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  1. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    Mirror 7

    Mirror Seven-Seven-trickle sand into paper heaven
    Drowning dolphins intellect amid spiral weapons
    Life is a vortex question repeating thee answer
    Where opportunity is like a shrinking mountain
    Balancing act of the soul no second chances
    Core descending outcomes undo lessons
    Just Mirror perfection under quicksand
    Discern dust - unlearn all awareness
    Number each grain in each hand
    Mirror-Remember every pain
    Stolen moments unplanned
    Hearts broken in vain
    A midnight crave
    Daylight Savings
    A daydream untamed
    First saved Sunday raised
    Mary Mirror Mary JC 7 graves
    Ran sackers forgot handkerchief
    Every cloak/clock has a different face
    Poets shroud thoughts in makeshift maze
    Infinite remains contained in a fragile cage
    A transparent lizard dancing in a careless rage
    Moving in fast forward down sliding desert waste
    The world is an Hour Glass filled with Jesus pennies
    Now waterfall all your flaws in the golden loyal morals
    Time is truly of the essence heavyweight poem no escape
    Mirror- seven 7 upside down copy shape kissing 4 corners
    How many different ways does God love you - just echo 28








    Draw a seven then draw it backwards kissing (mirror) then draw it upside down in its reflection kissing….a total of 4 – “7”s…an hour glass of perfection…..just something I was playing around with and thought it was cool, maybe significant and spur of the moment this is what I wrote.

    4 X 7 = 28 (an hour glass….28 lines….do the math….haha got a lil Chylltyrant in me)

    28 – 2 times 8 (twice infinite…. that’s how much God loves us)
    test
  2. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    Wow...where do you get the motivation for these pieces,lol...This was creative...I get your explanation, I just have to read it again to understand the poem,lol

    Your creativity is appreciated!
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  3. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    Infinite remains contained in a fragile cage

    ^ this poem was good man, really good lines for real man.
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  4. Nebulaz

    Nebulaz fear God, not man

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    I enjoy how you throw salvation and Jesus into your pieces every once in awhile. Good to see another christian posting.
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  5. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    It was creative I'll give you that, but would anybody get it if you had not explained it? Probably not lol but I thik we all have these things we do and discover that are special to us and it's cool that you shared...even if I'm not feeling the poem =P
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  6. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    I feel so lost amoung you talented people.... The mind is something when we use it for positve thought and creativity...Nice drop fam!...

    P.s..lol
    I don't know if you guies and Ladies(MODS) can helpme with this ?.
    Why can't I post any new threads?
    Did I do something wrong? Let me know..Thanks Peace...
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  7. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    holy shit, oddie.

    this was incredible. I don't know if I'd have the patience yet for something like this.


    Why aren't you ever on aim anymore?

    great piece

    Bless.
    test
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