Mr.J & Lankizzle - Staying focused ( C'mon! ) ****DROP LINKS****

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  1. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    Uppn.........
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  2. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    upnnnnnn.....
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  3. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    Jesus use to breakdance. The Bible said he SERVED 5,000 once!
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  4. Intella-Jent

    Intella-Jent .:Intellectual:.

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    Omg who made the beat? You did?

    Ohh shit that is hot i just wet myself..

    You got a soundclick with your beats?
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  5. Mr.J

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    Yes Sir, I made the Beat, Nope, I don't put my Beats on Soundclick, cuz I'm not interested in selling them, I just make them for myself, my buddys around, and real folks I met via Internet through the years, thx for the probz Man, I really appreciate that
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  6. LegendarySoulja

    LegendarySoulja Much Doper Than You

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    beat is dope


    1st dude... i dont see how u thought he sounded like ice cube lol ....lyrics was cool from what i could understand flow was nice rode the beat well


    chorus... i liked it ...i diddnt see anything wrong woith it its just a little different i guess

    second dude.......... flow is pretty nice... presence is good....lyrics was pretty good man... but as said some lines could of been worded better


    good 2 see someone reppin god man although im not the icon of christain rap i have a couple joints for god out


    good looks man


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  7. o3flame

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  8. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

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    sup sup sup ...

    let me peep this bad boy..

    nice beat her very sick choice...

    first cat sick delivery and nice flow.. very polished and ill with what u doing on this verse... the lyrics is ough on this..
    but there isnt really a line that stick out to me.... but still ill with it..


    hook_ is not bad to me actually na this is ill i like it.. it draws my attention and makes me wanna hear the second verse...

    next.. verse is ill as wel... flow is ill again..

    this is nice man keep up the nice work.....

    this plex...

    wattupp homie... thanks for the peep... im returnin fav... Shyt starts off ill.. u kinda remind me of Immortal Tech styll... lyrics, flow, emotion, is all on point!! Quality is nice... pick my weapon of choice and pass it to point game... nice way to pass it on...

    Point game... one of ma fav rappers on RM... usually he all mad and shyt and real ill, this time he managed to do a calm yet KILLA verse... its real ill man...

    Track real sick... keep that shyt comin homie...
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  9. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

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  10. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    Thx fot the feedback.........
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  11. UpgrAde

    UpgrAde tha absent minded

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    no complaints
    everything was straight
    beat is hoooooot

    keep um comin
    stay focused

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  12. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    ^^^thx man, fo sure
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  13. E_Spangler

    E_Spangler GHOstBuStaH

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    returnin the fav-

    beat is pretty nice, feelin it.....first cat, lyrics are nice....flow is pretty decent, could use some polishin...def not feelin the voice tho....hook was aight....second cat, flow is decent, kinda shaky....lyrics are cool....not feelin this cat's voice either, sounds nasal n shit....delivery was aight....overall, this is a pretty decent track....i think both cats got room to improve fo sho....props for spittin the realness....word up @ the outro....keep spittin the realness....peace
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  14. Mr.J

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    Thx for the feedback......
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  15. Mr.J

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    Upppppppppin.......
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  16. TAB

    TAB Model

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    Beat is solid for what it is and is suitable for the content and emotion.

    Lank: Flow is raunchy in the beginning, but loses my interest as its repetitiveness progresses. Lyrics were solid. Voice doesn't appeal to me. Overall solid performance.

    MrJ: Flow is nice and smooth. Your accent is throwing me off. Usually I don't have a problem with foreign rappers, but I find this German accent to be appalling. Lyrics are solid as well.

    Overall solid track.
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  17. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    Thx for the feedback.....
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  18. jewbei

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    yo Mr. J!! hows it going, havent spocken to you in a long time, hows things? but this beat is real nice!! nice production! the hook was real nice aswel, i mean real nice!! both verses are nice, your voice sounds alot better J, lankizzle is real nice aswell, he does kinda sound like ice cube. would quite like to work with him. well anyway, keep on keeping on!!

    return the fav-
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12349686#post12349686

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  19. Trigga Boom

    Trigga Boom New Member

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    Yo on some real shit....Why do I hear Lank Callin my Name in the Intro?
    Man...I aint talk to Lank in 2 years. But tell him To keep Pushin. Maybe I'll roll by the crib an Say wassup.

    Beatz is still fire homie!

    Aim: HelivatedMind
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  20. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin ... beats tight triumphant ...
    first verse was nicely mixed ...flow was steady and comforatable ...
    nice hip hop here ...
    Hook was aight I wasnt feelin it too much but it wasnt bad ...
    2nd verse was tight silence for hip hop tight ...
    this is a nice track dope shit yo
    hit mines up

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=913630
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