Mirror's Response

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  1. Revanon FL

    Revanon FL No excuses just execution

    Jan 17, 2009
    Woke up earlier than usual

    Headed to the studio

    Bout to do some tracks today....

    I had some questions for the mirror

    to make it seem clearer

    and this is what it had to say...

    Your such a bitch of man...

    the relationship you claim you have with your kids, what's the difference if they lived in japan

    while you steady complaining how the women aren't treating you better

    it's probably cause their intuition knows you ain't got your whole life together

    sure you're a great guy when it counts

    but why cry when the shit don't work..just pick yourself up and bounce

    if you put the effort in your kids that you do in these girls

    you would make a bigger impact in each of their worlds

    you're not OLD but your complaining is tired as fuck

    if you only did something about your life then your life wouldn't suck

    but when you...sit on your ass and blame the world for your troubles

    that's when you find yourself on the bench getting jealous at couples

    you gotta work for what you want...stop talking for a minute

    shut your fucking mouth and put your two hands in it

    sacrifice more than you have already...reach for the top

    do without simple things and don't think with your crotch

    you claim you want honesty well this is my view

    stop concentrating on other people put the finger on you

    sure a life shared makes things easier, it's good when they care

    but you gotta be able to provide for them...and right now you're not prepared

    so enjoy what life brings in the present...I love ya my brother

    if you happen to meet another...make the goal not the smother

    be the father you know you are...do whatever it takes

    take your kids by surprise let them be the reason you wake

    follow your dreams and mean what you say when you speak it

    cause everyone loves a rising star when it's peakin....
  2. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

    Apr 10, 2003
    this is horrible
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