Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Feme Sole, Aug 26, 2003.
i must agree.... nice collab ladies
This was a very tight piece... i loved the concept...three totally unique styles all came together as one and it was perfect!! Hotness without question....all three verses were tight as hell!!
These were my fav. lines
-GIVING FORMAT TO PRONOUNS/EQUALING TO "HE" AS "SHE" AND "HIS" TO "HERS"/
-It’s true She has lost many battles
but never a war.
-Anyone could push her away and know
That she would always stay
Because you need her light
She could be so wrong, but IT is so right…..
Tight shit...loved it!!
def. great piece.. loved it all
Thank you for the in-depth response. . It is appreciated.
not bad ...not bad at all...everyone gave there own opinions about whats a woman..that was ill..hmm maybe some of us fellas should do one on men..[teet]
thank u tk for being real....i respect honesty and i agree...i mos def could have came stronger...the caps thing is very "interesting" to me....lol......as well....i guess everyone collabs differently.....i definetly know this is not my strongest shit....there are only like 5 or seven lines from me in this...lol....you are very talented and gifted tk..ty again for dropping the honesty.....~one love always~
really great work here, alots been said about it and i reckon it is a passionate look at woman, each came with a different conrtibution the the peice and they worked and fitted nicely..great work
uhhhhhh i didnt portray women negatively......never that......pshhhhhhhhh
very interesting piece...the 3 of u did a good job...feme u shoulda broken down mochas lines..but i'll get over that lol........all the parts were really good but i think rosas was the strongest...keep it up girls......will always peep all of your poems
dont really be in here THAT much
2 know how mocka usually does her stuff
but feme you could have come betta sorry
rosa was nice mocha was nice 2
nice piece all together
I was feelin this definitely! All three came nicely, mocha, the caps the caps!!!!hehe!
other than that*which isnt really a bad thing* I have no criticism here. I feel all three of you accented and accompanied eachother well. This was powerful! Great write!
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