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  1. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Is this the night or did I just forget to open up my eyes,
    is it these thoughts makin me petrified or am i really paralyzed,
    is it this terrain, or my reflection I dont recognize could it be,
    that this is really me, staring through these crimson eyes,
    Am i tryin to block these images the question is am i really blind,
    could it be I hold the key that Im trying so hard to find,
    is it the nightmares or the dreams keepin me subliminally confined
    Do I see a fantasy or are these angels really falling
    do I hear the heavens calling just because I wait here stalling,
    do i see birds of pray or are they just peacefully flying,
    do i feel strength emerge or is that a dragon inside me dieing,
    why is it that the most ferocious monsters always end up cryin,
    are those demons that I hear screamin or is that just my heart replyin to the feelins i want so bad life has no choice but to keep denying?
    test
  2. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    dam this was tight I liked the whole dam thing too many things in this too quote defenitly a beautiful peice
    test
  3. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    I agree with in4it that I could quote the whole damn thing, so I wont bother trying to. Instead, I could answer some of those questions you asked...Anyway, good shit here man, I love your work as always...wonderfull...
    test
  4. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Thanks for the love guys, believe me it means alot and I really appreciate it...much love

    peace
    test
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER I own you motherfuckers..

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    In control of the projects so come bold with logic like
    Mister Spock we blister a block with fever we the type
    Hot like Queen Lativah but not a diva so stop the hype
    Spit friction in your jurisdiction got you on hardcore restriction
    In this edition your pages stuck together duck and be clever no dereliction
    We parachute jump from airplanes and salute junk that flame
    You a cute punk with no game like prune over grit you pat and lame
    So where you at kid I'm over at Haynes buying a name
    test
  6. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Nice piece, I was feeling the whole thing, Everyline was just as good as the next.


    stay up, much love, peace
    test
  7. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    allnakey thanks for peepin and respondin, I appreciate it...much love

    peace
    test
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