Mocha, Rosa and Feme Sole present...

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Feme Sole, Aug 26, 2003.

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  1. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

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    i must agree.... nice collab ladies
    test
  2. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    This was a very tight piece... i loved the concept...three totally unique styles all came together as one and it was perfect!! Hotness without question....all three verses were tight as hell!!

    These were my fav. lines

    -GIVING FORMAT TO PRONOUNS/EQUALING TO "HE" AS "SHE" AND "HIS" TO "HERS"/

    -It’s true She has lost many battles
    but never a war.

    -Anyone could push her away and know
    That she would always stay
    Because you need her light
    She could be so wrong, but IT is so right…..

    Tight shit...loved it!!

    mad love
    test
  3. *Princess*

    *Princess* skantless bitch

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    def. great piece.. loved it all
    test
  4. FukkedUPKidR

    FukkedUPKidR Guest

    Thank you for the in-depth response. . It is appreciated.
    test
  5. da_after_shock

    da_after_shock New Member

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    not bad ...not bad at all...everyone gave there own opinions about whats a woman..that was ill..hmm maybe some of us fellas should do one on men..[teet]
    test
  6. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    thank u tk for being real....i respect honesty and i agree...i mos def could have came stronger...the caps thing is very "interesting" to me....lol......as well....i guess everyone collabs differently.....i definetly know this is not my strongest shit....there are only like 5 or seven lines from me in this...lol....you are very talented and gifted tk..ty again for dropping the honesty.....~one love always~
    test
  7. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    really great work here, alots been said about it and i reckon it is a passionate look at woman, each came with a different conrtibution the the peice and they worked and fitted nicely..great work
    test
  8. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    uhhhhhh i didnt portray women negatively......never that......pshhhhhhhhh
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  9. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    very interesting piece...the 3 of u did a good job...feme u shoulda broken down mochas lines..but i'll get over that lol........all the parts were really good but i think rosas was the strongest...keep it up girls......will always peep all of your poems
    test
  10. Urizen

    Urizen Guest

    dont really be in here THAT much
    2 know how mocka usually does her stuff
    but feme you could have come betta sorry
    rosa was nice mocha was nice 2

    nice piece all together
    test
  11. Judge tha Dacyple

    Judge tha Dacyple Poetic Papi Emcee Señor

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    I was feelin this definitely! All three came nicely, mocha, the caps the caps!!!!hehe!

    other than that*which isnt really a bad thing* I have no criticism here. I feel all three of you accented and accompanied eachother well. This was powerful! Great write!
    test
  12. Novaman: RaWKiLLa

    Novaman: RaWKiLLa New Member

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