joint leave with, nice reminder

    very true


    there is allways shit to say or ppl dying etc so never give up !!
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  9. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    DAMN...all hail the king....this has to be one of the best pieces ive seen from u....i havent been here in a while...but this was definetly a good first piece to read....loved this...every single stanza...every single line...
    And what u mean u leavin?? shit...u jus got here!!

    When there wasn't a friend
    that could lend me his shoulder,
    I have laidened u, page,
    filled u border to border.

    ^^^^tight

    mad love
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  10. FukkedUPKidR

    FukkedUPKidR Guest

    You know it's all very beautiful...you are a wonderful writer and I hope for all of us that you never stop writing.. let this be a break..and only that.


    thanks for sharing :)
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  11. poeticSCRIPT.

    poeticSCRIPT. National Champs

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    where do you think your going? get your ass back here and write damnit! lol for a farewell piece this was a great choice, great read
    take care cuz
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  12. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    this is his last post people

    we got to keep it on the first page for a little longer

    lol
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  13. Jafaar Bond

    Jafaar Bond Guest

    unfortunately this poem doesn't mirror your situation at all.

    something like this would be more appropriate:

    'i stole somebodies pictures, and said they were mine,
    i have low self esteem, now is that a crime,
    lying on the net, happy that girls said i was fine,
    but it turns out I'm a herb with no spine'

    bye bye Tony.
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  14. Clarksvegas_Dan

    Clarksvegas_Dan Registered Voter

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    I read it a few times. Loved it. Sad to hear it's the last.
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  15. illpoetical

    illpoetical raising the bar everyday

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    you've laid under my pen


    your pen is a mighty one, tight piece hope to see you back

    ip
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  16. Zeta

    Zeta New Member

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO don't go! You have too much to offer the newcomers and oldtimers as well, yet I guess I can respect your decision. I haven't even been around myself really, but I like coming back and seeing ya'll still here, nice drop, peace
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  17. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    well im going to post once more!!!

    last post, and great piece dawg!!!
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  18. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    read this post people


    its his last piece............................ lol
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  19. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    Read the frickin post


    king tony was one of the best in this realm........
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  20. ChyllTyrant

    ChyllTyrant AmIEternalOrAnEternalist?

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    this was really nice. i liked it alot.

    don't stop writing!

    PEACE
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