Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Lucifa, May 5, 2008.
what vote did i discredit? lol
my point has been proven
oh none my bad i must of thought cause you didnt pm me bout it you where trying to make it public
hoolly shit do u win
now this was actually funny, i didnt even know what you were talkin about at first
but lol, i didnt discredit anything though, i just thought it was a bit confusing being that i didnt have ANY one syllable rhymers
broke - joke - coke - throat
sleep - weak - beep - peek - deep
.. its stacked
but wat ever faggot i said it helped
but all of those lines are at least 3 syllable rhymers, some 4 or 5
blood when it broke
stuck with a joke
stung in my throat
pain to sleep
Drained and weak
came a beep
strained to see
gain a peek
stain was deep
see what i mean?
and i wasnt nitpicking your vote or swaying or anything, it just caught my eye, you owe me no explanation as to why you thought i lost, im not the type to contend votes
and you know i normally would have p/m'd you but with the board acting up and what not, i just posted it
no they are internals and yes 99% are one syllable
there is nothing wrong with your scheme
Those aren't internals. I'd call them slant rhyme multis.
not exactly slant multi's since they are lacking the same vowel sound inbetween..
they more like a one syllable rhymer in a syllable group.. but meh
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