Mocha, Rosa and Feme Sole present...

Whats a woman?.....check it

Mochalicious:
CREATED FROM MAN'S RIB/WITHIN HUMID ATMOSPHERE/A MIND COMBINED WITH MAN'S/TO GRASP EMOTIONS AND SOOTHE CHILDREN'S SOULS/FEATURES AND DEMENTIONS ORIGINAL AND UNSPOKEN/ ALTHOUGH VISUAL TO MAN'S EYES/ INSPIRING BILLIONS/PROVIDING DETAIL TO NATURE'S SCENE/ GIVING FORMAT TO PRONOUNS/EQUALING TO "HE" AS "SHE" AND "HIS" TO "HERS"/BEGINNING PERSONALITY/ POSESSING WIT AND EMOTION/PASSION STEMMING AND ROOTS STRONG/MIGHTY ALTHOUGH MEEK/CLASSY YET SENSUAL.............

Feme Sole:
She is a mother, teacher, wife, sister, daughter, aunt, lawyer, hooker, homemaker, poetess, victim, heroine…..
Some are all and all are some.
They don’t need his rib
All though some crave its affections.
They want to be on top even if it means banishment.
A warrior princess
that holds the portal of life
between her delicate limbs.
That is her.
Some might refer to her as a bitch or a whore.
It’s true She has lost many battles
but never a war.
She’s lovely and breaks the hearts of men,
But it’s only because she wants to give HERS to them.
A few sleep with men for punishment,
Others for reward.
She is all woman
Can you hear her roar?
(I can, and until I lost everything
I didn’t quite understand
That you can be ALL woman
But equal to a man.)
She is amazed With Shakespeare
But she was never into the whole
‘woe is me’ thing.
Shes a work in progress
And she knows it very well.
Fury like hers?
not even in hell...
She fell from heaven
and blessed you with life.

Rosa:
Suddenly you grabbed her hips, held on
And wouldn’t let go…
As delicate as her skin was to touch, it was thick
As silky as her hair felt, it was tough…..
A woman
Shouldn’t be reason enough to love…
Anyone could push her away and know
That she would always stay
Because you need her light
She could be so wrong, but IT is so right…..
Like a thief in the night
If others saw her during the bright days
They may stop to try and misunderstand what she means
When she says
In these faults you may see
What divinity may be…
Many men have packed their bags to further examine
Newer things
To try and make sense of a monstrosity..
Instead of, ‘what’s in this woman,
What is she about?’
They all walked on by, but I know
Her story, her being is something that cannot be lived
Without
A mind too powerful
No one could prepare for Her decisions
Of not wanting to blow cultures apart
Instead, to mend with her arms, and heal many hearts
This woman lives her life knowing,
Very few will know how to appreciate
A fine piece of Art…
…Despite all the torn feelings encountered on her path
She has managed, and brought what she could of life,
And proudly lifted it up into this world, to shine
Shine
She shines…

Ya see..!!
This is why I Love Women..!!

Yay!

I enjoyed this more than any other piece from any of you!

Mocha
needs
to
learn

To do her shit in THAT format though, and take off the caps for Christ's sake.

Other than that, I enjoyed this.

beautiful.... nice work ladies

my favorite line is:

She?s lovely and breaks the hearts of men,
But it?s only because she wants to give HERS to them

goodwork

very good piece... this was deep.

Everyone came with a diferent perspective on the definition of being a woman and you all did that well. I think it would have been a bit better if you all made it into a cypher breaking off lines/ like trading five bars each or more and continue off each others thoughts but they are three strong pieces without alot of emotion and expression.

we are all busy grrls dro....no time for that


but yeah thanks for the replies......i love these grrls

Bwahaha..you funny man.

Thanks though.

Definitly a great piece

And of course i like all three of you cause you know, uhh your cool

But yeah Feme you are just dreamy ...

*does a weird thumb and finger clap*

*tips beret to the three of you*

I'm lovin' it... full of estrogen representin' for the female specimen. GRRL POWER

nice....good work ladies....fire mos def

for christ's sake look at my work sometime.......then u shall see...

As Architecht said, each person came with their different perspective of "what a woman is" and each, for the most part, complimented the other.

Mocha, I enjoyed the description in your verse and its fluidity. Feme, I also love your wordplay (you remind me of a female version of myself...lol). You're also very creative. Rosa, I liked your description as well. However, some parts were not as strong as others.

Great job overall ladies. Here are the lines that I enjoyed by each poet:

Mocha:

PROVIDING DETAIL TO NATURE'S SCENE/ GIVING FORMAT TO PRONOUNS/EQUALING TO "HE" AS "SHE" AND "HIS" TO "HERS"/BEGINNING PERSONALITY/

Feme:

A warrior princess
that holds the portal of life
between her delicate limbs.

She’s lovely and breaks the hearts of men,
But it’s only because she wants to give HERS to them.
A few sleep with men for punishment,
Others for reward.
She is all woman
Can you hear her roar?

Rosa:

Many men have packed their bags to further examine
Newer things
To try and make sense of a monstrosity..
Instead of, ‘what’s in this woman,
What is she about?’
They all walked on by, but I know
Her story, her being is something that cannot be lived


GOOD COLLAB : )

Feelin the different aspects you three came with, that's what made it. I have no complaints really, but mocha please! I beg of you, chill with the caps!!!!!!

one luv

damn! all three of you coming with that deep shit, this collab's settin shit on fire, hot..ladies keep it up...much love

peace

*applauds*

girls, it gave me chills. rarely does a piece do that. i sense extraordinary passion in this piece..loved it beginning to end. amazing work.

*applauds*
ill stuff nice work ladies

well dam what can i say that hasn't been said very nice drop

Thank you Speedy, Mind~$oul, 49th, lala, art, and in4it

aight.. feme sole --> dont be lazy you couldve broke up mocha's lines.. now the 3 styles are mismatches as well as the stories.. its 3 different stories.. it should read as one story from 3 different people.. i think fukkedupkidr came best far as i know pieces like these are your specialty (love related pieces).. personally i felt fukkedupkidr came 3rd person but described a woman in a way that was so true to life.. mocha came with explanation, feme the same wit a lil imagery.. feme get out that fantasy land of superwoman.. feme came wit imagery but i mean that was really used in a wrong way i mean feme use negative images in a positive way.. theres a hooker portrayed as a heroine.. then she is called bitch or whore.. those cant be left as they are they need some sort of justification on the woman's part, the woman's just insulted an left alone that dont work, defend that woman an make her seem like a blessing or an angel.. aight mocha.. lacks imagery an a concrete idea.. dont know what else to say keep elevatin.. i dont know mocha/feme sole came off too much dependent on men in their verses fukkedupkidr actually twisted that shit an flipped it to men are dependent on women.. i liked that.. like i said styles mismatched.. imagery & concreteness need work.. i think its fine that fukkedupkidr came 3rd person cuz it was done right but mocha/feme needed to come first person or jus work out the imagery & ideas.. aight.. good ideas but underdeveloped this really needed more effort to be put into it.. keep elevatin..