My Escape.. ((Written to Kim Waters "Night Falls" Smooth Jazz track)

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  1. d-rell

    d-rell New Member

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    You are
    You are, to me
    You are

    Baby, you are my escape from all that's wrong,
    Every night I hear your voice up on my phone

    Baby, you are my escape from all that's wrong,
    Every night I hear your voice up on my phone


    You are my deep oasis,
    And, so you'll know am appreciative of your time
    I wish we could trade places,
    We're so compatible..
    And you know we are
    I get so sick with chasing,
    ok, I get so sick with spending on more wasted time
    We're both going through changes,
    We're so compatible
    And you know we are


    Baby, you are my escape from all that's wrong,
    Every night I hear your voice up on my phone

    Baby, you are my escape from all that's wrong,
    Every night I hear your voice up on my phone

    ~1~
    test
  2. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    I read it with and without the music... I like it without... i love the feel of the piece though... i just think the music has a diiferent tone than your piece...
    test
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