men are selfish dogs...*f**k u Travis*

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  1. Shibaby

    Shibaby betcha dollar i can do it

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    break ups r bitches. no title just off the dome...can barely type....shaking/tears. try to have a fun life and there's always that man to fuck with u. bring u down. bring selfishness to the table and play with ur feelinz.



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    it's 1:06 in the morning and i'm feeling my heart turn cold.
    she's just been broken in a thousand places.
    still havent finished piecing her together from the last attack. damn.
    it's a bad feeling you know......being hurt.
    im trying to stay sane but the bullshyt just keeps fucking with me.
    i cant deal with this.
    love is a fucking monster just leave me alone.
    changed sides and fucked me over....i see how it is.
    fustrated, im lonely. it's like playing with fire
    the scars never heal but im feening for the burn.
    typing is hard but breathing isnt better....
    i just want my life back, before him...before us

    i just wanna be held, want the arguments to go away.
    just wanna be loved, that's it.
    just love.
    why is it so fucking hard.....im too young for this shyt.
    im too old to let it go. learn a new routine.
    put my heart on the line and this is the thanks i get.
    scissors in my face, knife in my heart.

    why is being alone so hard. i just wanna live.
    let me breath....let me cry.....life's a bitch.
    whose gonna love me when my tears drop in the form of stones.
    nobody.
    im tired of crying, i just wanna live.
    Travis... why cant i let go.


    ---im gone

    forgot replied to aesop's unable/love poem with no name/and you are hopeless (classic)
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  2. Shibaby

    Shibaby betcha dollar i can do it

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    oh yea LPOET i read this somewhere in someone's post someplace....i wanna read ur piece that has the line :

    "...she bathed in insecurity and dried with dirty men"....ahhhh i love it....."


    repost or something.
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  3. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

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    good work, fuck dude, but ima man and i aint bogus like that
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  4. Subconcious

    Subconcious CiPrIoLa DyNaStY

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    We all ain't like that. Keystyle or not this was pure emotion at it's finest girl...Don't look at it like you can't let go because eventually you just will. I have been through the same thing. Love is sort of like the devil's food. It sidetracks you so far from life and progression sometimes. Just look at it like you had him and he was too stupid to keep you, ya know? Love that becomes too deep is still love but I always looked at it like it becomes a dependency. I am sorry to hear about what happened but it brought out some raw emotion I wanna thank you for sharing.

    ^Luv^
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  5. quotive

    quotive 3

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    It was okay..

    "fustrated, im lonely. it's like playing with fire
    the scars never heal but im feening for the burn"

    Best part^

    Girl, I've been in the situation before... you think 19 is young? Try 15.. hardest thing ever. Love = FUCKED UP. But yo, keep your head up. Gave me insparation to write about my bitch of an ex. *Goes*
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  6. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    why is being alone so hard. i just wanna live.
    let me breath....let me cry.....life's a bitch.
    whose gonna love me when my tears drop in the form of stones.
    nobody.
    im tired of crying, i just wanna live.
    Travis... why cant i let go.


    good piece, and good read, it could of been a little better, but regardless it was good
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  7. Shibaby

    Shibaby betcha dollar i can do it

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    yea...coulda been better but honestly i could give a flying flip about who likes it or not....im venting...therapeutic sessions for my heart:) but thx for the replies.
    Im resillent...shyt dont bother me for long....im cool now.
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  8. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    aight yo i realized this was a venting piece from the get-go and shit, due to the format and all. Therapy needs to offered to more people, if only the spouse abusers and child abusers had some other form of therapy than to beat the living shit out of peeps. na what i mean it s a fucked up world we live in. Hey i hope everything works like it is meant to with your situation hur, keep ya head up one love
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  9. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    for real i hate love to
    i wish i could just have no sexual preference at times
    where i could just live
    and no one would appeal to me in a sexual way
    cuz im always fallin in love and end up doin crazy shit for that person

    love is a bitch,
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  10. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Yea heart ache is a bitch... but you know what, when you finally realize you dont need that person, you will feel so free. You will be able to just live. I know you could careless about the structre and everything about the piece, so I wont speak on it, it was just a good piece that get a lot out.


    Stay Up, Much Love, Peace
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  11. Shibaby

    Shibaby betcha dollar i can do it

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    scroll up and read my reply....i would like to read that poem.
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  12. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    To tell you the truth I dont remember that line at all, and I couldn't tell you what piece it came from... was it a recent piece or older?
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  13. Shibaby

    Shibaby betcha dollar i can do it

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    i need to get a refund from hooked on phonics sry baby meant lpoet:

    brain fart...

    ***i need a hug***
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  14. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    That's in a poem me and lpoet collabed on called "Hope Through A Seed", last year sometime. I just found it...i'ma go ahead and repost it
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  15. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    i'm honered...ima have mind soul repost it latter

    anyhow...this was dope..the piece has so much emotion in it..very reall..

    UP
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  16. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    A venting piece. The reader could feel the anger and frustration you gave off. keep it up

    one luv
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  17. Evg.poet

    Evg.poet As the Heart Speaks...

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    kool piece....very expressive....sometimes it even hurts to write....it feels a little better when u get it out though
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  18. Shibaby

    Shibaby betcha dollar i can do it

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    yea thx all for replying im better now....i usually dont lose my cool. but it's not er'vy day someone steps out and blames it on u. minor bullshyt of the past. i change my view not all men r dogs SOME. weak minded men. im good though im working and im gonna be leaving for school in august if that's wrong oh fucking well. holla at cha girl!

    -------Im gone
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  19. Craccer_Jacc

    Craccer_Jacc SudAnillyst

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    nice piece ... very expressive alot of emotion in it .... dont really know to much about love so i cant relate but it was very enjoyable... peace
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  20. really emotional, heartfelt, loves darker side..Sheesh..heavy piece..
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