Mr. Damonik 3-1 vs. Opshins 3-1

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  1. J o o k

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

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    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.
    u must agree on an amount in ya check in
    & match whatever amount u agree on


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    1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
    vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!!
    And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.

    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
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  2. Everybodys_Nig4ya

    Everybodys_Nig4ya New Member

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    i'll give u 16.....imma drop soon.....HOLLA
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  3. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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  4. Everybodys_Nig4ya

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    M.chigan ave - I.ndiana st - L.ake rd - F.redrick Douglas blvd

    All these streets to get to ya mom’s crib…that’s some shit
    I can‘t complain…..it turned out that all roads lead to happiness
    Victoria's Secret sale is over....U must be thinkin....like FUCK
    i'm closin up shop....so this fag won't "get his panties in a bunch"
    and I can get personal bitch....ya shit's far from perfection
    Hi Im Rusty no showed against you....
    he musta entered the thread and seen his reflection
    We all know you're trash Op...how you receivin props when....
    vote = Mr damonik......peeps don't even "rethink their Opshins"
    U spit shit...we never care....there's wack rappers everywhere
    smash his face wit third base....im "beatin em fair and square"
    I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
    i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much
    My dick's like a candy bar....and since ya mom's like's snack'n 4 dinner
    her favorite line's become "hungry, why wait grab a Snickers"
    i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
    when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'
    Ya career has come to an end....just watch n you'll see
    I took this match lying down.....and you still look up to me

    E.Z.​
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  5. Everybodys_Nig4ya

    Everybodys_Nig4ya New Member

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  6. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    Im willin to give u points, because i know that you're weaker
    But you dont need the points system, jeff needa create u a donate votes feature
    Damoniks a bright human, and i dont need college
    To know that ur the TRUTH and im about to drop knowledge
    Yo just kiddin you dummy, retard why u even gloatin
    When ur brain waves are more like a calm night on the ocean
    Ima end this kids motion, Ops known to crunch rhymes
    And i'll put ' ' those around ur verse, coz im still lookin for a punchline
    Just to prove your a bitch with rap ill have my weapon spray
    Coz the only time he reach for a mike is gettin a hard lemonade
    Call me a renegade when u see how i do this kids cranium
    Ima collapse ur fucking dome, like my city needs a new indoor stadium


    ^^^ i didnt miss a bar, to soak up ur blood u'll need sponges
    The 2 lines above this actually hit harder with more content then your punches
    You must be new at text battles, so i stay bustin cherries
    And have you so fucking close to death like the scythe that he carries
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  7. marsellus

    marsellus nOne siCker

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    vote - damonik

    punches hit harder...

    opshins - only coo like was da droppin knowledge and that is played..

    We all know you're trash Op...how you receivin props when....
    vote = Mr damonik......peeps don't even "rethink their Opshins"
    nice

    U spit shit...we never care....there's wack rappers everywhere
    smash his face wit third base....im "beatin em fair and square"
    ok

    I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
    i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much
    funny

    i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
    when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'
    lol, nice

    vote - damonik
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  8. Oliver Twist

    Oliver Twist Leavin em twisted

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    Mr D-

    We all know you're trash Op...how you receivin props when....
    vote = Mr damonik......peeps don't even "rethink their Opshins"

    I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
    i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much

    i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
    when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'
    Ya career has come to an end....just watch n you'll see
    I took this match lying down.....and you still look up to me


    That bend over line gotta make the mag, haha. I didn't like the fact that you used so many "your mom" type of lines in a short verse though. But still overall dope.

    Op-
    Im willin to give u points, because i know that you're weaker
    But you dont need the points system, jeff needa create u a donate votes feature
    Damoniks a bright human, and i dont need college
    To know that ur the TRUTH and im about to drop knowledge

    After this point of your verse the punches tapered off. Was expecting a little more.


    vote-- Mr Damonik


    Overall more enjoyable read, more quotables.
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  9. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    wow....good votes...0-2
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  10. trey

    trey The Three Ball

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    You would think that was a good line you Neanderthal...that's on par with your AO a 0 in his loss column line from last week (that you still think isn't trash._ You cant just use someone's name just because it fits in where you want it...just like what Mr. damonik did. I mean, you can...but its not clever or even a diss at all. If you don't understand what I'm saying you are undeniably stupid.

    Rethink their opshins = Rethink their options...which isn't a diss or derogatory, its just useless wordplay.





    Now thats out of my system....




    M.chigan ave - I.ndiana st - L.ake rd - F.redrick Douglas blvd

    All these streets to get to ya mom’s crib…that’s some shit
    I can‘t complain…..it turned out that all roads lead to happiness



    wtf...no



    Victoria's Secret sale is over....U must be thinkin....like FUCK
    i'm closin up shop....so this fag won't "get his panties in a bunch"



    you work at victorias secret? hahahaha....why didnt u just say 'they're' closing up shop??? nice line, weird and suspect wording tho


    and I can get personal bitch....ya shit's far from perfection
    Hi Im Rusty no showed against you....
    he musta entered the thread and seen his reflection


    true maybe...but ehh

    We all know you're trash Op...how you receivin props when....
    vote = Mr damonik......peeps don't even "rethink their Opshins"


    :p

    U spit shit...we never care....there's wack rappers everywhere
    smash his face wit third base....im "beatin em fair and square"


    wack

    I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
    i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much



    wack

    My dick's like a candy bar....and since ya mom's like's snack'n 4 dinner
    her favorite line's become "hungry, why wait grab a Snickers"



    no

    i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
    when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'


    nice, sorta played

    Ya career has come to an end....just watch n you'll see
    I took this match lying down.....and you still look up to me


    no



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    Im willin to give u points, because i know that you're weaker
    But you dont need the points system, jeff needa create u a donate votes feature


    ha, nice open

    Damoniks a bright human, and i dont need college
    To know that ur the TRUTH and im about to drop knowledge


    nice flip

    Yo just kiddin you dummy, retard why u even gloatin
    When ur brain waves are more like a calm night on the ocean



    dope, worked real good with 2 lines before it too

    Ima end this kids motion, Ops known to crunch rhymes
    And i'll put ' ' those around ur verse, coz im still lookin for a punchline


    nice, your best line

    Just to prove your a bitch with rap ill have my weapon spray
    Coz the only time he reach for a mike is gettin a hard lemonade


    ha not bad

    Call me a renegade when u see how i do this kids cranium
    Ima collapse ur fucking dome, like my city needs a new indoor stadium


    ok


    ^^^ i didnt miss a bar, to soak up ur blood u'll need sponges
    The 2 lines above this actually hit harder with more content then your punches


    i like

    You must be new at text battles, so i stay bustin cherries
    And have you so fucking close to death like the scythe that he carries


    Fire




    this isnt even close...

    Vote = opshins
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  11. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    Victoria's Secret sale is over....U must be thinkin....like FUCK
    i'm closin up shop....so this fag won't "get his panties in a bunch"
    I threw on a smooth tux now im pickin between two sluts
    i'll take the road less traveled...ya mom's been around too much
    i'd spare ya chick...but fuck that....just ask her homie
    when my 'back's against the wall'.....the bitch 'bends over backwards for me'

    vs

    Ima end this kids motion, Ops known to crunch rhymes
    And i'll put ' ' those around ur verse, coz im still lookin for a punchline
    Just to prove your a bitch with rap ill have my weapon spray
    Coz the only time he reach for a mike is gettin a hard lemonade
    You must be new at text battles, so i stay bustin cherries
    And have you so fucking close to death like the scythe that he carries


    going against the majority so far, again.

    both had the ups and downs in there verse but damonik seems like he lacked anything more then those lines above. less traveled line i left in cause it was decent but the other two were better then decent. on the other hand, opshins palmed it. 3 solid lines and the rest of his verse wasnt up to par but outweighted the rest of damoniks verse. more consistent and that was easy to see. hop opshins dont get robbed.

    v/opshins
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  12. Absent Minded

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    word em up....shits tied...uppin
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  13. CONCOUYS

    CONCOUYS CONSCYOUS

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    so i gues this text shit is really just insult after insult and
    those are what u call punches.
    and its all about who can get the better punches

    that shit is laim thats why yall aint voten for my verse att all
    cause u don't like the fack im tryna spit in a spontainious style
    will see if i get this text bull on my next battle. i know i must get it a litle bit cause i do
    still have more then to wins off actual votes except one win on this is is a noshow
    any way check the litle break down below

    Mr. Damonik
    All these streets to get to ya mom’s crib…that’s some shit
    I can‘t complain…..it turned out that all roads lead to happiness
    nice

    Hi Im Rusty no showed against you....
    he musta entered the thread and seen his reflection
    this was funny and creative liked allot.


    i mest my post by clicking submit too soon so just this ;; i liked mr d verse a lot
    especially the lines above

    but there were atleast two lines in opstions verse i liked as munch or better so


    vote- O
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  14. Everybodys_Nig4ya

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    ^^^^^


    Op on da real man this kid is trash......please tell me that vote don't count
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  15. QuicK SyllaBle

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    word em up.....vote dont count....still stands at 2-2
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  16. Everybodys_Nig4ya

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    ^^^^ i respect that in you fam.........



    2-2 vote homos.........
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  17. QuicK SyllaBle

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  18. GooseMan

    GooseMan Naptown's Finest

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    Although I didn't like the beginning I'ma have to go for...

    Vote= Opshins

    The verse came together better after the first 4 bars. Punches were there and the wordpaly was good.

    Mr. Dam... Your verse was ok, but I just wasn't feeling some of the lines; such as the dinner/snickers line....

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  19. Everybodys_Nig4ya

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    3-2 keep it goin.....
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  20. ExodusIII

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    i got opshins takin this....verse was just better put together...damonik kept on that mom/chick shit...n it wasn't really all that hard hitting, n got a little monotonous...last 4 lines were cool tho...opshins had some nice lines...just the all-round better put together verse...with harder hitting lines

    vote=opshins
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