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    1. Introduction

    This is the second week of the RSTL. Surprisingly, we only had one no show this week and a lot of great matches with several new and older writers. There were several upsets this week when compared to my predictions from last week which goes to show you, anyone can win any match at anytime. Let’s get this started with a recap of this past weeks matches, starting with the single no show verse.
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    2. Recap

    Scrolls – Hopefully next week you will have an opponent who will actually show up so we can actually see how you match up with other writers. The rhyming in this story was very nice and on point. I enjoyed the flow of this story as well and thought you improved some from last week. I did think that some of the lines had words that seemed a bit like extras but I still found this verse to be enjoyable to read and I think that if you can continue to improve like you have been week after week, you can champ this league very soon. Nicely done this week Scroll.
    Rico vs. T.a.C – This matchup was actually a shocking battle between the two. I came in here thinking Rico was going to walk all over T.a.C. However, this is why we write. Rico posted a nice, interesting verse about boxing. It had all of mechanics but seemed to lack the development that a lot of the readers wanted to see. T.a.C’s verse also had all of the mechanics in his story but also had a story that seemed to be well like amongst the readers in the league. This matchup ended shockingly with T.a.C winning 3-2-1.

    Shadow vs. Calibre – This was very good matchup between good writers in the league. Shadow’s verse had a very creative story that was captivating and exciting but his story seemed to lack the flow that was a bit of a hindrance. Calibre’s verse was good as well. The story was solid and it was very descriptive. This matchup turned out to be really close and in the end with Calibre winning this matchup, 3-2.

    Cigma vs. NG – After last week’s loss, NG was set on coming with fire. He faced a up and coming talent in Cigma this week. Cigma’s verse had a very nice poetic feel to it and had a lot of potential to be a very strong piece but it was just too short and didn’t develop like the readers had hoped. NG, on the other hand, wrote a solid solid with excellent rhyming, flow and creativity. This helped propel him to a 6-1 victory.

    Murderous vs. Mad vs. Ex – In this three-way matchup, all three writers came with a nice, different style. Murderous wrote good story with nice rhyming, creative story and a decent flow. I did have a problem with some of the spelling/grammar issues but other readers didn’t seem to mind so much. Mad’s verse was vivid with a good use of the picture, good vocab and a good flow. Ex’s verse was simplistic which was hit or miss with some of the readers. Everyone liked the story but the simple rhyming was what hindered some of the readers. In the end of this outstanding matchup, Murderous came out victorious with Mad finishing second. 3-2-0
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    3. Match Of The Week –


    T.a.C
    She wont text back, why is she ignoring me?
    Where’s she getting sexed at? Is she whoring, b?
    Thoughts in my mind are crazy, has it got dark yet?
    Always thought she’d stay, see, but lately it’s not far fetched
    To imagine her up and leaving me fucked and grieving
    It sucks but she seems to always have somethin impeding
    And our love is depleting, a few drinks, drunk, and I’m speeding
    To my buds for a nice evening of drugs and might be meeting
    His girl’s friends, I’ma get over her by getting under some
    Feelin cumbersome, I’ma get inside a hundred cunts
    Cuz my lovers a slut, it’s no longer a wonder of what
    Taking singing lessons, bringing stress, a blunder of trust
    She’s prolly fuckin the teacher, or some kid under the bleachers
    Fuck, I wouldn’t be surprised if her second lovers a geezer
    She started off taking lessons once a month, turned into weekly
    Then it was no longer by appointment, she had begin to discreetly
    Meet this guy, nightly she’d leave me
    Coming home beat she’d crawl into bed tired and heaving
    I’m partially thinking this is a strange over reaction
    In my drunken state, in my Range Rover mashin
    Pissed at what I think is this shitty knowledge
    Not giving a fuck about life as I speed past the city college
    Its pouring rain, powers out the street lights off
    I hit a puddle, lose control and jump the sidewalk
    A loud thud and a scream as I pull over in shock
    And who I saw laying there I can’t say over, or talk
    Blood stains all over her brand name sweater
    And inside of her hand laid a letter…

    “Hey babe, I think its time I tell you the news
    Because judging by your texts you’re hell of confused
    But life blows by in strike flashes
    And It’s time I contribute, so I’ve been taking night classes
    Yes that’s right, I still cant sing for shit
    And I’m sorry I come home at night too tired to receive your kiss
    But know when I’m dreaming I’m seeing your heart
    And never in my imagination could I picture us being apart
    I’m bored in class, wishing I could be in your clutch too
    There’s no one in the world I could love as much as I love you
    I’ll leave this letter on your pillow, so when you’re waking up
    You can read it, then I want you to take me, hug
    Me for the rest of the day because
    Once schools done the rest of the world wont be ready to see us
    We can have a family, two kids, us laying close every night
    Basically, I see us living a dream life
    But I’ve gotta go, class is calling to end
    In a half hour’s time, next to you I’ll be crawling into bed”

    The rain smudged the rest of the ink, eyes tearing
    “Ronnie, what have you done” is all my minds hearing
    I must see the woman I killed, I must face this face
    This is even worse than I thought, I knew I made a mistake
    For shits sake, I kneel down and say “I love you too
    This would have never happened If I would have jus trusted you”

    your drunk, and just hit a pedestrian...he/she might be dead, what do you do.

    vs.

    Rico

    monday*

    early mourning, i make coffee and while the drips hits the bottom
    i think to myself, "its a sure win, i know i got em"
    shit i should of fought him, three years ago at the garden.
    but bad management, seems to be my only problem.
    any way put my shoes on, the coffees almost done.
    got get ready for the week end, show em why im number one

    Wednesday*

    its hot today, im still sore from the run and the weights.
    im gonna be late, im trying to be in the best shape.
    gotta get to the gym....try and study the tapes
    its gunna be great, i'll take him deep in the lates
    finish him off when his head is swollen and he got cuts on his face..


    saturday night....Entrance music plays*

    so with my head bowwed. hood on and im ready,
    im walking through the crowd, music's loud and im steady.
    im so focused,
    my minds in a different place, and im anxious,
    thousands of people are all here to see me...
    ...the main event at this sanction.
    with a record untarnished, all of my oppenets was harmless,
    i dont ever get hit, you'd think all the fighters were armless,
    its just that im too sly and too quick, to be hit in the face,
    you should see me in the ring, im all over the place.

    **we head to the center of the ring**

    ref-
    "protect yourselfs at all times understand...
    break on my word...obey my comands
    have a good clean fight, nothing under the belt.
    now touch gloves gentleman, and come out at the bell.."




    Ding Ding*

    I come out of the corner and touch gloves.
    dude checks me with a jab "like whats up"
    i knuckle up, and jab back and catch mug,
    follow with a left cross he gets no love,
    he staggers back and hits rope,
    i press the attack like lets go,
    he covers up cause he's getting smashed,
    i wont give up ima make it last,
    ima get his ass, let em know why ya boy is champ,
    put him down for the count cause i know hes trash.
    i circle left and take it down stairs,
    body shots crowds going crazy while the ref stares,
    just then the ref goes to step in,
    i feel a pain in my chin, and i dont know what it is,
    but my view starts to suddenly spin,
    im trying to stay up but my legs give in
    my mouth piece on the ground, i cant seem to catch breath
    i hear the ref counting down and i aint got much time left
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    4 ! and im eyes blurry
    5 ! and im trying hurry,
    6 ! and im on my knees,
    7 ! and i cant believe,
    8 ! and im kneeling now,
    9 ! and im standing now,
    10 ! But im falling down.......





    Ding Ding Ding****


    *your daily grind*
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    4. No Show Shrine – [/b]
    Scrolls

    *alarm sounds*

    I rolled over and smiled into her summer eyes..being with her ive never wondered why...
    My wifes my forever lullabye...the day before she turned thirty three...
    She's my suburban queen so curved and lean...my life before hers a blurry scene as we sat up from the dirty sheets...
    We went into the kitchen and I opened the refrigerator..wondered if she'd begin to cater before we get to dinner later...
    *smirks* I sat down and flipped threw the winter paper...
    Reading a story that somehow lost me...not even noticing my girl droppin the poison in my cup of coffee...
    My wife whispered, "I love u baby, you are my bumble bee"....
    As she leaned over and placed the cup right infront of me...

    *giggles at the comic section, finishes coffee*

    And then so suddenly as if thunder speaks my heart Jus skipped a hundred beats...
    Then comes the numbness in my gums n cheeks...while the pains in my stomach creep...
    It comes in waves and its running deep...*passes away* I'm sure the funeral will be in the comin weeks...

    *wife gets 800k insurance check*

    The funeral came, I couldn't Jus stay clear...watching my wife passin fake tears while my bodies bein laid here...
    I heard my father say, how I was a lovin man...as my body is finally rested under a hundred tons of sand...
    Everyone came and went, my wife was the last to leave...
    This is blasphemy, she said shes sorry but its the way it had to be...
    She blew me a kiss, she thinks my soul is sound asleep..
    And as she turned around to leave...I grabbed her by her throat and pulled the bitch down with me...


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    5. Verse Of The Week –

    NG

    hell yeah Cigma, expect a top notch verse from me this week, I'm about 30 lines in.

    its gonna be sick bro. good luck

    The picture added here only cause it was cool as fuck looking. I went further too and did a real quick audio version too.

    listen while you read. Enjoy fellas.. the track is still in rough stage but you can at least listen. I'll master it up later.
    SoundClick artist: Dove Dozer - Dove Dozer, new school, positive vibes.


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    Locked in the trunk..


    I have a story to tell.


    To keep it in is toxic...


    I feel sick to think about it,


    so your the one I'll talk with...
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    20 August 1976

    I awoke in hell..
    I'll tell you of the darkest plot...

    no fire - brimstone,
    I was in the parking lot...

    to start's the hard part...
    can't take a breath, coughin...

    the day was cold and dark,
    I thought of death often...

    cherishing every breath,
    I seemed cautious...

    whoever put me here is sick,
    I don't mean nauseous...

    a total surprise,
    I didn't know the disquise

    was gonna hit me like a freight train,
    you'll notice the size...

    of the ride in the picture.
    it looks deceiving...

    the trunk's actually bigger,
    this aint a book I'm reading...

    it was real life then,
    I was shook and bleeding...

    the devil played a part,
    I hate the crooked heathen...

    the engine seemed alive,
    like it would have to breathe...

    I swear it had a pulse,
    and it's blood was gasoline...

    it had me in it's clutches..
    with no way to escape...

    I was on my way to hell,
    but had to wait at the gate...

    every minute seemed eternity,
    with the motor runnin...

    like I'm gonna die,
    and now I know it's commin...

    I'm shiverin cold,
    I can feel the goosebumps...

    as we swerve down the road,
    I'm prayin for a loose trunk...

    the wind was howling...
    just like the devil's dog...

    we race down darkness
    in a heavy fog...

    I can't think straight,
    I saw a blink, he hit the brakes...

    if he pops the trunk
    then I'm fit to escape...

    I can't even think,
    how long I've been trapped....

    soon enough it all changed,
    weight on the the gas...

    it was dark here,
    but the speed was blinding...

    it didn't take long,
    I heard the cops and sirens...

    whats it gonna take,
    to stop this violence...

    we need to pull together
    to stop the tyrants...

    don't think this is fake,
    written script...

    I was in the car,
    when it flipped in the ditch...

    when I came to,
    tried to move, was afraid to...

    ain't the same dude,
    who can I put the blame to...

    later found out,
    I was lucky to survive...

    I should live stress free
    and be alive..

    my freedom and my life,
    no one can take from me...

    Because the man that I escaped,
    was Ted Bundy...
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    6. Predictions –


    Contender

    1.Murderous Keys(2-0)
    2. Calibre(2-0)

    Prediction – This should be a very interesting matchup and giving that both of these writers are tops in the league. I believe this to be the match up of the week. I believe that Calibre will win this 3-2.

    Contender

    3.Scrolls(2-0)
    4. nO gOoD!(1-1)
    Prediction – This should be a fun match up and seeing as Scroll will finally have an opponent who will actually show up, we should see how he matches up with a good writer in NG. I think that this matchup will end in NG winning 4-1.

    5. ShadowWarriorfs(1-1)
    6. T.a.C(1-1)

    Prediction – This should be an interesting matchup. These two writers have been going at it for a good while now. I think this matchup will come down to which writer has the more creative story. I have no idea who will win this so I’ll go with myself, 3-2.

    7. 4.Mad Orphan (0-0)
    8.Cigma(0-2)
    9.Ex-Terminator(0-1)

    Prediction – This should be interesting as well. Mad and Ex enter their second consecutive three-way. This should be fun because if Cigma expands on his story, he can have a stellar verse. This week I believe he does that and wins this matchup with Mad coming in second and Ex, third
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    7. Picture Of The Week –

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    8. RM Newspaper Article -
    8a. Rumors – This weeks rumor involves another member of the RSTL. nO gOoD! Has been doing questionable things in his spare time. He apparently was caught hanging up rather disturbing pictures on the walls of fellow RSTL writers. Here are some of the examples of his work.

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    ^ this was found on Shadow’s wall

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    ^^this was found on Scroll’s wall

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    ^^this was found on Rico’s wall
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    ^^this was found on T.a.C’s wall

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    ^^this was found on Murderous’ wall

    Soon NG was stopped by the local RM authorities where he was then taken into custody and later made a RM mod. How and why this happened? Some suspect hand jobs were given while others think that he took things a bit too far when T.a.C mentioned how soft his lips were. This was while T.a.C realized his pants were unzipped. Shocking? I would say so.

    8b. Sports – This week starts the regular season in the NFL. There looks to be a lot of interesting things happening. NY Jets CB Darrelle Revis signed a deal worth about $46 million and 32 of it guaranteed. Also, T.J Houshmandzadeh was released by the Seattle Seahawks and later signed a one-year deal with the Baltimore Ravens. With this in mind, I will pick the winner of this week of games.
    NO over Min
    TB over Cle
    Mia over Buf
    Cin over NE
    Ind over Hou
    Den over Jac
    Atl over Pit
    Ten over Oak
    NYG over Car
    Det over Chi (upset)
    Ari over Stl
    GB over Phi
    SF over Sea
    Dal over Wash
    Bal over NYJ
    SD over KC

    8C. Song of the Week – Put You On Game by Lupe Fiasco
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    8D. Babe of the Week - Nana Tanimura

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    The Sexy as Hell Tanimura Nana - Vox
    ^^website

    8E. Super Hero of the Week – Batman
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    8F. Word/Phrase of the Week – Thundering Faggot
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    9. Conclusion – Thank you to everyone who showed up this week to their match ups. This was a very inspiring week of stories and I really enjoyed it. I would like to thank everyone for being good with voting on everyone’s matchups. This week, we say goodbye to Rico for a week and hopefully only a week as he handles some business. So, let us all elevate our games so much that by the time he resigns, he will have even tougher competition then he did before. In this upcoming week, we have a lot of good matchups that could end up be won by anyone. So let’s get ready for another good week of matches. Good luck to everyone this week.
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    I think u made an error. It's ok though ill correct u.*scrolls beats Ng 4-1* I got u homie.


    Good mag bro. Fun reading this haha
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    prove me wrong then scroll...i suggest u come hard too :)
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    Always do my man
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    thorough mag homie
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    ^^ fish taco my ass punk lol
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    Good shit Dowwar
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    LMFAO @ scrolls
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    hahaha nice shadow...

    all you little fagboys better watch out this week.. again I will include an audio with my verse..


    might be an actual song this week.. hook and all ... lookout bitches.
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    Thanks guys for appreciating the effort i put into these
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    btw...



    nice mag :)



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    thundering faggot*
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