[MAG] The RBL Herald, Week 31

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    RBL CHAMPION, WEEK 30

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    TABLE OF CONTENTS

    01 Introduction
    02 Shameless Advertisement
    03 The First Champion
    04 Memoirs of a Flipper
    05 No-Show Shine
    06 Personal-Palooza
    07 Punchline Pandemonium
    08 Official Rankings
    09 Q’s Top 10 Predictions
    10 Q’s Top 3 Picks of the Week
    11 Outroduction





    01 Introduction

    It was a rough week for me, both emotionally and textually. Still, a great champ match in my opinion, despite the harsh criticism that was received. I thought all came consistently well and consistently better than most everyone who delivered a verse the same week. I also thought there were a lot of fresh concepts and clever disses throughout the match. Though most felt that I wasn’t worth the mention, I’m proud of my 30 minute verse and I can also say that Muff’s just won the most impressive title match in a while. But I’ll save the rest of my opinions for an upcoming article paying respects to the new champion.

    In other news, you all may know that I’ve been catching flack lately for the league and how I run it. Muff has already admitted to overreacting 2 weeks ago when I supposedly “hid” my verse to gain some fictitious unfair advantage. Many sided with the Champ, but later wrote punchlines directed towards him which I found ironic. Also, I believe at least two matches saw verses posted second with more lines than the first. For the life of me, I can not figure this league out and thus have chosen to cease trying. I only wish that we can grow and mature together and destroy the pettiness that surrounds and deteriorates the league’s morale.

    Moving on, I say the above to mention that I have only decided to author this magazine due to the recent signs of appreciation from members of the past who have been watching and have recently extended compliments in hookups. This has pleased me and therefore I have decided to continue on for as long as I can in writing these magazines. At the same time, I am desperately looking for a replacement only in writing The Herald due to upcoming finals and other events.

    Well, looking back, it was a pretty productive week despite the confusion and unfortunate news. Most of those who no-showed were expected to in being so low in the rankings. However, I was extremely disappointed in Area51, but its result has produced a match that I am eager to read. With my not being a sitehopper of any sort, or at least in recent years, I have failed to witness a Deon/Muff match. My bets are that Muffy retains his title. In all honesty, it just seems as though people favor him over others and Deon is less favored than most good writers in the league when it comes to voting turnouts.

    At this time I would like to extend a warm invitation to those who disagree with the way I write my magazines, or to those who may disagree with my views or the way I express my opinions, or simply to those whom may just want to help out and have a sincere concern for the future of this league. Please feel free to email me at usadesigns1 @ gmail. I am always open to suggestions and help from those who are truly interested.
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    03 The First Champion

    By defeating two former champs in quite an impressive and somewhat heated and equally anticipated match-up, Muffy becomes this half of the season’s first official champion.

    I congratulate your efforts. Though you were not meant to be in the championship to begin, I believe that your verse proved your worth. It was a very aggressive presentation in stylistic nature sprinkled with clever wordplay throughout along with comical personals and disses. I enjoyed it, for the most part, and I also thought that the Eisenhower line was very creative and a novel idea. I’m sure to see it flipped in the future.

    An ugly ending with two crew votes coming in at the very last minute, but for those who doubt or intend to discredit, you can count either vote as valid. Magus beat the deadline and though I personally discredit his vote due to its lack of information and sense of stupidity, Deon delivered a thorough and what seemed to be honest interpretation of the match. Either or, Muffy won in valid fashion and thus I tip my hat to him.

    I would like to say, for all parties, that I felt the criticism was highly outrageous on average. Out of 40 lines, most voters averaged to quote or comment on 7 or 8 per verse. We were all better writers than that and deserved the proper respect. Unfortunately, it’s difficult to call voters these days. Seems to be a trend that changes each week in what a voter looks for in a verse. I couldn’t begin to call it this week with the differences in quotes coming from the verses, but I can say that I felt we all performed highly, especially given the events that occurred last week.

    Good show Muff and Sephiroth, and congratulations Muff.
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    04 Memoirs of a Flipper

    JOHN HENSLEY
    Rule's wack and he's worthless. Fuck props, you don't deserve any son.
    He's too broke to afford housekeeping.. but still relies on a Butler to serve anyone.

    REN
    I'm sick of this played shit.. respect? you don't deserve any son
    Tristan might hate Quizzno's.. but he STILL relies on a Sub to serve anyone

    PHLYMO
    plus ya style is ugly, but your girl’s the really scary sight
    the bitch looks like an ape, and another mandrills her every night

    REN
    your chick? I'm maiming ya standards while putting a shame on ya manners
    everytime a Mandrills ya bitch she starts to grow MORE hair n cravin Banana's

    BLUE BAYOU
    I know about ya tiny dick n sack, always locked up in ya pants bored
    There’s so much ballroom in ya boxers it could be used as a dance floor

    REN
    this man is timid an truth is he just can't admit it
    there's enough Ballroom in this faggots mouth for people to be dancin in it

    CHRIT
    Glad you finally hit puberty... now its time for the fun days...
    I hope ur sporting a landing strip, with the forehead the size of a runway

    REN
    ya girls Pubic style's unique on that fat bitch, so stay n get tossed
    her Landing Strip's SO big planes have begun to use it as a Runway to lift off

    VASKEZ
    I saw your text quality last week, I know ya fiendin to be admired
    that verse was just the tip of the iceberg...
    ...the rest're even further from being fire

    REN
    you never drop heat son,.. noone will ever take your novice advice
    if thats the tip of the iceberg.. the rest of his punches are even closer to ice

    JOHN HENSLEY
    I've seen you use old lines, n' I won't quit til this shit is solved.
    Fighting styles? He MUST know kung fu... because every punch has a flip involved.

    REN
    I carry the flame.. your barely a name, won't get enough if you flee
    ya got Karate verses.. always involve Flipping someones Punches with ease
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    05 No-Show Shine

    06 $LIM$HADY89

    ya whole image is played out so ya started out cold
    matter fact u a benjamin button rapper, started out old
    how am I the newb when its u whos miles from the belt
    that 89 in my name is when ya style was last felt
    plus in a way we both slim and i'm standin and grinnen
    cuz for me its before the $hady while its ya chances of winnen
    this is light work but if u show its gotta be vicious
    nobody cares about scratch unless it involves instant lottery tickets

    05 FERVENT_NOTION

    Allen Knight, you hermaphrodite, you sorry excuse for the rapper type
    I rap with smite, your verse looks like something my ass would write
    Cause its shitty and mines been crafted to the point where its been mastered
    While yours is more out of control than natural disasters
    My damage is collateral... I reign supreme in this battle yo
    Beating me is not allowed... Like a forward lateral
    Your a mess, I'm telling you now you will not see success
    But I guess you don't get the message like a letter with no address
    Don't act impressed cause actually this rap shit is natural for me
    And its sad to see that all your rhymes are nothing but casualties
    "Sending Terror" Man you sound like your on some R.L. Stine shit
    Rapping on the internet because you have no friends to rhyme with
    I'm not the guy to be benign with, you wont find a verse as nice as mine is
    And your shit is boring... It reminds me of a VHS being rewinded
    No surprises here, its clear to see who has the upper hand
    I'm bad news like a girl who cheats on you with another man

    04 DEFCON_5

    he's no showing..headless is a faggot bitch
    who's been writing a novel for 12 years..now laugh at this
    i have to switch it up and say today
    ur like Iverson
    when pressure gets to the point it's hard ur known to fade away
    so leave it HV to tell a lie, who's believin this queer
    said he went 280-0 in the rbl in 03..when there's only 48 weeks in a year
    ur the worst fibber and ya tales r neverending
    you're the type to keep twisting a plot until ya corpes is buried in it
    ur audios are horrible and when ur writin u suck
    gotta couple screws loose..i'ma call ya maker Dr.Frakenstein to tighten u up
    ya life is Squeemish so y don't we try to reason
    u'll just meet ur fate tryna test Def like extremist
    so for all the fans out there and the other horny fucks
    if u wanna get the best of head go pay his mother 20 bucks

    03 RODDYPIPEZ

    i should forfiet and do this jerk a favor
    because Walter's Wins Low, like he urkles neighbor
    ima talk about your future record, have Sickert kinda hating
    hit you with a 1 / 2 punch like a winning combination
    your name reveils the truth, you aint murdering shit
    ur named after a lame that had to pretend to even murder a BITCH
    you last weeks battle with yung money PROVED your gay, its defined you
    you were happy that he won, because he came from behind you
    and the week before that,you spit a verse with some Spanglish shit
    and lost because no is the same in both languages

    02 XX_NASTY_XX

    you're predicted to win.... but honestly i just don't really care
    the whole league is behind you.... pushing your wheelchair
    so don't bother showing son.... we don't expect you to be ill
    because you're second to none.... none being my skills
    I'm not on your level kid.... yeah I said it but it's not why you think
    you're a piece of shit.... I'll take that as a compliment
    this kids terrible a failure.... thinks he's taking the board by storm
    so we all stand up.... not for an ovation we're headin for the door
    i've seen some of your battles.... and honestly they're all laughs
    they're like T.a.C's verses.... 3 people are writing em and they're still trash
    the cat's outta the bag.... Caveat was Dough and a sick supporting cast
    so who's oddwirdz?.... calibre, rydogg, and some random fag
    seriously son why did you sign in?.... sign out and give it a rest
    because on a scale of 1-10.... your skill would pass a sobriety test
    so I'll end this with a plea.... please don't show and save face
    because garbage like you.... is the why the RBL holds no clout nowadays

    01 I'M DEON

    as far as awards go, there's no need for you to front see..
    You know I'm the best site-hopper, when I've already beat you on 3
    ^but thats water under the bridge, & its being placed for a reason
    U appreciate^^^^^^^^^^^^^ coz thats how ur troll ass bathe's in the evening
    so lets talk about crews for a second, cuz the one your in shows heart
    The same time I joined Dohpe, this fag started Alpha w/KempoMRK
    the leagues got exciting, but i'm swingin punchs to cave ya chin
    I see a 3 way for the title...
    ...3 way for the next contender, but I dont see ANY way you'll win
    see ya punchs dont connect, ya multi's dont impress & ya flows soft..
    you're bottom of the barrel, in the fetal position when the shotty goes off
    so hoe pause, my shits always better, you dont have the skills to hurt
    he'll read & notice the pattern, then accessorize it with his heels & purse
    plus my creativity show's your recycling problem's gettin real big
    coz your way of loss prevention is retail'n lines tryna steal wins
    the rbl's shown T.a.C.'s improvement & Ooh Gots winning nice & neatly
    but we all knew summarize, & prove how garbage you writin weekly
    I watched your champ match, it was no question u got killed queer
    see I shut Cav out, & you shut out the belief that talent's still here
    man you're too simple, every punch you throw's coming off stupid
    so i'll make this Area my stomping grounds like square dance hall blueprints
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    06 Personal-Palooza

    Runner-Up

    15 SEPHIROTH v. muffffy
    you're best wins against a father who's modding dude, so props to q
    muff's just one of many i've sonned, see im'a full time father too

    14 DISO. v. future
    last week you beat soull whos 0-4, if it was up me ya'd both be in a hearse
    so pick a winner?.. haha it was more of a challenge picking who's worse

    13 E THA REAL v. xpoet
    You'll never see your name under Q's TTT column, a fact yo
    unless we changed it to fiercest competitors in Tic- Tac-Toe

    12 D.LOKE v. wordp1ay
    I'ma change my name to "FILLER" like I gotta be worthless
    That way we can both be named after what's not found in our verses

    11 FUTURE v. diso.
    Shut up lame u aint shit stop frontin like u spittin dope
    Cuz u beat Magas in the IBL, when that was cuz he didn’t vote

    Top 10

    10 FUTURE v. diso.
    No nameflips cuz I honestly don’t kno how to say it plus I’m hella bent
    Shit niggaz might pronounce ur name right if ya whack ass was relevant

    09 BRAD BANKS v. soull
    truth be told, euthynasia should be ur plan of action
    cause Soull, Man,
    ur worse than the one with Samuel Jackson

    08 MUFFFFY v. quriosity
    If seph or muff drop 40 each n dont even produce dope
    If my calculations are correct
    Q'll need 76 lines just to win by 2 VOTES

    07 SEPHIROTH v. quriosity
    i got random fucks coming up to me saying how i'm crazy with words
    last random fuck that came up to you, said the baby was your's
    got me feeling like 'I can't do it', but it gotta be said
    you're concepts are old enough to hold a 'good ol days' convo with rev

    06 SEPHIROTH v. quriosity
    trying to cope from last week, when you was crying and moping
    we haven't seen a bigger breakdown, since you're old style of voting
    saying youre losing interest, it's boring and noone deserves it
    ...how you think we feel halfway through reading one of youre verses ?

    05 WINDSPRIZZLE v. magus
    I see you're DOHpe now? On Arby's wifi...Im sure surprised
    You musta bribed User and Deon with Melts and Curly fries

    04 MAGUS v. windsprizzle
    wind's other name is tettris. at first it was boring and nice.
    now I like it. about time they made tettris w/ more than 8 bytes

    03 JAI-Z v. the goon
    Don't be a doofus. Recycling's good for the enviroment.
    And thanks to that verse, our oxygen levels are high again.

    02 TRISTAN v. gundam
    that type of faggotry's suspect, stop thinkin it's all good
    your verses'll have readers rasing their eyebrows... to adulthood

    01 MUFFFFY v. quriosity
    N he been fell off..now im exposin the reference
    How you manage to be Washed Up waaaaaay before the bottle was known as a message
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    07 Punchline Pandemonium

    Honorable Mention

    16 THE GOON
    yet you the biggest diva here. ya constant bitchin' is jokes to me mayne.
    ..you live a pre-Madonna lifestyle that Guy Ritchie can only hope to regain..

    Wording was crispy and the punch was nice. Only problem is that Jai-Z is a female, and a gay/dike/lesbian/butch or whichever she prefers at that. The entire verse was actually littered with disses pertaining to a male. My suggestion is that next time, don’t recycle and actually write for your opponent and maybe most of your disses will make sense.

    Runner-Up

    15 JAI-Z v. the goon
    She's a slut, go figure.. but you're pathetic and stupid.
    You'd even have the worst "Shot At Love", if you were actually Cupid

    14 OOH GOTS v. pertain2life
    Plus the kid hits the booze, has to ...to keep his mind right
    Give's all the hunnies some Miller Light...so they will say "Hi Life!"

    13 XQUISITE v. abilify
    and u must be delirious if u think your ill wit da words
    cuz u obviously got ya shit together…..pfft, just look at ya verse

    12 SEPHIROTH v. muffffy
    kinda rough around the edges, n' hardly have any flowing sense
    you got 'nothing', youre like the guy that t.a.c always votes against

    11 XQUISITE v. abilify
    Ya rhymes are never kickin bro… like u got some shackled legs
    only time u’ll see… “abilify verse is exquisite” is the title of this battle thread

    Top 10

    10 MAGUS v. windsprizzle
    lmao..cuz your girlfriend came to me like " i feel he lacks "..
    ironically he's named after something short, and over really fast.

    09 GUNDAM v. tristan
    you musta lost all your senses, forget threats clown i warned ya
    not only you up a blind alley, but deaf is around the corner

    08 WINDSPRIZZLE v. minfinity
    Youre trash g...go back to where the noobs are standing
    Cuz we space out on your shit enough to train for lunar landings

    07 GALLACTICO
    shut up hoe..u aint the shit
    if ur face was a youtube vid, it'd have 796666053322229011349583 hits

    06 MAGUS v. windsprizzle
    no fucking wonder, you fucking suck. winds a breeze man.
    nobody has been moved by garbage, since jersey's energy plan

    05 WINDSPRIZZLE v. magus
    A bland rapper...Mag's a fag with a grand stature
    Such a flamer
    Kids pelt him with chocolate, marshmallows and graham krackers

    04 MUFFFFY v. quriosity
    Buzz aldrin and neil armstrong made history with a flight that was long
    Q did too...'twas a giant step for mankind when he set foot outside of his home

    03 MUFFFFY v. sephiroth
    N honestly Role Playing Boy..your shit is hollow n tragic
    When I punch you in the face wont be a potion in your inventory to swallow you faggot

    02 TRISTAN v. gundam
    see i don't know why these old timers stay eye'ing the kid
    gun ain't only 'pass' his prime, he was waving gooodbye when he did

    01 MUFFFFY v. sephiroth
    N ur chick? we laugh when ya girl comes through
    Just look at her Eisenhower' face looks like she been through World War 2
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    08 Official Rankings

    Week 31

    TOP 10

    CHAMP
    1. Muffffy 8-2
    2. I'm Deon 5-1

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    3. Ooh Gots 4-1
    4. magus. 11-0

    5. D.LOKE 8-8
    6. Future 3-2

    7. E Tha Real 2-0
    8. Fervent_Notion 2-0

    9. Xquisite 5-4
    10. Ren. 5-1

    THE REST

    11. T.a.C. 8-5
    12. Yung Troy 3-6

    13. RoddyPipez 2-1
    14. Gallactico 5-3

    15. Brad Banks 1-2
    16. $lim$hady89 1-0

    17. Defcon_5 1-0
    18. Jai-Z 1-0

    19. xX_NASTY_Xx 6-2
    20. Tristan. 3-2

    21. -Sephiroth- 11-2
    22. PERTAiN2LiFE 5-2

    23. Quriosity 9-2
    24. Minfinity 3-1

    25. Wordp1ay 7-5
    26. Diso. 1-4

    27. XpOeT 1-1
    28. Abilify 1-1

    29. Calibre 9-5
    30. itzconstant 2-2

    31. 4Matt 5-7
    32. coil grimely 2-4

    33. Soull 0-6
    34. The Goon 0-1

    35. Gundam 5-7
    36. Lost Soul 3-4

    37. John Hensley 9-2
    38. HooKnBarZ 0-0

    39. Vontana 0-0
    40. EarlLeeGraves 0-0

    41. BronzeAtlas 0-0
    42. Yung Money 1-0

    43. Main Stream 0-0
    44. trichomes 0-0

    45. bill lauden 0-0
    46. Gunnar 0-0

    47. Amishstad 0-0
    48. Normal Rockwell 0-0

    49. Perico Pinero 0-0
    50. F O R E N S I C 0-0
    51. Thurber Mingus 0-0
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    09 Q’s Top 10 Predictions

    CHAMP
    1. Muffffy 8-2
    2. I'm Deon 5-1
    Muffffy -2

    I believe Muff has the upper hand due to momentum and league opinion. Deon just seems to never receive the respect deserved, though I guess you could argue that he hasn’t successfully earned it, while Muff has been taken in by all and seems to receive high ratings weekly regardless of outcome. That said, I also think that Muff has been the better writer in the clutch recently while Deon has been the most consistent. Deon has had tougher matches historically while Seph’ and myself have been the only challenge and most impressive wins for Muff. It’s a toss up really, and I can’t rate the match based on the past because I have never witnessed such a combination. So, I’m putting my money on Muff in another close one.

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    3. Ooh Gots 4-1
    4. magus. 11-0
    Magus -5

    Potentially a blow out of huge proportions, though I do believe that Ooh has a fighting chance. Both have faced each other before and last time Magus was oh so beatable and yet Ooh still failed to deliver. Here, I assume he will work more on his verse but Magus has a following like no other and regardless of what he writes, he’s almost guaranteed to win against such a no-namer. He’s also the better writer, clearly, and if he writes to win then I think he’ll do just that. Ooh will have to be surprisingly dope in this one to pull of the upset which I don’t see coming, though he may either gain slight respect for putting up a good fight or even some newbie votes for appealing to their expectations. Still, Magus wins this one easily.

    5. D.LOKE 8-8
    6. Future 3-2
    Future -2

    Almost dead even really, but LOKE should be the better writer. At the same time, LOKE is inconsistent as a motherfucker and Future has shown improvement in the past few weeks despite the easy match-ups. I think it will be a close one in talent and thus a close one in votes and I actually feel as though Future may take this one, but if I had to bet it’d be for D.LOKE by a pube. On second thought, after re-reading last week’s verses, I think Future has the upper hand here. D.LOKE’s structure is horrid and littered with grammatical/spelling errors and weak concepts. Future’s flow is crisper with slightly fresher ideas and a clearer direction in disses. I’d say Future wins this one by a few.

    7. E Tha Real 2-0
    8. Fervent_Notion 2-0
    E Tha Real -3

    Eh, if E doesn’t win here then that will be one helluva personal the following week. Fervent is decent but I’m quite sure that both wins are from no-shows and if not, from very untalented competition. E isn’t as polished as he should be given his experience and effort put into the craft, but he gets the job done. An ugly win is still a win and E usually climbs the ranks well so I see him continuing to climb here with little resistance. Fervent has the chance to pull off an impressive win by beating a somewhat notable opponent in surprising fashion, but I doubt its occurrence. E wins this one convincingly.

    9. Xquisite 5-4
    10. Ren. 5-1
    Ren -2

    Good match-up despite Ren’s apparent flipping. X is decent and Ren has a way with words, or wording rather and by this I mean that the man simply rewords previous bangers from other sites. It’s been somewhat proven, but I haven’t cared to expose just yet. I’ll just keep mentioning it until he comes up with some crafty excuse as to why so many of his lines resemble others that have preceded them. With that said, I’d say Ren has proven to be the better writer, or compiler of good ideas, and will probably deliver again assuming that he continues to flip quality punches. It’s like Snoop writing for Lil’ Bow Bow. But, X has more than enough talent to pull away with the win despite the flipping. With that said, I think X will give it all he’s got and come up slightly short this week though.
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    10 Q’s Top 3 Picks of the Week

    03 Ooh Gots

    I don’t say this because I think Ooh will pull off the upset, but because I think he will put forth major effort in hopes of doing it. He will more than likely fail, but I expect his verse to be better than most will foresee and for that he’s on my list of names to watch for this week. Magus will underestimate, I’m sure, and yet he will still pull away with the win. If Ooh does deliver, and with both going 12 lines it is highly possible to accomplish the surprise win, it will be the biggest win of his textual career both in alias and true form. Though I doubt its occurrence, I applaud its effort. Good luck.

    02 Xquisite

    Another competitor that I don’t necessarily pick to win, but I pick to surprise with a verse that exceeds expectations. X is a tough critic and talks a big game but in actuality he’s only an average writer, or at least has only proven so before now. This win would be a solid victory for the young competitor and would solidify his name as a worthy opponent in most any match. Still, he has his hands full here against Ren, the flipping faggot, who still drops well composed verses with fan-favorite punches and a crisp flow. X will have to up his structure/delivery as well as drop some fresh concepts to come close here. Good luck.

    01 I’m Deon

    Lastly, and still a competitor who I don’t pick to win, is Deon topping of the list of names to watch out for in week 31. Deon is talented, obviously, and has persistently climbed the ranks over a span of probably 20 weeks. I kid, but honestly it may be that long or even longer. He’s reset records, switched names, and then some. Still, he has gained my respect with some impressive verses despite a very unimpressive record and accumulation of losses over his recent RBL career. Against comfortable competition, I see him performing well and receiving a glimpse of the respect that he has earned on other sites. It should be a banger with both dropping moderately low in numbers thus capitalizing off consistency. I assume he knows a lot about Muff and for me, the personals will be refreshing. Good luck.
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    11 Outroduction

    Yea, um, it feels good to see an authentic Q magazine again. But I have nothing left to say, I just came home from the gym about an hour ago and I jammed my left thumb.

    Good luck everyone.

    [youtube]XbYPKmwTJxQ[/youtube]
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    damn, I wish I woulda read that whole flipped shit on Ren before I dropped my verse....I rushed it, but I dropped what I needed. good mag tho Q. You're gunna dislike me more than what u already do but fuck it...I aint a harsh critic, I've told u plenty of times that u come consistent or many other people for that matter..I honestly felt the 3 of you were inconsistant this last week. Yall had good bars, but yall werent consistent. I'm not harsh..just being honest...If anything, u never have nothing nice to say about any of my verses. lol....you actually sorta gave me props in the mag, but sorta took a jab at me also..Its all good tho..I kinda like the view u have of me. lol

    anyway, good shit for takin the time for the mag...even tho u've been going thru some shit. 1
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  14. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    yea, its my job to be a critic though. plus, my point is that i've put in the work and effort and have actually accomplished plenty which allows me to be a harsh critic, even though i'm not, i just breakdown bars to help writers improve. but, most of the lesser-talented heads in this league are among the harshest critics and that's what i think is funny. even still, its whatevers clever with me.
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  15. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

    lol, oh so now I'm a lesser talented head
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  16. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    oooohhh..he called you lesser talented..lol

    j/k
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  17. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    lol. it wasn't specifically directed towards you, but i don't think others would rate you in the same class as myself. regardless, i see people criticizing certain things and then read their verses and it just doesn't add up to me. seems as though they'd know what they were doing wrong.
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  18. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

    I would be offended if I was rated in the same class as u.......ohhhhhhh burn jk

    I hear ya Q
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  19. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    also, you can still edit your verse so long as a vote hasn't been cast.
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  20. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

    I cant edit......PM.....vote on polls.....or start a thread, I have no clue why
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