[Mag] RSTL Magazine - Week 46 Edition

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    RSTL Magazine Week 46

    Intro
    Recap
    Battle of the Week
    No-Show Shine
    Matchups
    Predictions
    Babe of the Week
    Video of the Week
    Funny Picture of the Week
    T.a.C-tical Interviews
    Grinds My Gears
    Conclusion


    1. Intro


    Welcome back everyone to the next edition of the RSTL Magazine. This week was very slow once again. We had a New Champion in Shadow yet War is trying to take the crown from him. S. Issue and Liquid in the contenders match while Pain and Souled face off with each other. Things could be very interesting considering everyone shows up and votes.
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    2. Recap


    This week we had one no show. Pain decided not to show up in his match against Souled In, so I will give his verse a no show break down.

    Souled In – I read this earlier in the week and I’m glad you had some fun here and took some shots at Got Life? The rhymes and the flow were pretty good. I also enjoyed the story and progression. I thought this verse was pretty enjoyable and hope that next week you add a little more depth to this verse. Nicely done though.

    Liquid vs. S. Issue – S. Issue faced Liquid in the contenders matchup and is looking to move into the title match next week. S. Issue wrote a very good story was had good vocab, imagery and emotion. The verse was very consistent. Liquid’s problem was that his verse was very short and didn’t offer any detail or character development. Although, Liq had some good things in his verse, such as good rhymes and story, his lack of depth kept him from winning this. S. Issue defeated liquid 3-0.

    War vs. Shadow – This proved to be a very good match-up between these two good writers. Shadow, being the champ decided to change his style up a little. His style, structure and rhymes were really good and kept the writer interested. The story, however, didn’t seem to flow as smoothly as it did in the past. War’s verse was nicely written with a good story and it seemed to flow pretty well. However some of the lines seemed a bit stretched to the readers and seemed to lack ‘movement’. Overall a good match up and due to lack of voting, this match ended in a 1-1 tie allow Shadow to keep his title.
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    3. Battle of the Week

    Shadow


    Futile

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    If you are hearing this, Armageddon is about to arrive
    I have made arrangements, hoping someone would survive
    She was constructed from living tissue, realistic with her eyes
    I devised a steel mistress, her voice to reveal the mischief
    Young enough to conceal yet old enough to resist it
    Beautiful yet deadly, she was the perfect specimen
    She deserved it, she could succeed unlike the rest of them
    Their LIBERTY was all greed and filled with blood thirst
    Controlled by political leaders, their violence was the worse
    Analytical dealers protect their SECURITY with a word
    Speaking of purity but surely this ability was absurd
    Both groups battled for PROPERTY, logically an ominous sense
    Eventually to join forces, with courses for world dominance
    But she will be consistence, the RESISTANCE TO OPPRESSION
    A devastating impression, aggression now borderlines obsession
    Her presence made them anxious, aimless deployments of their weapon
    Blackened the globe, robes stained with blood and fecal matter
    Wanting to decimate her, pure laughter follows the evil chatter
    She planned to enter their chambers, chambered with ammunition
    However decided to be subtle, puddle of blood flows from her feet
    Her expression turned cold, bold survivors tried to speak
    Yet they met their demise, their eyes close in defeat
    The world lay in shambles, ample time was giving them
    Blinded by power, I decided to shower them again
    With a single rain drop, stopped within the palm of my hand
    She served me well, Hell now a calm wasteland
    And if you are hearing this, bliss is now a job too complex
    It’s time to end it all, fall because this is God and you’re next…

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    vs

    War Machine

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    I knew a girl once, the kind of girl that as she strolled by
    your heart skips a beat and your mouth turns dry
    you become lost in the moment as she elegantly skips on the air
    choking in this epic moment, it turn out to be my first love affair.
    I would see her everyday, she would come in around the same time
    hearing her heels clatter down the sidewalk; and then the doorbell chimed
    she would brush her way in and sigh in depression
    ordering the same drink and muffin; pretending I don't have an obsession.
    I would stare sometimes and not make it subtle
    at how she would drink in a hurry and set off in a scuttle,
    I never knew if she was single but I worked up the courage to talk to her
    going almost numb as my teeth rattled and it was over in a blur,
    not quite knowing what I said to her, she smiled at me her teeth pearly white
    as though I had changed her whole day and filled her with light
    she tenderly stroked my hand with her card
    I wanted to look like I wasn't desperate, but called straight away as it was hard
    I needed to know what I was happening, what she saw how she felt
    waiting to see what cards I've been dealt, whether i'd turn away or whether i'd melt.
    The years went by and our love blossomed like the summer rose of old
    unable to express the words I behold, bound in the sunrise and the dusking cold.
    She fell ill one morning as if almost suddenly it dawned her
    we went to the doctors and after we conferred he would concur
    that I would lose my love to God in the form of his cancer.
    We had planned to have children although now we wouldn't get the chance
    distraught at this romance that would now end, almost like a trance
    she would dissapear from my arms but there would be no goodbyes
    for she will live for eternity, in the love thats held through my eyes.
    Living through many years of torment without her by my side
    the long nights on the beach with my hand full of air, my toes in the tide
    and only one set of footprints in the sand, I tried my best to trudge on with pride.
    I grew old with grace, a silver fox I liked to think but still I was alone
    and although I would groan with a body racked full of pain, God kept me on my own.
    Eventually I became bed bound, I strayed into the abyss, rifled with drugs
    shivering in the 70 degree summer, bathed in blankets and rugs
    I wouldn't ease out of this world nor would it be gentle
    but knowing however twisted these games were being played no matter how detrimental
    I would pass from this world and it would be monumental.
    One night her image grew close the light shone a little brighter so I shielded my eyes
    strutting slowly along Gods palm towards this angel with wings for a disguise
    she took my hand and I sighed in relief, the greatest strain was lifted
    the pain had been lifted and the torment had shifted
    to were I walked hand in hand, again with the love of my life
    complete under the shine of her halo
    I would sit contempt with her hand in mine.
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    4. No Show Shrine

    Souled

    crazy people, what are you doing?
    this painting seems to be no more than a fancy doodling..
    I'm not sure if its fun, but I know its not fresh
    this looks like Got Life's rhyming, sometimes lacking finess
    well, once ina while, aliens DO come to Earth
    so.. this is a story of how the worse came to worst
    I was bucklin down, just a poc pitted child
    what musta been loud, said "there shall be no revival!"
    dreaming myself out of sleep, but too ripe in the cheek!
    I wouldnt know the message, or even get sheos on my feet.
    At first my room seemed to lighten
    The shadows of monters began to heighten
    Oh no.. the boogie man and his goons!
    wait.. mom told me that was only nonsense and toons
    yet they now seem to turn color!
    and heat is making me smother!
    i dont know what to do.. maybe they had taken my mother!
    maybe im the last person on Earth...
    I know.. i bet they all escaped to the church.
    ...
    and so the boy proceeded to clothe
    and wrap himself up in his invisible cloak
    he started to grab, his pet ninja turtle
    but then said to himself "lets get real people...
    he is a stuffed animal, and, that cant help the world!"
    so there he was.. all packed up to go
    when a knock on the door, out his mouth let a moan
    "Alder, what are you doing in there!?"
    "um, nothing!"
    "Go to bed Alder!"
    "Yes Mother."

    A fire in an alien sky, the pic.​
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    5. Matchups

    Championship
    C. ShadowWarriorfs 24-16
    2. S. Issue 3-0

    Predictions – This match should be a good one. Last week Shadow tied in his match against War and lived to defend his title again. This week Shadow goes up against a rising writer in S. Issue. This match should prove to be very good but in the end, I believe S. Issue should win this, 2-0.

    Contender
    3. Souled In 7-9
    4. WarMachine 6-3

    Predictions- I believe that this matchup will depend on how much first Souled brings to the table. Both writers are very talented and I think that it could go either way. In the end, I believe that War will take this match 2-1.

    5. liquid` acid 1-1
    6. Redeemed 0-0
    7. Vaudeville 0-0

    Predictions – I believe that this match will be filled with no shows. Redeemed is the no show God and IF he shows, could cause some damage here. I believe that Liquid will win this match though.
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    9. T.a.C-tical Interviews – No interview this week because T.a.C. is a gay homosexual that smells like fish.



    10. Grinds My Gears – You know what really grinds my gears, vindictive women. Do you people spend all day and night thinking up different way to ‘get back at’ someone? Do you think that’s cute? Well it’s not and not only does it make you look like an utterly idiot, it makes you look like a cum-filled whore. Now, I’m not someone who doesn’t enjoy a good laugh but going to extremes to make someone miserable when they have little to you is just mindboggling. This is what really grinds my gears.


    11. Conclusion –. This league coming to an end since the league is suppose to end in week 52. I personally believe that the tourney should start at week 50 and the SMs should begin their advertising for the league now. I am proud of all those who showed up and voted on other matches. You guys are great and are what keeps this league moving. I hope that everyone continues to vote and show up for their matches. Good luck to everyone in their upcoming matches.

    Awards for week 45

    Best Verse goes to………War

    http://board.rapmusic.com/1066758391-post6.html

    Best Voter goes to…….. Souled In

    http://board.rapmusic.com/1066762038-post8.html

    Biggest Faggot goes to…Pain

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    Top five verses of the week in order from best to worse

    War
    Shadow
    S. Issue
    Souled
    Liquid

    Let’s give a big Woot to the award winners for Week 45.
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  8. Souled In

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    lol ur hilarious with the grinds your gears every week haha...

    its awesome you continue to write a mag, ill be here for sure, u can count on that.. people arent really settled in school yet i guess, and this is the end of winter, when people get all sad.. lol.. give em a few weeks id say before u count the league dead

    wth@ pain no showing just cuz theres no one here that he wants to impress, and cuz he thinks im not worth showing against..

    oh my gosh.. cool cat there that pain.. but dissed me all the same :)
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    do you realize the stupid smiley face is a weird picture and not actually a smiley face?
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    Redeemed MY PRESIDENT IS 1/2 BLACK

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    the no show god?!

    dude... i always show.. but thanks for the shout..
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    u always show?? really? always?
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    Hold the fuck up a minute.

    The champ match finishes 1-1... I get a loss and I don't have another shot at the title??

    Thats fuckin' bullshit, why do I get a loss?... We both voted on one battle each and it finished 1-1.

    Make my record 6-2-1 or 7-2 cause I ain't having a loss.. and funny how you get to remain champ and your record gets win.
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    ^ dude shut the fuck up. you're starting to annoy me. it was a mistake. by me and nasty. not shadow. shadow doesnt do the ranks. and he was the one who pointed the mistake out. shut the fuck up, you pissy little shit. i told you it will be fixed today.
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    Listen, don't sit here and blame me for something i did not do. I'm the one who brought it up so calm down...and i'm pretty sure i don't lose the title on a tie..if anything u should still be in the title match this week
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    I don't think War was getting that angry IMO, but yea, I still say he's lucky to be in the champ match this week, even though it helps me out a lot, but the loss was obviously a mistake. Should of gave mods ben of doubt ;) lol
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