multisyllable rhyme scheme tutorial

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  1. juelz the don

    juelz the don Rap Music King

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    What you should do


    SYLLABLE/RHYME MATCHING

    Best read this shit, cos multis aint hard to learn
    and anyone ya battle'll walk away with heart burn


    ^see how "hard to learn" and "heart burn" dont match even though they rhyme? thats bad.

    Best read this shit cos multis really aint heard to learn
    anyone I battle, drop a verse n im leavin they heart to burn


    ^see how the syllables "matched" on that one??

    ..really aint hard to learn
    ..leavin they heart to burn


    ^thats a good syllable count... the multi doest have to be that long, but you get the idea.


    LEARN TO SLANT RHYME

    slant rhyming is when words dont perfectly rhyme, but they still do.

    Splitting
    hit him
    living

    weapon
    check em

    etc... pretty elementary stuff


    A COUPLE WORDS --> MORE WORDS

    crazy and amazing, I obliterate the opposition
    watch closely, as i drop hits to break n rock ya visions


    ^you dont always have to use the same syllable words, you can break it down into one syllable words, or two etc. ^very useful.


    WORD COMPRESSION

    a useful tool in the world of multis. If you're lines are too long, compress them, or if they sound bad in some way, try diff words, use metaphors n shit...... like so:

    Ill unload a whole round out my gun, straight into your head
    you used to have knowledge, but now im rockin you with platefuls of lead


    ^wack and long, no?

    Ill unload a clip from my gat inta ya back, neck n' head, till I shook it
    formerly knowledgable, now im toppin you cos ya brains filled wit bullets


    ^better flowing, but still same length.


    Damn, it used to be so hard back at home.. its kinda funny
    now I look at why we didnt realise before to share our money..


    ^uhh... wack..

    Used to get knocked up on the block, but we made it... s'gettin better
    Still rock guns n shoot shots, but me n the fam breakin bread together


    ^breakin bread together dont mean they splittin a loaf.. its talkin bout sharin money, food, all that shit. Better flowing too.


    TRY DIFFERENT RHYME SCHEMES

    Basic rhyme

    check it, im droppin knowledge, teachin a lesson
    kids get knocked back hard when I reach for the wesson


    ^Simple.


    Inners
    Yo, im droppin all that, dont stall jack, im teachin a lesson
    kids get knocked back hard, whenever i reach for the wesson


    ^Bolded parts are the inners. Its a rhyme *within* a line.


    The A-B-C-D

    Sneakin with weapons, dont stall kids, im teachin a lesson
    get a bit deeper n' wreckem cats fall flat when i reach fa the wesson


    ^start of the first line, end of the first line, start of the second line, end of the second line, its all the same rhyme. And you can chuck in some inners to enhance the flow even more.


    Callback

    im up n' teachin a lesson, droppin all that, so dont stall jack
    this is a call back n' youll fall flat when i reach fa the wesson


    ^the bolded parts are the rhyme... call backs rhyme the start of the first line with the end of the last, and to be effective, usually needs some inners to help it flow. Scarcely used in text, mostly used in audio.


    The spectaculartastic mega floetry combo mark 12

    rip bitches fit for clips from the six clipped to my hips, flip'd hits you threw me
    this kids dick's licked by his click, crew voters, but im a misfit for newbies


    ^thats the simple kind of this... not many multis in there, just a lot of repetition of sound.

    expect ya back to get hit with blasts from the hip when this cat band gets back in the mix
    cuz i'll be trashin this kid, when i jump in the fastest of whips where the passengers sit
    while one a the homeboy's gassin it n' laughin a bit
    we strapped to the ribs with gats and with clips to clap at this kid
    while we passin his ave in a fit of click clackity-clicks
    this fag'll get capped in the hip while he's flappin his lips
    actin like his raps are the shit when half is prewrit, and the other half of it's bit.
    battle with this? ha, i think this fag would rather plop his ass on a dick
    but i guess i should give him a break, it's his time of the month and his pad's in a twist
    yall got the wackest of kids to attack me with hits that ain't even scratch me a bit
    man, this is just my opener, now try n' get ya wack raps together n' get back at this, bitch.


    ^now bolding the rhymes in that would take several years, but you get the idea... Thats just basically raw flow though.. theres a few punches in there but its really difficult to incorporate any if your not good at multis yet..


    GET A BETTER VOCAB/PRACTICE

    now... learning to rap/multi takes time and patience. From the time you start, everytime you write shit you're building your vocab, eventually you'll get a "list" of words that rhyme in your head, or the kind of words that rhyme,...

    Its all about practice, dont get lazy. Dont be like some people I know that "SIN" after din"NER" ...<(most cats will know what thats about) and always ask you to "elevate them"... cats like that wont get good at rap cos they have no patience and are lazy and are looking for a quick fix to get good. Its ok to ask for help and feedback on your stuff... but not how to get madd quick..


    REPEAT AFTER ME
    Multis are dope
    anybody who opposes multis, is evil
    I shall be for multis, and never against multis
    those who mistreat multis are evil
    forcing multis is evil
    multis are not evil
    Multis are the essence of flow
    I love multis.


    REMEMBER

    multis aint everything for most people... you see most of the vets here dont use multis, that doesnt mean theres anything wrong with their flow, punches etc. It just means they have a diff style... If you find multis hard, but you have good punches, forget about em. If you cant think of em yet, forget about em.

    The only people everybody should hate is anti-multinators aka opposers of multis. these are the guys thats like "man! multis are wack! its all about punches! youre getting too hung up on multis, and theyre wack!!!"

    ^this is true for forced multis, but multis + punches = dope

    those who badmouth multis like that will battle me.


    SHUTUP AFTER

    Aight, now heres the plan: your all gonna give feedback on this tut n make suggestions or ask questions, and then your gonna shutup n practice. If theres anythin i forgot ill add it whenever.........................

    ONE

    ~-~ ______________
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  2. Drschmalzy

    Drschmalzy Active Member

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    lol what is this how to rap for dummies?

    if you can rap u can rap... if u cant rap u aint ever gonna be a good rapper lol this shit is funny... If your good u don't need to read up on how to do schemes you create new schemes that people never heard before. i never look at my rhymescheme and be like damn this multi syllable shouldnt be there.... lol my flow switch up like crazy tho...this is retarded...
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  3. DemiGod

    DemiGod Peef Rimgar

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  4. cg paul

    cg paul New Member

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    what in the name of fuck were you thinking op?
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  5. DemiGod

    DemiGod Peef Rimgar

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    Don't give him that much credit.....thinking? naaaaah he just copies and pastes these from other times he copied and pasted them.
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    L u c y (Administrator) SWERVE

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    lmaoooooooooooooooooooooooo

    you've missed the Alley & the Ladies/Men's forums btw
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  7. TheMarcusBLACK

    TheMarcusBLACK So Long Salvation..

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    L u c y (Administrator) SWERVE

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    you learnt a lot here didn't you?
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  9. TheMarcusBLACK

    TheMarcusBLACK So Long Salvation..

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    Yes mam lol
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  10. DemiGod

    DemiGod Peef Rimgar

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    This thread was dope the first 5 times....but #6 really opened up my mind.
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  11. Synikal

    Synikal Unconventional Poet

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    Rapping is more of a concept based art than a specific one. Aside from the fact that this was a poorly structured tutorial, even if it was well made it still wouldn't "teach" someone how to rap, or adequately apply any of the techniques. You can't rap with a template and sound dope. Its all about uniqueness and spontaneity.
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  12. TheMarcusBLACK

    TheMarcusBLACK So Long Salvation..

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    damn.. stomp on my dreams fam.
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  13. Synikal

    Synikal Unconventional Poet

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    Heh...dreams...i remember those...
    Well anyway, we can't all be rappers Marcus. :(
    Might i suggest carpentry?
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  14. TheMarcusBLACK

    TheMarcusBLACK So Long Salvation..

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    I'ma apply to be an apprentice tomorrow lol..
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  15. Synikal

    Synikal Unconventional Poet

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    Apprentice to a carpenter?
    Sound like your aiming to be a Jedi. Lmao
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  16. TheMarcusBLACK

    TheMarcusBLACK So Long Salvation..

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    That's not how it works lol? Should I just by some tools, wood and rot on Youtube?
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  17. Synikal

    Synikal Unconventional Poet

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  18. TheMarcusBLACK

    TheMarcusBLACK So Long Salvation..

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    :battlefan: I'll get right on that!
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  19. Synikal

    Synikal Unconventional Poet

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    Still waiting...:deathstare:
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