Mr.J & Lankizzle - Staying focused ( C'mon! ) ****DROP LINKS****

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  1. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    New Mr.J & Lankizzle Collaboration, Mr.J Beat & Production, Song idea by Lankizzle

    Intro: Mr.J
    1st verse: Lankizzle
    Hook: Mr.J & Lankizzle
    2nd verse: Mr.J
    Outro: Lankizzle

    I'll return all feedbacks...

    Link: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/linksquad.htm
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  2. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    You should really think about doing the whisper thing a little more. Your flow WAAAAY tighter when you flip it like that. I can tell you right now cats won't feel it because you mention God, but keep doing what you do. G-O-D stand up!
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  3. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    Thx for the feed Skillz.......
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  4. DaMieN's Army

    DaMieN's Army Fuck With It

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    That beat is sick.
    Damn...1st cat reminds me of Ice Cube...lmao
    Flows on point, lyrics is tight...delivery needs a lil bit of work....everything pretty much str8

    hook - im not really feelin it to be honest

    2nd dude...rushed some of his linez to get them to fit the beat...delivery needs a lil bit of work...lyrics are tight, emotions dope...not too shabby

    overall - i think the 1st dude outshined the 2nd cat a lil better...but this wasnt a bad peice...some shit to ride too feel me....Outro is nice, feel it alot - some true shit...topic was nice with the real shit yah mean

    felt it...
    return the love http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=908327
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  5. Mr. Hayden

    Mr. Hayden New Member

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    This beat is nice. First guy is pretty tight, flow is decent but the lyrics were tight. Second guy wasn't bad either, but he did rush some of his lines and his flow wasn't as good as the first. overall, it was a good track. Holler.
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  6. Left Wing

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    returnin feed

    beats tight, like energy from first dude, flows straight nothin sick but decent, feelin the lyrics and emotion, second dude, got an accent, feelin ya voice, but flow falls off, if u fix ur flow up ur shits gonna be hot, delivery could stand for a lil improvement but its straight, like ya emotion/voice tho. good shit keep droppin
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  7. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    Thx for the feedbacks.......I really appreciate that
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  8. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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  9. Mr.J

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    uppin.........
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  10. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    stop sleeping people
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  11. Da Protégé

    Da Protégé The P.R.O.

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    I'm feeling the message...nice...mad props on the christian deal...I feel that... flow is good lyrics is dope...

    hook is aight...

    props man
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  12. SoulBoy

    SoulBoy Bitch wheres my Grammy

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    Yeah this is nice man. Beat works well for the vibe of the song and the message is cool. The hook is pretty repetitive though.
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  13. N-TeLLigeNt

    N-TeLLigeNt aka Novill Da Truth

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    Returning the favor

    The beat is so crazy..........good delivery and flow and unique voice on the first dude.....lyrics are nice too........i like this song.....some nice positive shit.....im tired of all taht kiling shit, that change up was ill.......yo im feelin this cuz im a similar artist, i dont curse in my rhymes, and i dont do all that gun busting shit.......this shit is real.

    Thumbs up

    Peep: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=907830

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=906577
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  14. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    Thx for the feedback.......
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  15. Mr.J

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    up up upnnnnn...
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  16. F Major

    F Major Anti Gear Lust

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    The beat on this song is dope, makes its automatically easier to listen to. I like the lyrics on the first verse real positive and stuff. I think tonally the first person does have a little bit of Ice Cube sound to him. The flow pattern needs a little work, sounds a little 90s at times. I dont like the hook at all, it just doesnt fit with the vibe, it matches melodically but it just doesnt stick with you maybe if a different person was on the hook it could work, but with the combo on it right now it doesnt work for me. I like the positive lyrics though man its real nice I like what you saying especially at the end. Anyhow this track has potential work on the hook, and the Tonality of the second verse.

    Peep my stuff when you get a chance

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=908395
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  17. R e d e e M

    R e d e e M Phuck Yew

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    beat is pretty good...on some chilled shit

    first dude is pretty polished......flow is nice..no complaint....rode the beat well...
    lyrics was real...but its straight....nice verse

    hook- was ok...nothing catchy bout it..but after awhile, gets lil better

    second....nice verse also....flow and delivery is good....charisma is coo...lyrics arent bad.....
    nice verse..

    ya got some good chemistry together...

    nice song, worth the peep
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  18. Flic.

    Flic. N.O till I G.O

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    beat is cool..
    1st cat sounds oldschool.shit cool though,flow and shit is cool

    chorus not really feelin it,,sounds kind of corny at times imo.

    2nd cat really not into the voice, nice delivery though, flow nice

    overall shit was str8
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  19. Flic.

    Flic. N.O till I G.O

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    *double post* whoops
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  20. Mr.J

    Mr.J New Member

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    Thx for the feedbacks........
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