Mista Freeze 2001 vs Heart Cloaker.

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  1. HeartCloaker

    HeartCloaker Winter is coming

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    I wasn't going to do this, but then I thought, "Eh, why not, it'll shut him up." This is a battle to decide if my vote against him in his battle with LP counts. No joke.

    @Freeze: You have to count it if I win.


    With a big buh-bam he can catch a back hand.
    I’ve seen Batman, I know this brat’s bland.
    It happens with ease too, Bats makes Freeze lose.
    My homies agree fool, you’re just a wee tool.
    Ice is see through, so why’s it easy to see you?
    Like an evil chef, I want to see freezer burn.
    It’s my freaking turn so this flea will learn.
    Arkham, don’t free the jerk with feelings hurt.
    Need help? Start seeking mercs you seething twerp.
    Sealing works on temperature- so does trousers.
    Losing to bad clothes shows you’re absent of powers.
    So I’m not surprised those powers make you blue,
    I’m not talking color you powdered up buffoon.
    You sad loser with two thousand and one faults,
    I take Ivey, knock your tooth out, and assault.
    Couldn’t burn me with a salt come to a halt.
    You’re all trying to steal diamonds out of a vault.
    Why? Because your misshapen raps can’t go gold.
    Oh, told! Think you’re so cold? I’m not so sold.
    Bro scold, because we know you can’t rap well.
    This scrap fell, so next time keep a strapped belt.
    The Joker won’t commend breaking seat belt laws.
    You’re a sea of flaws that no real MCs applaud.
    Squeeze a broad and get off your damn period.
    I am serious, you get ate, just lamb meat to us.
    Dancing to dusk I know the advance of the sun.
    Its rays frequently easily eat away at the freeze,
    Tortured every day the morning ails you with heat.
    You’re frail and weak so you fail to compete.
    Like meddlers to mysteries I take down Mr. Freeze.
    Now mister leave, we won’t miss your sleaze.
    Fuck trickery you get taken down no shit in sleeve.
    That crap you slang doesn’t call for a batterang.
    Maybe a battering, ‘cause it’s just you blathering.
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  2. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    *DOCTORS surrounding HEART CLOAKER'S Fallen body*

    I don't think he's gonna make it! He is fading fast! I don't know if we can revive him! HE SHOULD HAVE KNOWN 2 BETTER THAN 2 FUCK WITH FREEZE!! Someone bring the CABLES! He is Fading... He is fading...

    *BEEP..... BEEP..... BEEP....*

    Go in2 Hearts habitat. Strip him of his helmet and battle axe/
    Have WESTBROOK pull the "HAMMER" back.../
    And watch this fake THOR get his "THUNDER CLAPPED" (SHOUTS 2 RUSSELL WESTBROOK)/
    HEART CLOAKER I'll start 2 choke ya until U have a CARDIAC/
    Your lungs' collapse until a gunny sack has HEART ATTACK-ed under that/
    Another chap I have 2 SUGAR SMACK. I have APPLE JACKS flavored battle raps/
    But even with "FROOTY LOOPS" & HERMES CAP/
    HEART still lacks the tact 2 RUN A TRACK/
    This bummy Kat with crummy snaps/
    Came on here and started dissin FREEZE/
    But 2 be honest black he didn't want 2 rap/
    He just wanted 2 look at CHRISTMAS TREES/

    QUOTE HEART CLOAKER : Lyrical took the time to make his verse into a Christmas tree. Who else is turning their disses into Christmas trees? No one. You're not on Lyrical's lyrical level until your verses make the shapes of things.

    NIGGA PLEASE!/
    I aint just talking his "LYRICAL" level when I tell U that this MAN SUCKS/
    Don't believe me? Check him judging my battle all he did was express his MAN CRUSH (God please stop jockin PRIEST so HARD! There aint no room for HIS DICK!)/

    QUOTE HEART CLOAKER : @LP: Your majestic modesty shines in ways Freeze could only dream of shining, but there's no need for it. No one could make such a perfect tree on accident- unless...! No, it couldn't be... Could it? Could you be the Super Rapper of legends?

    MAN WHAT?/
    I guess he thought he was being clever but all he did was now show me/
    That he wasn't THOR. He's his GAY brother. He's actually on the "DOWN LOKI"/
    So I went 2 ODIN and asked his permission "Is it okay if I Maim this Kid"/
    Odin said FUCK HEART this duck mark only claims MIDGARD because of the RAINBOW BRIDGE/
    This Bitch nigga's a switch hitter. He's probably pumping a Guy right now/
    He's a MIDGET PLUMBER from Canada. So every night we know Heart's LITERALLY gettin "PIPED DOWN"/
    It's appropriate that this battles so close 2 CHRISTMAS cause I possess a "GIFTED" flow/
    And I not trying 2 dis U Bro/
    But what's up U with hittin massage parlors ONLY wearing thongs made out of MISTLETOE!/
    This guy didnt want 2 battle. He really just wanted 2 touch PRIEST CLOSE UP/
    Hes like a EUROPEAN CENTER in the NBA! HEART IN ALL HONESTY NEVER ACTUALLY WANTS 2 POST UP!/
    FUCK THOR! FREEZE is more like TONY STARKS! I "AVENGE" disses by bringing the "IRON MAN"/
    Bullets fill this hater until a defibrillator gets placed upon his diaphram/
    Like DAVID BLAINE with Taser and slight of hand/
    I am about 2 SHOCK the NATION/
    By removing HEART's buzz from off these walls like a LIFE SIZE GAME OF OPERATION!

    *FLAT LINE_____________________________*

    HEART U R A BYTCH but U honestly amuse me! I actually am NOT done with U!!! I am going 2 keep pasting your BYTCH AZZ 4 EVER!!! Oh but to answer your question I will count your vote if U win! Hell I will COUNT IT TWICE!! It won't matter! I am gonna have FUN beating U up! FUCK U AND THREE BYTCH NIGGAZ THAT LOOK LIKE U!!!

    This is just round one of MANY!!!! LET'S GO Y'ALL!!!

    Oh and I don't care who votes for U I'm going 2 keep SMASHING U ANYWAY!!!

    THIS I COMMAND!!!
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  3. HeartCloaker

    HeartCloaker Winter is coming

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    Can you produce a doctor's note stating that you're healthy enough for another round? I don't want to kill you and every time I post you're spazzing out like nothing I've ever seen. Claiming I have an imaginary Canadian girlfriend, making stories of sexual relations between me and LP, claiming I'm a "gangsta" and for some reason asking if I want you to send me pictures of girls. All that just from when I voted against you, I can see you getting worked up then dying with just one more diss... But to be willing to put your life on the line even though you know you could never win...
    THIS I COMMEND!!!
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  4. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    vote= heart cloaker

    heart had a very well structured verse with quick one hitters sprinkled here and there, his approach was personal and to the point, took a while for me to get the batman references but yeah bats make freeze lose was sick

    freeze was all over the place, while usually i am impressed with his verses he lacked something here, i think a lot of his punches called for me to use google to comprehend, if i did research on a few of his lines it might have been closer like the midgard bridge i dont know what the fuck that is, but first reading through ima hafta give it to cloaker

    vote= heart cloaker
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  5. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    MAN WHERE R THE VOTES? It is hard 2 get ppl on this site!
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  6. HeartCloaker

    HeartCloaker Winter is coming

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    I see where my vote's at. They must be like women because I don't think you can get one.
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  7. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    Boy this SUCKS! What does it take 2 get U ppl 2 vote? Its okay....

    I PLAN ON DISSING HEART JOKER AGAIN SOON JUST 4 FUN!!!
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  8. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    HC: i felt as your verse was more of a "poetic-narrative" , you had a lot of personal lines that had a "ow" effect, when reading your verse i felt as if you had it, your format was more polished and, your word placement was more difficult and articulate

    Freeze: You had great energy you brought here, some of your punches sorta missed the mark for me, but the ones that did hit, hit hard! a lot of creativity going on here.. your verse was a lil drawn out tbh.. with all the HC quotes and shit, i felt a chore reading your verse. i feel that a lot of your verse will go over heads.

    both writers did they thing.. but since HC has to win, in order for me to win my battle verses Freeze..

    vote- HC

    :scared:

    LoL

    ps I liked the line from HC "this i commend"

    freeze a lot of your material and approach was cliche.. your very creative and unique, i suggest working on, steering clear of what has been done a million times. and adding any filler to ur battles.. if u did those things whhheewww you'd be a battle cat f'real!

    i respect both writers
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  9. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    *FREEZE chuckling*

    Thanx Lyrical! I haven't texted battled in a while. Just a little Rusty but I am having Fun getting my Legs back! I hope more ppl battle on this and then I will give my Opinion...

    THIS I COMMAND!!!
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