My Heart Broken...Just For You...

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  1. Gemini_TwIIn

    Gemini_TwIIn a.k.a. Sydephex

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    I looked back on how much i loved you
    it strangled me so much on what i went through
    i saw ya ask out another man, heart broken
    soakin love, has been drained, since that day
    i kept my love from you, i wouldnt let myself say
    how much it hurt, and all the pain, it gained
    raining blood, from my heart and soul, whats my goal?
    nothing, you where the woman i loved, but now its broken
    you broke my self esteem, so mad i coulda steemed
    i belived that you loved me, why was i wrong
    u flirted with me, but now i want you gone
    u asked me who i liked, all i could do was refuse
    i dont want you if ya love another man, i was confused
    my life was on the edge of dyeing, i cant get away
    when i see you, my eyes crack every single day
    i turned my love to another girl, but it wasnt the same
    i felt so lame, i sat there looked at you and blamed
    my life became so uneasy, when all them days i stood
    all i could do was stare, i saw you kiss him, i frooze
    why couldnt it have been me, i coulda gave you a rose
    but its gone, all gone, its like i was a pawn
    dont use me, you refused me, i just dunno what to do
    so my life will shattered, my heart broken, just for you...
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    All these heartbreaking pieces in the Realm, heh. Found this one close to me, because I went through that for about two years with my ex, but finally got over her. I think I had some infatuation, not much love, yet lust. This seems as if you just care for the female so much still.

    "my life was on the edge of dyeing, i cant get away
    when i see you, my eyes crack every single day"


    Quite obvious.. You'll either get over it or be able to be with her once again, it all depends on the real situation within the true meaning behind this joint. Overall, a heart stopping piece. My blessings..
    test
  3. Gemini_TwIIn

    Gemini_TwIIn a.k.a. Sydephex

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    haha well you know, gotta make my name well-known.
    But thanx for your feedback, I'm glad (in some way) that there are people who can relate to my work, that makes it all worth wile
    test
  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    damn....great piece

    very emotional...was writting a lot of pieces like this a while ago...but i refuse to post anymore....got so sick of um...lol.....this was dope......like how u put this together...the line TD posted up there was like whoa....was kinda taken aback by it.....heavy poem...gonna look out for ya
    test
  5. Infonation

    Infonation Info for the Nation

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    That was, hot. I can seriously relate, but i learned that hoes come and hoes go. I'm just fuckin wit ya, it seems like you had a good girl, and that's a sad thing to let her go, but it was a beautiful piece from da heart, very nice. ^One world, one life, one love^
    test
  6. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    oh nice heartfelt piece....dam bitches : ) jus kidn,

    dont use me, you refused me, - reminds me of this line from a song, lady midnight:
    "don't try to use me or slyly refuse me, just win me or lose me, it is this that the darkness is for" uncanny.
    hopefully gettin all that out of your system will help you start to mend.
    test
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