My Dear Dirty Entrance...

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  1. ViDaR

    ViDaR [¤Thong Btween my ears¤-]

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    Wow... Its been forever since ive visited this... seems like everyone is gone??!?!?!

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    Oh why...
    why my dear dirty entrance???
    Is it the crumbling of my interior
    Hidden in the darkness,
    Or am I just a thought inspired image???
    And why is my exit so bright??
    Why does my exterior view like an early morning sunrise
    But upon admission,
    You detour to a trashed corridor
    Wreaking of a relapse,
    To where the nicotine stains seem to write,
    “welcome home, this is the studio where the junkie recites.”

    And my soul is so muddy…
    Ive been the course of many short travels…
    To where my life just walks all over me…
    Im Dirty…
    And now im lost,
    But im just a piece of your excess baggage…
    So will you return to find me
    Or just leave me to be tossed aside by your material handlers
    Because you cant carry me…

    I cant help it,
    But I notice that the exit Ive found seems to be brighter…
    And its existence…
    The frame is sturdy but shows of hard times and struggle,
    The door caved in from resistance…
    Is this my reality,
    Or just an inspired image that my inner junkie recycled???
    Maybe this is my revival,
    The lost addicts focus is that somebody won the battle,
    And my exit, shattered on hinges,
    Can no longer open to unfold my long running binges…
    And return me broken, shaking in attendance…
    Saying oh why, why we meet again my dear dirty entrance…
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    ViDaR [¤Thong Btween my ears¤-]

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    Damn... Up...
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  3. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    It's said that the eyes are the windows to the soul. Entrance usually, as we peer into other eyes from the outside...scuffed marks on the face, bruised ideas on the brow...but where does it all go? How does it hide itself? Masquarade anyone? I believe so...
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  4. ViDaR

    ViDaR [¤Thong Btween my ears¤-]

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    I know thats right...
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  5. Mikaella Ocean

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    Matt! whats up, its Chantelle! Long time I know. This was a really good piece u wrote.

    Hope youre doing well!
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  6. ViDaR

    ViDaR [¤Thong Btween my ears¤-]

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    Chantelle, whats good love? how have you been? ive came on here lookin for you, obviously you never forgot me neither.. you got facebook or myspace? if you do search for me by my email or if not just email me cause i dont really get on here.. weetawd_anunymus@yahoo.com .. you can find me on both with that.. hope your doin good.
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    !!!! :)))))

    I added ya
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