Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by iLL Script., Jun 9, 2004.
i just don't have anythin' more 2 say dats new. thankz everyone on tha love
"I start to think, and then I sink into the paper like I was ink. When I'm writin' I get trapped inbetween the lines, I escape when I've finished the rhyme"-RAKIM
That's what this reminded me of...not gonna say bye, but rather I'll see you later....
There is always something to be said
Tony a poet always has something to say. You need to be inspired is all! Please do come back!
That piece was excellent and so are you!
This is an excellent farewell piece no doubt, and I am not one to try to make anyone do anyhting they don't want, but...it will be a real shame to see you go. You are an extremely excellent poet and I am honored to have read some of your poetry. I wish you the best of luck in all of your endevours.
wow this was nice...very expressive and deep...explains alot on the subject...this was great tony...u shouldnt quit.
keep ur head up in there son and the pen flowing like ur wrds
deep shit no doubt
see ur wrds soon on the pages
Black Liquid its so easy to confide yourself to an inanimate object, everyone needs outlets. a notebook is like an inner sanctum, if you read a broads diary you may as well seen her naked. if youre gonna be out, this was a good joint leave with, nice reminder
there is allways shit to say or ppl dying etc so never give up !!
DAMN...all hail the king....this has to be one of the best pieces ive seen from u....i havent been here in a while...but this was definetly a good first piece to read....loved this...every single stanza...every single line...
And what u mean u leavin?? shit...u jus got here!!
When there wasn't a friend
that could lend me his shoulder,
I have laidened u, page,
filled u border to border.
You know it's all very beautiful...you are a wonderful writer and I hope for all of us that you never stop writing.. let this be a break..and only that.
thanks for sharing
where do you think your going? get your ass back here and write damnit! lol for a farewell piece this was a great choice, great read
take care cuz
this is his last post people
we got to keep it on the first page for a little longer
unfortunately this poem doesn't mirror your situation at all.
something like this would be more appropriate:
'i stole somebodies pictures, and said they were mine,
i have low self esteem, now is that a crime,
lying on the net, happy that girls said i was fine,
but it turns out I'm a herb with no spine'
bye bye Tony.
I read it a few times. Loved it. Sad to hear it's the last.
you've laid under my pen
your pen is a mighty one, tight piece hope to see you back
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO don't go! You have too much to offer the newcomers and oldtimers as well, yet I guess I can respect your decision. I haven't even been around myself really, but I like coming back and seeing ya'll still here, nice drop, peace
well im going to post once more!!!
last post, and great piece dawg!!!
read this post people
its his last piece............................ lol
Read the frickin post
king tony was one of the best in this realm........
this was really nice. i liked it alot.
don't stop writing!
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