Mary Anne

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  1. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    -Mary Anne-

    Six operated the greater plan
    they all...
    Picked pocketed a paper bag
    In it was...
    A girl hominid...behavior bad!
    whom...
    Gets closeted in Nature's pad
    to...
    Fix gossip in then lecture grads

    And it goes:

    It's sick this flavor is a major fad
    Absent is this neighbor, Mary Anne
    She is daffodils, kissing on this Handy Mann
    Her bitching insists on priss, I is Peter Pan
    Eyes rolling, legs split her Miss. beaver dam
    She be eager and a leader of either plan
    Trick-or-treat, but inhale her in a Reefer Van

    This is getting out of hand,

    My psyche is sirens sounding mad
    mind is Gotham, time is ad-hominam
    I recall a silence in a golden asylum man
    On an island swollen with diamond bands
    In holds of Zion, deep oceans of almond sands
    Broken, corrosion, the omen keeps on going and...
    Mary Anne for a moment shook then slammed
    with shoulders of knowing...what our futures had.

    And it was not pretty.

    Love,

    A better man.



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    Coup d'état, Oct 30, 2012
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    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    I'm not a huge fan or the same rhymes for the enter poem but I really enjoyed this. It was precise and was well written. I like how you added another level to your writing abilities with these short poems. You are an absolute delight most days.....until you face me then i utterly hate your work :p
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  4. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    lol do I smell a grudge match ? Thanks for the feed.
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