[Mag] RSTL Magazine Week 1 Editon

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    1. Introduction

    This is the first week of the second season of the RSTL league. We received a lot of interest from several new and former writers. Writers such as, Got Life?, Master Peace, J. Keeper, Tekneek, Memento, Scrolls, T.a.C, Cigma, Shadow, Calibre, Rico and nO gOoD! all expressed interest. However, the turn out wasn’t has good as expected. We had five people now show but despite that, it was still a pleasant week for match-ups. Let’s go into depth with the ones who showed up.
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    2. Recap

    Scrolls – I thought this verse was smooth and enjoyable to read. The rhymes were good and the story was nicely done. I thought that you could have been more detail or be more vivid with some of the descriptions. I thought the flow was pretty good but in the earlier parts felt a bit choppy. I still enjoyed the style of writing you did which isn’t restricted to a particular scheme, which is nice. Good job this week son.

    Calibre vs. T.a.C – This match up turned out to be a pretty impressive showing between a former champ and a new comer. T.a.C.’s verse was great ideas and a good potential story line but his verse was hurt a little by a choppy flow. Still was a solid piece for him. Calibre wrote a pretty impressive story as well. The structure was a tad harder to follow but it was unique and refreshing. Both writers were creative and had some good rhyming in their verse but in the end, Calibre was just too much for T.a.C and ended up winning this 5-0.

    Shadow vs. Cigma – This match up was very good to read. Both of these writers were very close in writing abilities. Shadow’s verse had an enjoyable story. The rhymes and flow seemed to be on point and the imagery was nice. Shadow needed slow things down a little to allow for more development in his story. Cigma’s verse was very interesting and creative as well. The flow was smooth and the detail was very nice. Cigma just needed to work on his scheme/format and in the end, it allowed Shadow to take the 3-1-1 victory.

    Rico vs. nO gOoD! – This was a matchup between two of the RSTL’s best writers in the league. Rico’s verse was very creative and his flow was on point. The imagery in this verse added a lot of meaning to the verse and the readers were able to connect a lot with the story. NG’s verse was also smooth to read and although it was rushed due to your busy schedule, it was still an enjoyable read and provided a lot of good aspects to the story. However, the rushed story hindered your verse too much to be much of a match for Rico despite having solid rhymes. Rico won this match-up, 5-0.
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    3. Match Of The Week –

    Shadow


    Poison

    Odor mysterious, nostrils becoming scentless
    Mind remains blank, like a gun now senseless
    Senses obsolete as my words refuse to speak
    Sweat leaks from my pores, whore red in the cheek
    Hormones dead but she spreads her legs in heat
    Hair lathered as she sways to an empty beat
    She had her dress lace falling, sex calling for a taste
    Eyes would seduce, trying to reproduce a childish face
    This much I knew but still I drew towards her
    Lips gently pressed against her neck, voice now purrs
    Erotic slurs leave her mouth as she pushes my head south
    Her moans high pitched as she begs me to eat her out
    Growing more sensual at my eventual insertion
    Biting her lip, my dick penetrates with assertion
    Eyes wide like seizures as her body freezes
    Semen slowly releases as she screams “Sweet Jesus!”
    Riding the stream as her breast press against my chest
    Exhaustion present as lungs have nothing left
    As the sun shines, I awaken with her still there
    I remind myself of the passion in the air

    Days have passed, still gassed from that night
    Her seduction still in sight, image burning bright
    Reliving the moment on my lunch break
    Sex takes it toll as I stroll back into work late
    For a job I hate but I still relied on fate
    Boss angry but I still couldn’t concentrate
    Eventually fired because he was tired of me
    Still I remembered her as she shined vibrantly
    But she was gone, vanished like nothing was wrong
    Heart broken, replaying the same love song
    Hoping for relief but quiver from the addiction
    Slivers of food replaced with notice of eviction
    Poison infecting my blood stream
    While her image dances in my dream…

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    Cigma

    A woman found raped in chinatown
    brutally beat and left with deep
    cuts on her shoulder blades…

    "Doesn't this remind you of that case from a few days ago?"

    "It's the same MO I'm afraid."

    We go as the evidence is collected.
    It's no coincidence and no suspects.

    Arriving at the hospital the victim isn't up yet.
    So we review the info. Interesting…
    Both the women attacked
    were asian descent.
    Perhaps those were his targets?

    No prints found at the scenes
    The rape kits rendered irrellevent
    He used bleach to clean his semen.

    But faint hope gleamed,
    DNA was recovered
    from under the nails of the second
    victim and was being tested.

    Patiently waited as Agashi
    recovered her wits. Still shocked
    from the violence of her loss,
    She would speak briefly sob then stop,
    but we pieced together broken bits
    And left her with the sketch artist.

    At the station we theorize.
    Who is this guy, where did he come from?

    "Looks African-American but speaks
    Chinese well enough to fool natives.
    He's gotta be well educated."

    Agashi and the man exchanged letters
    before they met. When they did
    He was not what she expected.
    A half breed.

    She laughed at him derisively,
    said he'd never touch her flesh.
    That's when madness seized his features
    and he attacked with fists.

    The lab results came back with a match,
    that took us to a halfway house,
    where found a grizzled man in a wheel chair.
    He'd been confined there for over a decade.

    There's no way he could have done it.
    But he had no relatives or siblings.
    I had an inkling...

    "Did you ever have any children?"

    "Not that I know of, but I raped so many women…"


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    4. No Show Shrine –

    Scrolls
    Cold as shit, walkin home and its barely even winter yet..
    Felt a sting on my inner neck as I flicked my ciggarette..
    Not even noticing the bigger threat...a man that appears injured yet is wearing a linen dress..

    *awakes*

    Wtf? Where am I? I tried to strain my eyes but I feel paralysed and suddenly so scared to die...
    I have to stop debatin its fable...cause there's a human wit his head, face and navel missin on the operatin table...
    I had to let my mind roam, but where did this fuckin guy go?
    Probably in a mirror that's everywhere but the skydome..
    I shoulda gotten a ride home...cause now I feel like a damaged package..
    Beating by a frantic addict while blood drips down my legs, hands and jacket..
    I'm still sorta blind, but I've gotta build clues..in a room lined wit blood, lime and mildew...
    Plenty of signs of what this maniac will do...now lost in this underground basements concealed room..
    My fuckin mind feels weird, its lost in time...I can't fill in the dotted lines..
    There's more blood in these halls combined than all who died in columbine...
    There's still no signs of persons near...I wish I had burbon or beer to stir these fears...
    But my purpose here is certainly clear...
    I'm guessin the end is comin..Jus then I remembered somethin...
    Another day flashed back when I've entered this dungeon..
    Ha, then a quick smile crossed my face...rememberin the first guy I stalked for days...
    I caught him crossin ways from a Boston game...

    On a chain I kept all this guys wisdom teeth...it was my other personality..I swear, it isn't me...

    *puts on shades, smiles*


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    4. No Show Shrine –

    Scrolls
    Cold as shit, walkin home and its barely even winter yet..
    Felt a sting on my inner neck as I flicked my ciggarette..
    Not even noticing the bigger threat...a man that appears injured yet is wearing a linen dress..

    *awakes*

    Wtf? Where am I? I tried to strain my eyes but I feel paralysed and suddenly so scared to die...
    I have to stop debatin its fable...cause there's a human wit his head, face and navel missin on the operatin table...
    I had to let my mind roam, but where did this fuckin guy go?
    Probably in a mirror that's everywhere but the skydome..
    I shoulda gotten a ride home...cause now I feel like a damaged package..
    Beating by a frantic addict while blood drips down my legs, hands and jacket..
    I'm still sorta blind, but I've gotta build clues..in a room lined wit blood, lime and mildew...
    Plenty of signs of what this maniac will do...now lost in this underground basements concealed room..
    My fuckin mind feels weird, its lost in time...I can't fill in the dotted lines..
    There's more blood in these halls combined than all who died in columbine...
    There's still no signs of persons near...I wish I had burbon or beer to stir these fears...
    But my purpose here is certainly clear...
    I'm guessin the end is comin..Jus then I remembered somethin...
    Another day flashed back when I've entered this dungeon..
    Ha, then a quick smile crossed my face...rememberin the first guy I stalked for days...
    I caught him crossin ways from a Boston game...

    On a chain I kept all this guys wisdom teeth...it was my other personality..I swear, it isn't me...

    *puts on shades, smiles*


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    5. Verse Of The Week –

    Rico

    every day before work, i would creep to her bed,
    re-tuck her in tight, and lay a kiss on her head..
    my baby girl is my world, she's the worlds greatest gift,
    just for god giving her life, im greatfull for this,
    when I come home, and see here smile with glee,
    It makes me smile as well cause she was smiling for me,
    we were like 2 peas in a pod, stuck together like glue,
    i'll never forget the way she'd light up a room
    and my girl was the sweetest thing ive ever seen,
    a lil pep in her step but still as sweet as can be,
    her swagger was outrageous a soon to be queen
    respectful and sincere what else could she be


    she moved so swift, kinda like a Hawaiian dancer,
    until she didn’t move too much after being diagnosed with cancer,


    God, why you pick on the lil people why you punishing me?
    Like im the target, and you gunnin for me,
    She was my every thing, my dreams and my love….
    My lil girl was the sole reason that every day I woke up,
    .......
    "sweetie, don’t worry, you just gotta be strong,
    don’t give up my lil soldier, you just keep going on,
    i tried my best just to keep you from harm,
    now hurt so bad, that life is from the IV's in your arm,
    “Daddy my whole body hurts, am I gonna be okay,
    “ya honey bunches……your gonna go home today”

    but days turned to months….and the lil girl never got cured,
    and she never gave up, because her soul was pure….
    Daddy, would visit his girl, not wanting to let go,
    but after many nights of prayer daddy knew he had to let go.....



    “ im here to see…..” "I know sir, she’s the third door to the right”,
    ……”hey pretty girl…hows my mama doing tonight”
    well......
    .......“shh….if it hurts just rest your eyes”….
    …..i know your gonna get rest tonight….”
    Gosh baby, your still so pretty, you’re my queen for ever,
    And no matter what happens, your gonna be with me for ever,
    Always remember that daddy loves you more than life it self
    And ive looked for answers, and asked god for help,
    You look so peacefull laying in bed…
    One last time……….i’ll re-tuck you in and give you a lil kiss on your head..........

    *pulls the plug*
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    6. Predictions –


    Scrolls (1-0)
    Master Peace(1-0)

    Prediction – I don’t think I have read anything from Master but in this matchup I believe that Scrolls will win this based on nothing more then speculation. 3-1

    Calibre(1-0)
    Shadow(1-0)

    Prediction – This should be an interesting match and seeing as both of these writers are coming off impressive victories, I believe that this could be the match of the week. I believe Calibre will edge Shadow 3-2.

    Rico(1-0)
    T.a.C(0-1)

    Prediction – Rico is coming off of a nice win while T.a.C faced a disappointing loss. T.a.C will improve more this week and should put up a good fight. Still I believe Rico will win this 5-0

    Cigma(0-1)
    nO gOoD!(0-1)

    Prediction – Cigma and NG are both really creative in their stories. This matchup comes down to which writer is better prepared. If both are prepared, I believe NG would win this, however if either is off their game, the other will win. NG 3-2.

    Murderous Keys(0-0)
    Mad Orphan(0-0)
    Ex-Terminator(0-0)
    Prediction – I believe that this matchup will have 2 no shows and I believe if anyone shows up, it’ll likely be Murderous.
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    7. Picture Of The Week –

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    8. RM Newspaper Article -
    8a. Rumors - In an interesting turn of events, it was learned that T.a.C actually is not a virgin. There is speculation as to whom the pathetic fool is that would succumb to this torturous night of limited passion. However in a shocker, a woman was discovered leaving T.a.C’s house one day. A picture was taken of the woman and many of you may know her.








































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    Yes, this is Megan Good and it turns out that T.a.C has jungle fever. Shocked?? I know I am but you know what they say, it’s always the nerds that pull the fine women.

    8b. Sports – This week continues the preseason in the NFL and a lot of teams look to be very solid. One of those teams is the Houston Texan. The young running back, Foster looks to be an impressive young prospect and it appears that the Texans will be better just with him. This week is the last week of the pre-season and the team to watch this week will be the Washington Redskins. It will be very interesting to see whether or not their backups will be good enough to even play at a NFL level if a starter goes down and so far, it doesn’t look good.

    9. Conclusion – Thank you to everyone who showed up this week to their match ups. I think this week will have a lot of stiff competition but should be a lot of fun to read. Please provide feedback about how you liked or disliked the Magazine. I am trying to do some thing different this season and I am open for suggestions. If you would like to write an article for the Magazine PM me what you want to say before Saturday night. I will likely add more things to the newspaper section but I just wanted to test it out to see what you guys thought about it. Good luck to everyone in their upcoming matches.
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    LMFAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAO. holy shit. you cunt. im dying over here
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    hahahahaha i take it you liked my Newspaper :-D
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  12. Scrolls-Oracle of Omen

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    Haha. Wow. Good shit.
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    great shit......awesome read...makes putting the effort worth while..
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  14. Muti

    Muti I just write

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    where is the sign in thread?
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    Creating it now....T.a.C must have forgotten it
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    thanks shad. knew i forgot somethin
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    Hopefully we keep picking it up
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    Great verse this week rico, well done.

    that will be my last loss like that in this league.


    good luck to cigma this week
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    NG, good looks bro, thanks for the credit....i got lucky i guess. its hurting to write this time tho....cant get motivated
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    you could ask for an extension

    i'm sure t.a.c. won't mind waiting another 24 hrs
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