Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by 49th Prophet, Nov 8, 2003.
so this is a love poem?
Lol, you is a trip Prophet, but, everytime you do, you manage not to hit the ground, but touch the sky...Keep it up...peace...
Xero life is a permanent trip for me...lol..Im sure you know some of the reasons for that..
StubbilyMug, nah man this aint a love poem..
wow dude didn't know you had so many styles shit this was hot hehe man oh man i want to be that simple yet be sooo deep damn kid awesome
my mind's eye saw the stone statue of beethoven reading this lol
nice... play with the style sometime to get a new angle going. i should try that too sometime...
yeah beethoven would be proud...lol
yo MisterEThoughts chill on the chronic...lol..jk, fuck Im one to talk..
thanks for the replies guys, its appreciated,
but what do ya'll think, should I post this in the writers challenger for different style of poems?
49th...this is the first time I've read a piece from you. I gotta say as soon as I finished reading I knew that you were ill. This may not be one of your better pieces but the talent is obvious. I'll definately be lookin for your next piece. Good work.
Thanks for the love, however I hope you didnt take this too seriously, if you read any of my other work you'll notice quite a difference, I just wrote this out of the blue as something a little more light hearted than my usual shit..
Still tho thanks for the love
Yes, it is.
Yeah you're right, you caught me,
"it hurts my eyes to look at it
but I still look an awful lot"
Im not talking about the sun, Im talking about my gf,
"If grass didnt grow
we wouldnt have to cut it"
This really symbolizes the struggle of a relationship,
"a bird has a beak"
If we didnt have noses we wouldnt be able to breathe, just like a bird with no beak, so this is really saying, breathe
"he eats worms in the morning
then at night he goes to sleep"
This represents the precious cycle of being awake and being asleep
So not only is this a love poem, it is full of hidden meanings, this poem is actually filled with immense, immense thought, I didn't throw it together in 45 second's, that would be too easy
thank you for being so observant of my work
you're alright, number 49...
lol, this actually made me smile man ... gave me a little warmth while it's 30 degrees outside. .. ha ha ha .. damn, give me some choc. milk while your at it .. i'm kind of thirsty as well.
StubbilyMug Im glad you caught that sarcasm..lol..but yo thanks for the reply
mavrik Im glad I could bring you warmth with this simple piece, lol....thanks for the reply
hahha I see men with white jackets in your future as well... please pass it this way now....
lol...aww nah...not the straight jackets again! last time it took me two weeks to gnaw through the straps..
lol..thanks for the reply
damn... and this stupid ass shit got 35+ replies in the poetry realm...
i fear for my children.
HAHAHA...as weird as it seems I take that as a compliment, thanks StubbilyMug
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