My Heart Is Broken

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  1. Poetic Pain

    Poetic Pain I Am Hip Hop

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    Your mission is complete
    My heart is broken and my soul is depleted
    How can you do this to me, remember you said you loved me
    How we used to hang out and you used to hug me
    You broke my heart, it can never be repaired
    You got me feeling depressed and scared
    I ain't gon lie I still think about you everyday
    How could a friendship so right, go so wrong
    How could you leave your bestfriend here all alone
    You know you out of line
    But that's ok because there won't be a next time
    Your the only girl I ever had feelings for
    Now I feel like you don't want me no more
    I was the bestfriend that treated you better than your boyfriends
    Now I'm sitting here sad with paper and a pen
    I never thought that I would be writing this poem
    I never though there would be a day
    I wouldn't here your voice on the other end of that phone
    I hate to say it, but I miss you
    But my heart is broken
    So its only right for me to diss you
    All I ever wanted was to hug and kiss you
    But you've broken my heart and shattered my world
    I just wanna know how could you do this girl
    You was my air, but now I'm choking
    I guess this is what it feels like when your heart is broken
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Lately, pieces in the Realm have been of heartbreak or just love. I thought this piece exhaled all your inner thoughts and heartbreak that you had been going through. Asking questions, such as why did you say you loved me, when you didn't? I thought this was overall, a pretty nice piece that my ex and I could relate to completely. My blessings..
    test
  3. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    welcome to the realm!

    i agree with root up there, there have been alot of heartbroken poems lately, but to me those are the best... cuz 80% of the time, they hit home... as did this one to me...

    "You got me feeling depressed and scared
    I ain't gon lie I still think about you everyday
    How could a friendship so right, go so wrong
    How could you leave your bestfriend here all alone"


    damn... so tru...
    test
  4. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    having your heart broken sucks.......gotta be strong though......it takes time but keep your head up man
    test
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