[Mag] The RSTL Magazine - Week 49 Edition

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    RSTL Magazine Week 49

    Intro
    Recap
    Battle of the Week
    No-Show Shine
    Matchups
    Predictions
    Babe of the Week
    Video of the Week
    Funny Picture of the Week
    T.a.C-tical Interviews
    Grinds My Gears
    Conclusion


    1. Intro


    Welcome back everyone to the next edition of the RSTL Magazine. It seems that the league is starting to get popping. Everyone who dropped a verse voted on all the matches. I am very proud and happy that everyone is starting to treat this league and their fellow writers with respect. Shadow is in a triple threat match against Vaude and S. Issue, while Lucifa battles Soull, Word goes up against Rem in the Contenders match and Menso battles oNeiRiC. Redeemed has no-showed for the one thousandth time and has been banned from RSTL action.
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    2. Recap


    This week didn’t have a match that needed to have a no show breakdown. So lets go through the week and see how everyone did in their matches.

    Word vs Menso – Both writers wrote a very short verse and had a lot of good things in their verse that shined. Word write a emotional story that flowed but the rhymes seemed a bit boring at times. Menso had so much potential in his verse but suffered from limiting himself to match word’s lines. This was a good gesture however; it hurt his verse more than anything. If he had expanded on some things in his verse it would’ve soared to another level in my eyes. But in the end, Word won this matchup 4-0.

    S. Issue vs. Rem – This match showcased two writers who are at two different levels when it comes to story development. Rem took a good story and started it off very well with good mechanics and delivery. The only issue was that as the story progressed, the story seemed to become conf****g and less interesting. Not sure exactly the reason for it but it seems like you kind of rushed to complete this, which is good, but we all know you can finish better. Still was a good showing from you. S. Issue wrote a verse that was very well written and the story was well polished from start to finish. This propelled S. Issue to a 3-0 victory.

    Shadow vs. Vaude – In the championship match this week, Shadow defended his title against a VERY talented writer in Vaude. Both writers wrote impressive verses and the readers were very torn between each writer’s stories. Vaude’s verse had a good concept and executed it well. Shadow had a emotional verse that was well written as well. This match came down to which style the reader liked more, the more conventional or unorthodox. In this bout, the readers couldn’t decide and this match ended in a 2-2 tie.
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    3. Battle of the Week

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    Woman Behind the Veil

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    Jesus, how did it get to this?
    Eyes sealed shut spirit ceases to exist
    Her body was lifeless, skin turned pale
    Becoming like the wind that pressed gently against her veil
    I held her close as she turned into a carcass
    Tears halt from her pussy as if it now lacks in harvest
    Her imagine now tarnished, lips blistered with blues
    Her dress becoming undone revealing a bruise
    She was an intelligent girl who kept to herself
    A reflection of God, her heart beats in perfect health
    How could we have done such a thing?
    She was my responsibility she was under my wing

    He told me they just wanted to have fun
    Which later meant running train and premature cum
    I figured she needed a chance to relax
    So I invited her to experience our juvenile acts
    She agreed to hang out but did not wish to be left alone
    “I’ll be right by your side.” I said with assurance in my tone
    We arrived at the party on a warm Friday night
    It was dark yet her eyes glistened in the light
    She wore red velvet dress that barely covered her chest
    Hair flowed effortlessly barely covering her breast
    I found her attractive but I had my eyes on another
    Who was 5’7 and 120lbs with Double Ds that could smoother
    So I left her with him, thinking he would protect her virtue
    Guiding her to a back room whispering, “I won’t hurt you.”
    She became nervous but was too shy to speak
    He sat her on the bed as his genitals grew in heat
    Removing his pants, she panicked and screeched
    He grabbed her and beat her into defeat
    She just laid there, dazed and confused
    While he penetrated her, flesh blazed and abused
    Her cry less tears began to dry with every thrust
    His breathing became heavier until he would finally bust
    She felt disgusted as he smiled and left the room
    I felt something ominous beginning to loom
    I ran to her, Excedrin bottle emptied by her head
    Eyes stared inertly and her breath was now dead

    She became another statistic that day
    Another victim of a horny man’s lay
    To me she was everything in this world
    From the heavens to the very heartbeat of this girl
    I loved her and I should told her before her air went stale
    But to them she was just another woman trapped behind a veil

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    Vaude

    Blank Expressions

    Michael didn't cry the day he was birthed.
    The doctors wrapped him in towels, and I cradled him first.
    I looked down at him, tears pouring out of my own eyes,
    telling Greg our son had his father's full blown pride.
    We took him home the following night, exhausted,
    but more than ready as the next step creeped upon us.
    Michael would sleep in our bed for the next month or so.
    And every night, Greg would read him a funny poem.
    And every night, I would sing him the sweetest lullaby.
    And every night, Michael would see his mother cry.

    The books told us the first few months would be hard.
    I wasn't burned out -- I was charred. Emotionally scarred.
    I sought therapy for postpartum depression.
    But there were nights where I looked at a knife
    just wanting to cut the tension.

    My son didn't love me. I was convinced of this.
    I questioned his innocence. Greg called me ridiculous.
    My efforts were limitless. I provided food for this kid!
    Was it too much to ask he smile while he chewed on my tit?
    He proved he was quick by playing with blocks,
    methodically moving each brick without shaking the top.
    Damn near silent for two years, one day he just talked
    as if he had been programmed by Satan or God.
    I couldn't decide.
    But he sure knew when he wanted a drink.
    He'd stick out his cup and demand for "wawa" from the sink.
    Greg taught Michael to say "I love you, too."
    I never bothered, knowing it wasn't true.

    There's something unnerving about telling your son you love him,
    and not getting even a smile in return.
    There's something perturbing about kissing your son on the forehead,
    and watching him wipe it off so quick it's like it burns.


    Michael slept soundly every night as I tossed and turned.
    Greg tried to comfort me, but I had lost my nerve.
    So much effort, so much pain. Never any gain.
    I had turn down our family portrait's picture frame.
    I walk with Michael every day. I talk to him.
    I tell him about his grandparents. He seems lost again.
    He's staring at the leaves as they swirl in the wind.
    And like those fallen maples, my world starts to spin.

    Michael had a blank expression when he died.
    He didn't fight or cry as the pillow snuffed his fire.
    He didn't have much of a fire to begin with
    And if it's a sin, then, I'm going to hell.
    But while I smothered
    his face, I realized I had always been a childless mother.
    And this was hardly an escape.

    4. No Show Shrine

    No one ☺
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    5. Matchups

    Championship
    C. ShadowWarriorfs 28-16
    2. Vaudeville 3-0
    3. S. Issue 5-1

    Prediction – This will be an interesting match and should have a definite victor this week. I believe that these three are the best in the league currently and it will come down to which writer can peak the reader’s interest. I believe that S. Issue will upset both Shadow and Vaude in a 2-1-1 victory.

    Contender
    4. word.smyth 1-1
    5. Rem Lynxis 2-1

    Prediction – These two writer are very close in skill and this should shape up to be a great read. I believe that Rem is kicking himself for his finish last week and will look to get back into the title hunt. Word is looking to keep his streak alive and defeat Rem. I believe that Rem will win this match up 3-1.

    6. Menso 0-1
    7. oNeiRiC 0-0

    Prediction – This match is going to be difficult to choose from. I think that this will depend on which writer actually shows up. I believe that both of these writers can get it done but I think that this week, oNe will get it done 3-2.

    8. Lucifa 0-0
    9. Soull 0-0

    Prediction – This is going to be my favorite match to read. Both of these writers are extremely talented and either one could take this. I believe that this week, Lucifa will have the advantage and will slightly beat Soull 3-2.
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    6. Babe of the Week

    Jessica Biel

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    7. Video of the Week

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    8. Funny Pictures Of The Week

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    9. T.a.C-tical Interviews – No interview this week because T.a.C. is a gay homosexual that smells like fish.



    10. Grinds My Gears – You know what really grinds my gears, the fact that all of the good celebrities have died. I’m watching the Bernie Mac show and I realized how much I missed his movies. It’s sad that out of all the comedian that could’ve died, they picked one as talented as Bernie Mac. Why not take out the corny comedians. You know what show I miss, The Fresh Prince of Bel-Air. That was really a great show. They don’t seem to make shows like they use to and this is what really grinds my gears.

    11. Conclusion – This was a very good week for the RSTL. We had three great matches and all those who wrote, voted. I am very proud of you guys. It brings a tear to my eye. I hope you guys will continue to keep this kind of enthusiasm for the following weeks. Good luck to everyone in the league this week and happy writings!!!
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    TaC is one fishy fucker ..
    Props Shads ..
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    So who is the one who actually writes these magazines? I assume it's not ShadowWarriorfs picking against himself?

    Anyway, I enjoyed it. Thanks for the effort.
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    I do write these mags Vaude :)
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    So you're picking against yourself but also giving yourself best verse?
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    It's a prediction that is done before verses are done

    Just like last weeks mag, i thought u had the best verse but this week, our verses were the best imo and since it wasn't beat i couldn't really say your verse was better based on voting.

    I use to have a vote on the best thread but people can't read and are retarded so i stopped that
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