Munch vs.Johnny Weeks

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  1. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    Yall Know The Deal Already​
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  2. Johnny Weeks

    Johnny Weeks New Member

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  3. Munch

    Munch Hookstarz.com 4 FREE DLs

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    blah blah....
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  4. Munch

    Munch Hookstarz.com 4 FREE DLs

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    its...
    weeks,
    JOHNNYs Weak...lol

    fuck it...

    yo this herb is a clown,
    nd his punches wont connect...like the site server is down,
    why is u afta me....
    now u jus gon drop quick...like the credit for dis battle league...
    but i can teach him,
    so this is ya Fry day...meanin its the comin of this weeks end...
    as 4 street shit beef,
    i'll have ya back to da floor...right after my sweep this week...
    i'll win nd floor this wack dude,
    cuz johnny's first to die in mortal kombat too!!!...
    think u'll pulla win...
    u got one shot...nd myspace is the place dat he'll prolly keep his bullet in...
    i told ppz, u would ghostwrite
    bet dey never guessed it'd turn out that u'd actually be a ghost right?
    john winnin this shit?
    lets say he'll move up in this...when ms. spears, ends up wit her kids...
    peeps'll chant when i win this,
    der'll be so much echo, sega'll sue for copyright infringment.....
    nd im hopin hes leavin,
    he fake, only good johnny i know...is a grocery seasonin...



    later chump!
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  5. Johnny Weeks

    Johnny Weeks New Member

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    im actually not feeding by ragging on this dudes style...its the same lol-status every week



    in the lounge boastin? you wrong..I'm inventin your doom
    what coast are you on!?? April Fools Day ended at noon...
    this league really is somethin kid...your concepts are dumb and flipped
    ironic the caliber of my opponent's parallel to how czar runs the shit
    you seem quite angry, scale back to better times
    fuck you mad at me? vent to the dude that stole half of your setup lines
    f'real Munch, i laugh cause they're wrong...
    setups stop short so much, i keep waitin for em to pass the baton
    heard ya audios, call yaself a rapper, but youre not, youngin
    the only pointer i have for you is hovering the stop button
    seriously, your voice over beats just caught the suffering...
    found the worst part of soundclick...and its NOT the buffering
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  6. Munch

    Munch Hookstarz.com 4 FREE DLs

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    lol...gud shit...lol...dug the czar line....and batons
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  7. Chin Kwon

    Chin Kwon The Angkorian

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    Munch

    connect (and/or DIS-connect) lines are mad played, son.

    i did chuckle a bit, but it was that strong.

    could've been worded a bit better

    cool....but if worded a little better, this could've been real dope.

    heh, aite.

    haha, i like that one.

    meh

    no

    i get it, but, nah not feelin it.

    no


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    Johnny Week

    haha, aite.

    lol, aite.

    lmao!! Dope.

    Dope!

    cool

    meh...


    Break Down Munch, i've never seen anybody write a verse in that format. It was awkward to read at first, but it caught on. It's ur own unique style so can't knock that. I like how ur verse were filled with allusions from the current happening in RM to video games to Ms. Spears?? Unfortunately, i didn't think you set those up too well to deliver a devastating effect. I"m going to give this battle to Johnny Week because he was mad consistent. Every punch landed, with the exception of that last line. He had that effective combination of humor and wits that edge him out in this battle.

    Line of the battle:
    -Kwon
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  8. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    Vote - Johnny Weeks,

    I'm not digging Munch's style at all actually, it's irritating and makes the lines too simplistic. It's ineffective, most of those punches fell short, while Weeks had a couple of nice ones. Other then the opener and following bar, I liked every line of ya verse, so good shit.
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  9. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    munch... i used to write in a similar format, but ur setups are entirely tooo short... mine was more 40/60.... urs is like 20/80. U had some decent lines, like the fry day/week end, but the setups bein so short didn't build up energy for the pay off in the punch line, and they weren't strong enough to stand by themselves. Weeks came pretty good, easy flow, and that pass the baton line was bananas, especially right after the previous couplet about his setups... ha! Good shit.

    vote Weeks for an overall better verse. Good first battle to vote on tho.
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  10. Big Mack

    Big Mack Boss

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    I was loooking at the beats and the syllablle's didn't match up man.

    der'll be so much echo, sega'll sue for copyright infringment.....
    nd im hopin hes leavin,

    Liked that line man, It took me a second to realize what the hell it meant haha

    Line was pretty dope to:

    i'll have ya back to da floor...right after my sweep this week...
    i'll win nd floor this wack dude,

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    this league really is somethin kid...your concepts are dumb and flipped
    ironic the caliber of my opponent's parallel to how czar runs the shit

    seriously, your voice over beats just caught the suffering...
    found the worst part of soundclick...and its NOT the buffering

    Vote= Weeks
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  11. Munch

    Munch Hookstarz.com 4 FREE DLs

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    LMAO....u gotta get the structure right first of all...


    sdadsadas
    sdadsadsadasdsadasdadasdasdasdasdsa

    not

    dasdsadadsadasdadsasdadsasdasdsadsad
    dsadadasd

    there ya go
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  12. xEPITOMEx

    xEPITOMEx The Golden Rule

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    Munch ... thought your verse ranged from fairly bad to pretty damn ill. I didn't mind the small set-ups personally, though I understand what people are saying. Really liked these lines:

    "why is u afta me....
    now u jus gon drop quick...like the credit for dis battle league..."

    "think u'll pulla win...
    u got one shot...nd myspace is the place dat he'll prolly keep his bullet in..."
    ^^dope...hope ppl don't miss this

    "john winnin this shit?
    lets say he'll move up in this...when ms. spears, ends up wit her kids..."
    ^^lol

    Johnny Weeks came with a more polished verse. I was pretty much feeling every couplet if I'm honest...Went to quote some lines and don't think I'd miss anything out. Short and sweet. Dopeness.

    vote = J. Weeks
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  13. Munch

    Munch Hookstarz.com 4 FREE DLs

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    the funniest part...

    if i woulda structured it like thiS:

    dfsdfsdf
    dfsdfsdfsdfsdfd...
    sdfsdfsdfsd,

    dfsdsdfdsf
    dfsfdsfsdfsdfsdf.....
    sdfsdfsdfsd

    people woulda got it, and they cant deny cuz booga did that shit constantly...
    blah @ text itz koo tho...
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  14. MIC'ed Up

    MIC'ed Up Don't talk Just Spit

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    Munch

    no haymer lines just aight type of stuff

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    Johnny Weeks

    fuck you mad at me? vent to the dude that stole half of your setup lines


    Okay battle, Munch had some potentially good disses but set-ups lacked momentum. Johnny keep it personal stayed more sharp diss wise

    Vote: Johnny Weeks
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