Mrjdm vs smittyrhythm

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Mrjdm998, Jan 24, 2011.

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  1. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Childish.If you doubt my identity,merely ask a admin or mod to check my IP along with Mrjdm's IP and that should ease your mind.
    test
  2. Gen The God

    Gen The God The Life or Death Poet

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    Pretty one-sided battle.

    Punches: Smitty
    Metas/Wordplay: Smitty
    Personals: Smitty (the C3PO line took it)
    Multis: Smitty
    Flips: Smitty
    Flow: Tie
    Overall: Smitty

    Mr....I'm not gonna spell your name but you have potential if you keep practicing. Work on your multis and wording. You had some potential in some of your lines but you didn't word them right.

    WORD OF ADVICE: Don't ever say "I think I got bodied".....even if you spit an ill verse I would give you a thumbs down on the spot for that so keep that in mind lol.
    test
  3. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Thanks for the feedback. What in perticular needed wording better do you think?
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  4. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    ^ur good deth.. play it 2 the bone
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