men are selfish dogs...*f**k u Travis*

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  1. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    im getting freaked out.......that's also my personal favorite line by lpoet and just yesterday i made the first step in getting out of an abusive relationship with someone named travis!......strange.....

    nice vent piece im sure all can relate....


    peace and blessings
    test
  2. Shibaby

    Shibaby betcha dollar i can do it

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    yea that is a lil weird......its always a good move when u care about u first when it comes to relationships. i was always puttin his feelins before mine. that's mental torture. never be with a man who doesnt care enough about u to value the way you feel.
    test
  3. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    I think this piece is perfect how it is, seemed like a vent, and venting isnt about presenting a perfect poem, its about getting shit off your chest so you don't explode, internally or externally. raw emotion, good piece.

    much love

    peace
    test
  4. nuffsayd03

    nuffsayd03 quiet storm

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    "whose gonna love me when my tears drop in the form of stones.
    nobody.
    im tired of crying, i just wanna live."

    I really liked this line a lot. The whole piece was tight though. I'm sure that you will get through it.
    ___________________
    I FIND IT'S DISTRESSING THERE'S NEVER NO INBETWEEN
    WE EITHER N*GG@S OR KINGS
    WE EITHER BITCHES OR QUEENS-MOSDEF, BLACK STAR
    test
  5. InTheStars

    InTheStars Reflective

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    Nice vent piece, thought that you got your point across pretty well.
    MUCH LUV
    test
  6. hekt1k

    hekt1k zero con

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    feelin it
    test
  7. browneyes

    browneyes New Member

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    dis was an alright poem.
    its cool cause i bet every1 has gone through some mess like dat
    its cool, keep it up
    test
  8. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    i just want my life back, before him...before us


    damn i can relate to that line right there if nothing else...love is a bitch and so is life....i dont have any good advice....even tho ive been thru the shit time and time again...but this piece was beautiful...beautifully done!!

    mad love
    test
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