Got Life - I understand the fact that you say I didn't come from a very creative approach with my piece last week. Its a bit true, I didn't think too deeply into having some crazy topic i just saw that picture of distorted clocks and felt to use that as a 'times are changing' theme, which I think is a creative idea. And when I read your piece I didn't find much creativity at all, considering there is no way to know that was a personal experience (until you have now told us that it was) that is a story that i have heard in real life a million times, not to mention its probably been done in leagues a lot of times. When you think about how you approached your topic, you just wrote an emotional piece about a personal experience that was quite simple, the strongest part about it was the emotion, and if we don't know its real emotion, sometimes it doesn't strike as that way. Do you understand what I'm saying? You had no crazy twists or approaches in your piece, and sometimes I feel that your rhyming style can be a bit bland. Reading pieces from I dunno and Runna Da Mille (to name a couple I enjoy reading the most ) they have creative metaphorical and rhyming approaches to every line in their verses. This is the reason I felt Dic had the better piece this week. The only reason I write this is because I thought it interesting that you mentioned how I wasn't very creative with my approach, yet your approach was incredibly basic. Not hatin at all dude, I like your writing and I really enjoyed the piece, just my 2 cents.