mizzOe. vs breathlesss (cypher battle)

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  1. breathlesss

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/emcee-battle-area/1277411-razputin-vs-smittyrhythm.html#post1068753239


    we were going back and forth for a bit on the cypher crap, so i figured, why not get a voting since i'm sure we both think we came out ahead, would like some others' opinions tho, i put it into chronological order

    first to 5 votes



    08-02-2011, 06:23 PM
    Breathlesss

    so if ONE DROPLET hits the OLD rug, LET ALONE the CARPET, don't just TOSS IT
    ARSON the whole FUCKIN' HOME, unless there's PLENTY of AMMONIA in the chemical CLOSET
    i'm at the PINNACLE of SOLVIN' this METRIC KIND of unSMARTness from these AMATEURS
    too many SYLLABLES' the PROBLEM? nah, yer TETRA-MINDED, these BARS are in PENTAMETER
    meaning, FIVE NODS of yer HEAD IN A LINE, i'm aHEAD A' MY TIME, it's HARD to underSTAND BUT YER
    CHALLENGE IS THIS...rap outSIDE a' this BLACK BOX for once and START some EVANGELIST SHIT

    *typical rap beat timing is tetrameter (4/4 or 4/8), this would be considered 5/6,
    capitolized bits only to define general location of "beat expression" try it, pentameter
    opens your mind, and it sounds neat on 4/4 beat as well, keeps stepping forward on it...




    08-03-2011, 10:02 AM
    mizzOe.

    i've yet to see someone make me pause when they flow
    i'm a herbal addict, blow so much clouds i cause tornadoes
    i torch and flame those chosen few who step in my vicinity
    give dap to those who feelin' me - then go on a vicious killing spree
    man this is me in my realty, it's just in my nature to be hatin' you heavy
    i'm breaking you steady before i slash through you with Jason's machete
    fuk are you ready? cuz like the a single nut, you couldn't test, I
    think about it, cuz when i bless mics, all of the rest die
    so get off this page if you can't hang with the greatest
    your language is hated cuz you're just bad with session rhymes
    and it looks like some of you took my advice a tad ahead of time



    08-01-2011, 11:01 AM
    breathlesss

    no need to say it, your raps are plenty gay, just stop, zack, ready...
    think yer phat, but you ain't never ate a god damn emcee
    when it comes to rap, I'm the heavyweight, hip hop's jack dempsy
    I'm still gassed up, winnin' any race, yer drop's ran empty
    you shoulda thought it through with that shit yer talkin', i'm a rhyme killer
    you're gettin' chalked practically every line like some techn9ne filler (how he says "Chah"
    dog, instead of battling you should just try billiards
    lots of sticks and balls, just how you like it, ha, I'm iller



    08-03-2011, 10:22 AM
    mizzOe.

    my rhymes a vicious and will make this kid bitch out and piss again
    leave you ripped out and twitching when i leave you in ditch out in Michigan
    your whole squad is what i'm iller than - so just chill
    cuz when we say you're sick... ILL is what you make us feel
    so take this steel, and blast yourself cuz we're done feelin' B
    and we couldn't give a fuck when you tried to explain ya dumb similes
    i just won with an ease - cuz this sessions a joke cuzzz
    now excuse me as i toke my herbs, and green out like the incredible hulk does



    08-03-2011, 05:17 PM
    breathlesss

    Keep quiet, quit even tryin' to legitimize this nonsense
    I wouldn't be surprised if you don't receive a single dignified response miz
    just because you're knowledge-less doesn't mean mine's where the problem is
    I got clean lines like i laundered 'em, your bean vines aren't sprouted yet
    ...and as for all them so called lost metaphors,
    they don't get absorbed, I just soften 'em into similes for the less intelligent forms
    of simple thinking idiots, who dwell on the boards 'til peeled away from
    what wood've been an elegant support, a seal on the foundation
    but I've found that most people hate this sorta language 'cause they're clothes minded
    weather trend endorsed, or not, you still blow at rhymin', stop
    there's no good time to drop so just sign yerself out an' say goodbye
    otherwise end up the first online rapper on a thousand ways to die



    08-03-2011, 05:39 PM
    breathlesss

    thanks deth, yea, i'm old, been doin' weird mathematical crap for awhile,
    was into poetry before i even liked rappy stuff, i'd like to find a talented
    enough beatmaker to to atypical time stuff and make whole songs, but eh...

    and mizzoe, it's 6 bars...of whatever *ameter you so choose
    and try to keep with the rhyme/topic above you, coccyx...

    you need a device to craft a better line, sliced in half a second by
    the nicest asshole ever, why? 'cause I like to smash contestant minds
    I decided that ahead a' time, now the chime has passed, press rewind
    find the track and let it grind until yer spine is cracked a second time
    yer disc skips a vital beat, you're already plenty lame an' at fault miz
    beefin' dirty, you need to end it, or get put on the FDA's recalled list



    (then there was three people between there...)
    08-03-2011, 09:55 PM
    mizzOe.

    I pass the blessings, on the mic I kept these bastards guessing
    breathless tryin' to school motherfuckers, like we asked for lessons?
    cuz judging by your past progressions - you were always whack
    a whorish cat who produces nothing but garbage and boring raps
    it's all an act, my flow be vicious i spit and flip cars with it
    i got rhymes for days - so fuck you and your six bar limit



    08-03-2011, 10:17 PM
    mizzOe.

    i only skimmed through your verse before i done dropped
    like a rock when you throw it across water and it bounces a lot
    a lot of pathetic lines dude - so ima son this cats crew
    got rusty shank too, if you wonder if i'll run and hack you
    the answer is; I would/wood chop, like lumber jacks do
    then bury you in a mountain of lead, for doubting my cred
    clueless he was; when homie sent this out of his head
    like before he was only breathless, now he's just dead
    so fuck what you said, ima prove this kids a troll
    don't get it twisted - i'm just fuckin around and do this for the lol's
    test
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    day 2

    08-04-2011, 05:44 AM
    breathlesss

    My god...I'm just just sayin'...shit, 'tard, quit it...
    I didn't make the cypher topic, I'm just a bit part in it
    all this bitchin' and whinin' kid, go cry fer ya momma
    my first drop ever was better than the finest you've gotten
    man, if i really wanted to i could do a five minute long diss
    track against your ass so simple an' have no issues on the song tip



    08-04-2011, 06:29 AM
    mizzOe.

    that's a tad wrong kid - you could try but can't hit this savage
    you could make a 4hr diss, but ya bars still lack punches, like christian taverns
    my spits be spazzin' - hurting kids and their bitch feelings
    you remind me of myself, when i took a dump... this evening
    ha, fuck it, i'm rhyming and just sonnin' kids for enjoyment
    and B you be doing man/dates without government employment.



    08-04-2011, 06:52 AM
    breathlesss

    omg! all that's served in them religious bars is nonalcoholic, nerd
    talkin' about no punches in church shit, unless yer speakin' of fights dude
    but either way, really, did you ever read the bible?
    now I'm no extremist, I don't believe christ was the son of god...
    any more than I am, or you are, now it's twice that you've come an' gone
    an' both times you done somethin' wrong, thinkin' thoughts, you had one in all



    08-04-2011, 06:59 AM
    mizzOe.

    pssh... you're the dumbest whore son, i run this forum
    you're under, crawling - i ain't the one to put up lines to
    and i have read the Bible, it's full of shit, just like your rhymes dude
    so get up and climb through the passage of greatness
    your acting is heinous, it's not lie, i'm a savage who rapes kids
    you ain't top tier, at best, you're just average and lame bitch



    08-04-2011, 07:10 AM
    breathlesss

    obviously you've been around the lead a lot
    taken innumerable shots to the brain 'til the redness stopped
    and then it clotted in tumorous spots, the rumor is I'm the new hot potato
    while yer an old tuber that rots, dead underground, never havin' appearances
    less than a dozen posts in just over a year, yer average, once a month, period
    callin' me a damn troll, dude, you get eaten by moles, chewed
    if i proceed to expose you i'd need to dig deep in the holes that you
    keep yourself close to, go sole-seek some help, mizzoe, shoe



    08-04-2011, 07:25 AM
    breathlesss

    so, with the facts a' that last statement, you have to be..catholic...ain't it?
    me average? only limits you ever hit is the statutory for gayness
    there should be a statue erected to honor my glory and greatness
    your gory horror core's been played kid, we ain't interested
    who care about what sick shit gave you an erection
    save it for the testimony, you'll get yer day in court kid
    don't judge me homie, i'm not you, next i won't say "aborted"
    'cause the way you formed those syllables so simple, it's no quiz
    but this testament states that you will never make a formidable opponent



    08-04-2011, 07:33 AM
    mizzOe.

    sorry man, no amount help could save this dude
    goes out of his way to apologize for breaking rules
    the latest news is that mizz shttin' on white herbs
    i flow easy son, you're still trying to syllabify words
    go ahead turn to the original plot of this thread
    and prove to me that you couldn't hang with hottest instead



    08-04-2011, 07:38 AM
    mizzOe.

    you're wasting my time, i've beat you - i'm a star in these forums
    so you only get a bar and three quarters



    08-04-2011, 07:44 AM
    breathlesss

    alright, now that's got through yer head let's just move on
    one las thing tho, you blow hard in the colliseum, in your final forum fantasy you're the Chupon...
    ha, sorry, but you've been on that wrong path for too long
    ...you don't wanna get caught up in that nuance
    ...you need a new one, so either choose somethin' or just screw off
    I'm gettin' sick a' clickin' these yellow links redirectin' me to groupon



    08-04-2011, 09:22 AM
    breathlesss

    you're hardly artistic, just a retarded illiterate
    idiot savant without the savant part in it
    grow up if you wanna start shit, go plant a crop or somethin'
    I got ample drops to bust and you just have a lot of nothin'
    buncha shitty raps, braggin' about smokin' from yer middy sacks
    nigga I blast hard, leave you chokin' from the dro in my glass jars
    don't go getting mad 'cause I said the n-word, you'll just waste bars
    wasn't it just two hours back in the six line thread-you're who pulled the race card?
    this unjust defiance gets justified by it's unbiased opinions
    for once try to witness what's inside this divine intuition
    I was through with this kid shit like a decade ago, why're you still into it
    your impotent compared to my omnipotence, it's as simple as this
    take a good look in the mirror next time you pop those pimples you mizzed



    08-04-2011, 10:01 AM
    mizzOe.

    you seem foolish, to kill you i don't even need bullets
    must've taken you a while to write that
    but guess what, i didn't even read through it
    so just quit with your weak bar structuring bro
    you can't fuck with the flow when i'm stuck in the zone
    you must be bonkers if you think your text renders good?
    so quit and just fuck up kid, like a real sex offender would



    08-04-2011, 10:46 AM
    mizzOe.

    class is in session, time to educate the whackest peers
    first take a toke and get lifted as high as the stratosphere
    weak lyrics we ain't having here, ask why i'm hurtin' G's
    i'm hot, but have a cold side like the dark side of mercury
    i'd still be vicious, bite and bark when i'm thirty three
    there's no way that ya'll murkin' me - the reps keep rising
    til you step to me, and I ninja kick you over the event horizon



    08-04-2011, 01:48 PM
    breathlesss

    oh, it makes sense now, why's it every juggalo makes an attempt at rhymin'
    thinkin' yer the best at rhymin', dude, accept that I'm it
    you need someone to astonomically tutor ya
    what's hotter than the planet you used? oh, probably jupiter
    essentially a second sun, setting up for stale mate
    you failed, wait, I reckon from just one punch on yer frail frame

    *edited last part off and put on other thread, meant to split it into a 6 and 8,
    having words with one person in two places is odd



    08-04-2011, 01:52 PM
    breathlesss

    ...from this pale faced insane grasp coulda doubled you over with the same hand
    it's a strange land we're livin' in, how you can hit yer limits but still remain flat,
    mizz, this isn't somethin' that's been made up in yer brain damn,
    adjust yer set, try to clear up the confusion
    like Confucius says, you're nearest to where you're at
    and it'll stay the same until the day's came when the purest path
    has opened before your face, then make way for the cure at last
    it's clear as glass, but it appears bad luck for you since the mirror's cracked
    test
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    the end

    08-04-2011, 03:24 PM
    NOBLE SOLDIER

    try to leave me breathless and i'll leave u lifeless..
    fuck'n biters, using others rhymes doesnt make u the nicest..
    Trifling.. Break out the rifle and start the cleaning process.
    Use your head as the target and you'll become a myth like the monster @ loch ness..
    After the shot.. like your bitch, i've got u topless..
    Then scavenge the body and go up in your pockets...



    08-04-2011, 04:02 PM
    breathlesss

    never bitten, shit, this is always legitimate, nonsense
    what a ridiculous comment to have on the internet, nob, get
    cut down to size, 'cause you only got a noble whim, soldier?
    ever sold yer tracks, no? oh, sure, yer on some global enclosure
    yea, active on the radio scale as much as present day chernobyl exposure
    yer a no one, want some closure? lemme deeply delve here...
    ummm, seventy thousand posts? rEally? and twelve years...
    eventually aren't you s'posed to reach the next level, weird?
    but, i'm pretty sure you won't, 'cause dude, you're still into naruto
    there's a clue, so, you might grow up, but you will never've grew old
    yer a two tone rapper, i'm on some multiple hues shit
    i won the laureate grant in latin, so you can call it a test tube kit
    complex, did ya lose it? frozen and worthless, some rubix cube goldberg
    bomb threats...more like a newb or a cold herb, flaky and frosted, dude, full serviced



    08-04-2011, 09:36 PM
    mizzOe.

    let the ratchet swing - my punches keep attackin' him
    you must bite dawg...
    cuz you go from whack, to decent back to whack again
    you got me laughin when you try to spit a mean verse
    and fuck a written, dude you should learn to free first
    test
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    btw

    that wasn't against you, just bustin' some shit in the cypher thread
    test
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    that's fine...don't really see how it's not, while being in the middle of it and what not, i mean, yea, it's cool tho, i imagine this'll never be voted on anyhow
    test
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