Mind Stimulation

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by 49th Prophet, Nov 8, 2003.

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  1. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    so this is a love poem?
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  2. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    Lol, you is a trip Prophet, but, everytime you do, you manage not to hit the ground, but touch the sky...Keep it up...peace...
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  3. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Xero life is a permanent trip for me...lol..Im sure you know some of the reasons for that..

    StubbilyMug, nah man this aint a love poem..

    much love

    peace
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  4. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    lol.


    nice drop
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  5. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    wow dude didn't know you had so many styles shit this was hot hehe man oh man i want to be that simple yet be sooo deep damn kid awesome
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  6. *DowntownStar*

    *DowntownStar* ____________________

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    my mind's eye saw the stone statue of beethoven reading this lol

    nice... play with the style sometime to get a new angle going. i should try that too sometime...
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  7. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    ^^
    yeah beethoven would be proud...lol
    yo MisterEThoughts chill on the chronic...lol..jk, fuck Im one to talk..

    thanks for the replies guys, its appreciated,

    but what do ya'll think, should I post this in the writers challenger for different style of poems?
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  8. S.aviorY.ouN.ow

    S.aviorY.ouN.ow New Member

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    Peace:

    49th...this is the first time I've read a piece from you. I gotta say as soon as I finished reading I knew that you were ill. This may not be one of your better pieces but the talent is obvious. I'll definately be lookin for your next piece. Good work.
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  9. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Thanks for the love, however I hope you didnt take this too seriously, if you read any of my other work you'll notice quite a difference, I just wrote this out of the blue as something a little more light hearted than my usual shit..

    Still tho thanks for the love

    its appreciated
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  10. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    Yes, it is.
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  11. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    ^^
    Yeah you're right, you caught me,

    "it hurts my eyes to look at it
    but I still look an awful lot"

    Im not talking about the sun, Im talking about my gf,

    "If grass didnt grow
    we wouldnt have to cut it"

    This really symbolizes the struggle of a relationship,

    "a bird has a beak"

    If we didnt have noses we wouldnt be able to breathe, just like a bird with no beak, so this is really saying, breathe

    "he eats worms in the morning
    then at night he goes to sleep"

    This represents the precious cycle of being awake and being asleep

    So not only is this a love poem, it is full of hidden meanings, this poem is actually filled with immense, immense thought, I didn't throw it together in 45 second's, that would be too easy

    thank you for being so observant of my work
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  12. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    hahaha

    you're alright, number 49...
    you're alright...
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  13. mavrik...

    mavrik... Lyrically Transparent ...

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    lol, this actually made me smile man ... gave me a little warmth while it's 30 degrees outside. :) .. ha ha ha .. damn, give me some choc. milk while your at it .. i'm kind of thirsty as well.
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  14. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    StubbilyMug Im glad you caught that sarcasm..lol..but yo thanks for the reply

    mavrik Im glad I could bring you warmth with this simple piece, lol....thanks for the reply
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  15. IvyG

    IvyG New Member

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    hahha I see men with white jackets in your future as well... please pass it this way now....

    much <3
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  16. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    lol...aww nah...not the straight jackets again! last time it took me two weeks to gnaw through the straps..

    lol..thanks for the reply

    much love

    peace
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  17. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    damn... and this stupid ass shit got 35+ replies in the poetry realm...


    i fear for my children.
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  18. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    HAHAHA...as weird as it seems I take that as a compliment, thanks StubbilyMug

    peace
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