lyricalpriest vs. ikon211

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by lyricalpriest, Oct 7, 2010.

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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    match rules:

    verses due by saturday at 3pm..

    10-12 bars

    first to 3 votes wins..

    ill post later when i have time to write a verse..

    g'luck!
    test
  2. ikon211

    ikon211 Member

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    aiight, good luck...
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  3. ikon211

    ikon211 Member

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    iight here i go:

    so your lyricalpriest? do me a favor and change your name to "my-lyrics-are-pre".
    your nothin' me, go to your minister and ask him for a prayer
    cuz you gonna need it to get dis victory... if you have any punchlines to over-compare
    i dont care, your my hommie dawg but dont think i wont pirce your heart wit a spear to be da best thats here!
    hell i might even lose this battle but it'll only be cuz these ppl are visionless to read these bars that you fear
    im not gonna stay on one syllable lines so hold for a secound...
    im flow reckonin', your behind my bars... but not in my prison
    take these words, form a rope wit it, tie it round your throat and hang yourself wit it
    burn in heaven, freeze over hell
    i had to beat you in a 12 bar limit... i buryed you in the first half!
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    damnit-ur ametuer antics-are saboteur
    u make it hard for me to take u serious
    at the low level of ur caliber
    theres no challenger here
    its off balance sir..
    my style is crafted while u have no style
    'hurre'..
    i can 211 ur whole battle swagger
    ikon211 ur no battle rapper!!
    im the priest ur the altar boy
    ur whole verse gets molested
    ur just the fathers toy!
    wait "this just in" ur not a boy
    bitch get in the kitchen and make me a sandwich
    before i drop u boy!
    callin me out
    better stop stalking me now
    asking me for lessons how to rap
    what are u talking about?
    its hard to hear with all that cock in ur mouth
    this is just "lyrical-pre"cum no need for ejaculation
    i busted ur whole style up and got shit LOCK
    ur gonna need lyrical emancipation


    ...ah shit maybe over a few bars but eh.. i bet no one votes tbh.. good try ikon211

    i hope this helps u elevate
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  5. ikon211

    ikon211 Member

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    thats tha only reason im here, 2 get better, I guess I start this RSTL tuesday or somethin'. I wanted 2 get a taste of this site and the competition... btw i thought u would say i asked u 4 tips, I started to use that line against u haha
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  6. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    ya.. ill get some people to come vote .. i dont got dick ryders so dont think like my homees is voting against u i have nothing but enemies but.. they respect me.. to a certain degree
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  7. ikon211

    ikon211 Member

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    iight cool
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  8. ShogunCrosse

    ShogunCrosse The Fuckin' Good Guy...

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    Ikon- You did ok for a newbie here...Nice attempts at disses, but you need to shorten up your bars...gotta remember, it flows in your head, but you have to write it so it flows to all when they read it..****f. work on harder disses...This didnt really jab ur opponent too hard (damn that all sounds gay...but im not re-wording it so fuck it lol)

    LP-First battle rap i seen from you..Your pretty good for this bein a quick lil battle...Nice lil disses...Good structure and rhyme scheme

    Vote-Lp...better structure and harder hits
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  9. bnasty510

    bnasty510 Member

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    lol this battle was overall weak.

    highlights....

    lyrical

    better stop stalking me now
    asking me for lessons how to rap
    what are u talking about?
    its hard to hear with all that cock in ur mouth
    this is just "lyrical-pre"cum no need for ejaculation
    i busted ur whole style up and got shit LOCK
    ur gonna need lyrical emancipation


    that won this battle. better punchlines.

    Vote = lyrical

    p.s why did u feed off his verse? lyrical pre? lame
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  10. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    THANX FOR THE VOTE!

    sorry u didnt like my lyrical pre line..
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  11. rohnrtprkplyboy

    rohnrtprkplyboy New Member

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    Ikon- yo u def got potential, but its quite obvious who the ametuer was in this battle.
    you had some good momentum in your flow but i couldnt really take you serious and
    you didnt do anything to damage lp's ego or rep. you need to work on you vocab and illustration skills.

    fav line-sorry i have none not tryna be rude.

    lp-you gassed your first few bars, setting the verse up quite well. you had good flow but
    damn your punchlines are placed so unorthedoxly your whole style is abstract
    but it makes your reads interesting.

    fave line- can 211 ur whole battle swagger
    ikon211 ur no battle rapper!!
    im the priest ur the altar boy
    ur whole verse gets molested
    ur just the fathers toy!

    vote-lp
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