Lyrikz 0-0 vs. indeed 0-0

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  1. J o o k

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    RBL South Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am pacific.
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!! And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
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    First to 8 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
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  2. Lyrikz

    Lyrikz To ya brain and pop slow.

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  3. Lyrikz

    Lyrikz To ya brain and pop slow.

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    heres 16...

    Listen dude, its nothing, and skill is irrelevant....
    when I tell you im gonna give the voices in your head a speach impediment....
    i wasnt lazy on time spent, but that aint the only reason im ill,thas not the case
    i made sure i thought outside the box so i didn't invade your personal space...
    dont you have home training? arent there some old sayings you follow?
    well whether your grabbing life by the horns or not you can't Dodge this hollow...
    what you know is right isnt always easy to swallow,im sure you know what i mean
    so the proof is in the pudding, no wonder you can never get away with anything...
    you think you can make it up north or make a name for yourself but fact is...
    no matter where you go you wont escape they chains of wackness
    he thinks he's special?! your skill doesnt stand out, i cant believe this cat....
    man your just another face in the crowd.....and an ugly one at that...
    dont challenge me dude, cuz when im serious im more than just a lil rude...
    so if your so scared that your heart skips a beat, ill make it chopped n screwed...
    no matter what style you choose, you'll lose because my skills are stacked to a t..
    so whether you show or not ill get the no-show shine because u cant see me...

    Word.
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  4. dominaking

    dominaking New Member

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    you suck.

    i dont know if you guys saw this...
    but my oponents a few foam cups and leftovers from being garbage
    always crying, this ni99as no hope
    but the opposite of 'straight' drama, he's more like Queer as Folk
    youre all played or just plagiarist, the worst of menaces
    with those 16 bit-lines, it's like im battling Sega Genesis
    shouldve seen a dentist, lack of brushin led to wood fits
    ..i was gonna destroy ya teeth, but the termites beat me to it
    i talked to your girl, she said you were needy
    and that youre such a pencil dick that you piss graffitti
    i cum hard like....<< see, that isn't weak
    i just spit a cumline to match the ones on ya cheek
    stop actin gassed, you aint even witty, yo
    ya ish was like coney island....long lines and shitty flow
    you eve got seasonal allergies...a nerd n' he knows it
    ...so ill make you run all day like dust to ya nose, bitch
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  5. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    i'm gonna have to go with indeed on this one....he came with some nice lines...lyriks came pretty decent too but his flow was a little off....indeed just came harder overall

    vote=indeed
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  6. Everybodys_Nig4ya

    Everybodys_Nig4ya New Member

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    battle was kinda weak....

    Lyrikz...ya lines were kinda stretched....which is not that big of a deal if ya flow is on point....but it wasn't.....you had some decent lines....overall......aight verse....

    indeed.....ya flow was much better then Lyrikz.....ya punches were kinda blah.....to make a long story short....

    imma go with Lyrikz....i like the chopped and screwed line..........

    stay up homies....
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  7. CONCOUYS

    CONCOUYS CONSCYOUS

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    yo pretty like it all


    pluse yo! I liked indeeds joint allot too,
    but I can't make a tie. as hard as it is dood Im goin fah lyrikz

    vote- Lyrikz
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  8. Narsil

    Narsil the unbreakable

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    lol you people cant be serious...indeed was actualy pretty nice...a good flow plus structure some nice lines..it actualy all fitted pretty well..
    lyrik had nice concepts too but the lines were overstretched and the flow wasnt too good wich brought it down a lot..verse was cool besides that tho..if you brush up on yer style n flow you can come pretty far

    vote = indeed jus a better writer more polished good concepts...
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  9. Lyrikz

    Lyrikz To ya brain and pop slow.

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  10. Lyrikz

    Lyrikz To ya brain and pop slow.

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  11. XpOeT

    XpOeT no title needed

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    Lyrikz's verse breakdown-

    Listen dude, its nothing, and skill is irrelevant....
    when I tell you im gonna give the voices in your head a speach impediment....
    (nice opener but ya flow is stretched alil)

    i wasnt lazy on time spent, but that aint the only reason im ill,thas not the case
    i made sure i thought outside the box so i didn't invade your personal space...
    (this was ok..could've been alil stronger)

    dont you have home training? arent there some old sayings you follow?
    well whether your grabbing life by the horns or not you can't Dodge this hollow...
    (i get the punch, but its on the weak side)

    what you know is right isnt always easy to swallow,im sure you know what i mean
    so the proof is in the pudding, no wonder you can never get away with anything...
    (fuckin whack)

    you think you can make it up north or make a name for yourself but fact is...
    no matter where you go you wont escape they chains of wackness
    (still weak)

    he thinks he's special?! your skill doesnt stand out, i cant believe this cat....
    man your just another face in the crowd.....and an ugly one at that...
    (better)

    dont challenge me dude, cuz when im serious im more than just a lil rude...
    so if your so scared that your heart skips a beat, ill make it chopped n screwed...
    (i've readd a punch like this recently so that counts against u, still bland)

    no matter what style you choose, you'll lose because my skills are stacked to a t..
    so whether you show or not ill get the no-show shine because u cant see me...
    (whack fuckin way to end a verse)

    Comments- Vers started out kinda strong, but then u started to struggle towards the end.

    INdeed's verse breakdown-

    i dont know if you guys saw this...
    but my oponents a few foam cups and leftovers from being garbage
    (OK openner.)

    always crying, this ni99as no hope
    but the opposite of 'straight' drama, he's more like Queer as Folk
    (weak)

    youre all played or just plagiarist, the worst of menaces
    with those 16 bit-lines, it's like im battling Sega Genesis
    (blaahhhh)

    shouldve seen a dentist, lack of brushin led to wood fits
    ..i was gonna destroy ya teeth, but the termites beat me to it
    (weak)

    i talked to your girl, she said you were needy
    and that youre such a pencil dick that you piss graffitti
    (this was nice, but i didn't like the set up)

    i cum hard like....<< see, that isn't weak
    i just spit a cumline to match the ones on ya cheek
    (ehhhh...could be better)

    stop actin gassed, you aint even witty, yo
    ya ish was like coney island....long lines and shitty flow
    (ok)

    you eve got seasonal allergies...a nerd n' he knows it
    ...so ill make u run all day like dust to ya nose, bitch
    (WeaK)

    COMMENTS- i didn't really feel this verse,overall improvement is necessary. Graf line was the the sickest line of the battle.

    vote- Lyrikz cu he had an overall better verse.
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  12. ..Heist..

    ..Heist.. New Member

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    Lyriks - you have done what most text heads do force vocab because other netheads say you need to but yo don't I do aiduo and it's difficult to make that shit flow to a beat unless your write to... also I suggest you shorten ya lines because they were stretched and try to be more creative......

    Indeed - No matter how eak your opponent is never slack off it could decline your skills..also you came aiight your best line is the Sega Genesis one that is creative ass fuck

    Vote = Indeed
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  13. Deadly Lyricist

    Deadly Lyricist New Member

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    Nice Battle


    Lyriks- Ya Shit Was A Lil Stretched But U Had Sum Decent Lines

    Indeed-I Loved Ya Punches...

    V--Indeed...Overall Better Verse
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  14. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    lyrikz

    dont challenge me dude, cuz when im serious im more than just a lil rude...
    so if your so scared that your heart skips a beat, ill make it chopped n screwed...

    i wasnt lazy on time spent, but that aint the only reason im ill,thas not the case
    i made sure i thought outside the box so i didn't invade your personal space...


    the chopped and screwed line was aight....the think outside the box line has been done a whole lot....

    not a bad verse..okay..it seemed the lines were mad long when read..but like i said okay verse..

    indeed..

    i dont know if you guys saw this...
    but my oponents a few foam cups and leftovers from being garbage

    stop actin gassed, you aint even witty, yo
    ya ish was like coney island....long lines and shitty flow

    EH...the long lines was true...and your opener was pretty good...

    IMO both verses was both rather bland..nothing that TRULEY stood out.. I would have to go with the one who was staright to the point and less raw...Lryiks i think u need a lil bit more work...and u'll be aight..

    my vote indeed
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  15. Orenthal James

    Orenthal James New Member

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    indeed won this easily. was more creative with some fuck you attitude type punches. his lines were noot three miles long either. the other guy had some dope ocncepts but just didnt cut it. you must shorten your linesand go right at your opponet.

    indeed's opener was quite solid enough for this. always good to have a sick opener and closer.

    my favorite of the battle was by indeed

    "stop actin gassed, you aint even witty, yo
    ya ish was like coney island....long lines and shitty flow"
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  16. marsellus

    marsellus nOne siCker

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    wow, weak battle

    always crying, this ni99as no hope
    but the opposite of 'straight' drama, he's more like Queer as Folk
    youre all played or just plagiarist, the worst of menaces
    with those 16 bit-lines, it's like im battling Sega Genesis
    shouldve seen a dentist, lack of brushin led to wood fits
    ..i was gonna destroy ya teeth, but the termites beat me to it
    i talked to your girl, she said you were needy
    and that youre such a pencil dick that you piss graffitti
    i cum hard like....<< see, that isn't weak
    i just spit a cumline to match the ones on ya cheek

    ehhhh

    lmao@ cumline on ya cheek

    vote - indeed

    but this was wack
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  17. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    up over no shows
    count 7-3 one more indeed and this closed
    ne votes after that wont count for links
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  18. Sonz1

    Sonz1 Registration Please

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    vote= indeed...

    Lyrics has a couple of good concepts...but the rest were whack and your lines were stretched as fuck...

    indeed had a decent verse

    dont know if you guys saw this...
    but my oponents a few foam cups and leftovers from being garbage
    youre all played or just plagiarist, the worst of menaces
    with those 16 bit-lines, it's like im battling Sega Genesis
    i cum hard like....<< see, that isn't weak
    i just spit a cumline to match the ones on ya cheek


    ALOT more consistent
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  19. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    8-3 indeed wins (first to 8) 1-0
    Lyrikz loses 0-1
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