Mind Stimulation

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  1. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    The sun is bright and yellow
    sometimes it is hot
    it hurts my eyes to look at it
    but I still look an awful lot
    the pavement is grey
    cars drive on the road
    I want some ice cream
    maybe rocky road
    If grass didnt grow
    we wouldnt have to cut it
    but we still have to mow
    or it looks ugly.

    I see a bird
    a bird has a beak
    he eats worms in the morning
    then at night he goes to sleep
    sometimes I sleep
    usually when Im tired
    I get in trouble when leprechauns
    tell me to play with fire
    I have to go drink some chocolate milk.
    test
  2. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    The only good thing that ever came from nobody just happens to be from this fool...but he's right, lol, really funny shit...It's deep though. About as deep as a piece of blank paper that will never be written on, lol...Damn yo, this made my day, lol...Imma write one now, lol, :lol:
    test
  3. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    lol...ahaha. this is a funny peice, had me smiling through it...hmm very different from you i must say..stilll good light hearted peice
    test
  4. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    lol.. that lepricorn line got me... the visions in our heads huh.. funny.. nice yo
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  5. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Wouldnt expect seein a piece like this comin from you lol. Tell me what was the inspiration? lol

    one luv
    test
  6. TrufDXaggerator

    TrufDXaggerator New Member

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    hmmm i write poems afta i drink, you wrote this after what?
    Yo u was buggin on dis one yo. I didnt kno wether to laugh and enjoy the images or shake my head to see if i wasnt trippin myself. Honestly I dont kno wut to say about dis yo.
    Truthfuly Speakin and Truf Fully Spittin OUT
    test
  7. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Thankx for the replies all, appreciate it,

    Truf I wrote this to be elementary on purpose, I wanted to try something different from my usual stuff, this is as different as I can be I think....lol

    but thankx for the honesty..

    much love

    peace
    test
  8. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    nice prophet..u should have posted this in the writers challenge...ofcourse its a very simple piece but i like it b/c its not the type of stuff u usually do...good job

    oh

    If grass didnt grow
    we wouldnt have to cut it

    damn i hate cuttin the grass...lol
    test
  9. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    lol, yeah cutting the grass sux..

    hahha...thanks for the reply lpoet

    appreciate it
    test
  10. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    "I get in trouble when leprechauns
    tell me to play with fire"


    HA HAHA good stuff, for some reason i feel there is more to this then just a good laff, But im not going to try and look to far into this.


    Stay Up, Much Love, Peace
    test
  11. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    lol...

    allnakey I don't really hear leprechauns..or do I?..

    Dun Dun Duunnn...

    thanks for the read and reply

    much love

    peace
    test
  12. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    personally i love cutting the grass lol
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  13. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    i replied to this joint but when i pressed the reply thing it didnt work...so im just gonna up it now....nice work!

    mad love
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  14. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Dark_Angel sell me whatever your smoking.......j/k =)

    thanks misspimp, means alot and I appreciate it

    much love

    peace
    test
  15. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    right . lol i was trying to read it all serious because thats normally how he writes except for when i got to "rocky road" because i cant not say that like chunk from the goonies. but anyway after that i went back to it reading serious and was like" huh?" when i was done. lol good stuff 49th
    test
  16. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    ^^ as everyone said before this did have me kind of laughing but I liked it nice drop 49th Prophet
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  17. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    lol...thanks h.wood...yeah I thought I would try something a little more enlightening then my usual serious work....thanks for the reply

    Good looking in4it...thanks for replying

    much love

    peace
    test
  18. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    It Works On So Many Fucking Levels!
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  19. StubbilyMug

    StubbilyMug DayorDollar Records

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    Are you in love?
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  20. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Yes, love is a pleasurable thing to me, if pleasure were to kiss some poisonous snakes, then yes, I have the pleasure of love.
    test
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