Lyrical Sorcery vs. MADpoet

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  1. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    .............
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  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Pick 1 out of the 5 Topics listed

    1. You escape from prison. Where do you run to?

    2. If you could be a teacher for one day, what would you teach and why?

    3. Your parents are in the next room arguing, suddenly you hear 3 gunshots. What do you do?

    4. You are a flower. Tell us what it feels like to blossom

    5. It's 3:25 a.m. And you awake to somebody beation no your door. When you open it, the devil is standing there. He tells you it's time to go. What do you do?


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    You must vote!!! It will count against you!!!

    Voting Due Tuesday, May 18th!!!
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  3. Quintin_Warden

    Quintin_Warden Online Terrorist

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    so we drop may 14th?
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  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    yes....
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  5. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    checkin in... all gravy...
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  6. DIVINITY FLOWZ

    DIVINITY FLOWZ New Member

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    I'm done.... so if you wanna post early and get this tournament started so people can get juiced, just let me know.

    Otherwise I'll just be posting it on Thursday or Friday.

    pz
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  7. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Who the hell are you?
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  8. ...lol
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  9. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    look at the sig.....

    LS alter ego

    He's 2 of my other personalities....
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  10. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Man stay on one name. Aint nobody finna be guessin and shit
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  11. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    lol... I'm posting as LS... don't trip
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  12. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    3. Your parents are in the next room arguing, suddenly you hear 3 gunshots. What do you do?
    • I'm a 16 year old boy and I've just been kicked out of summer basketball camp early, but my parents don't know yet.
    Mom's been drinking too much and Dad's been smoking my bud.
    The combination of that means neither is focused on love.

    The yelling starts with moms saying "Why can't you get off ya ass.
    Can't make dinner, clean shit or even just get rid of the trash!

    I have to work for a living, that might be different for you,
    but you can't live in my house if you're not contributing too!"

    There was silence for a second, I heard dad taking a hit.
    As he coughed, I wait for him to start saying some shit.

    Almost amazed that he did.... especially when I heard his reply; (My dad's Jamaican.. so imagine a jamaican accent)
    "Woman, I'm the fuckin man, you need to learn you're the wife."

    I knew this battle was brewing. I'm glad they don't know that I'm home
    I feel savage persuing the outcome of this show by my folks

    Moms musta been stunned... that he could even say that to her.
    I can't see her, but I can imagine her face was disturbed.

    Making me jerk.. when she finally yelled back as her voice
    blasted through the whole house and just attacked it with noise.

    "My mothafuckin place is to mother my children,
    not to hover submissive while my punk ass husband is bitching!!

    You need to get the fuck up and get outta my house
    Ya lazy ass bumb... and I'm not talking now, but right now!!"

    I feel bad for my dad, thinking he has to leave
    Seemed like the optimal choice if you were asking me,

    but at last I peep my moms feet walking past my door
    while I heard my dad's laughter like he had asked for more.

    That was poor judgement as I see moms return to the scene,
    I'm pretty sure she can convince him to be concerned from this beef.

    Moms: "Get the fuck out now! I'm not playing at all!"
    Dad: "You better give me that gun bitch unless you're praying to fall!"

    I hear a slap, my fear reacts as I cry for my mom.
    Dad: "Gabriel is home so I'm finna say goodnight to my son."

    I hear my mom crying while she's laughing so her rage is continued.
    Gun shots fired, I pissed my pants and get the shakes from the big boom.

    I walk out to see what happened still covered in piss.
    My dad is holding his chest coughing up blood in his spit.

    His body stops twitching with his eyes wide open, but lifeless.
    I look towards my mom and she looks desperately hopeless while crying.

    Still yelling at my dad, "Look at what the fuck you made me do.
    Now our only son has witnessed me erasing you"

    I walk to my mom. We're both filled wit tears and in need of a hug.
    We hold each other, she drops the gun and falls to her knees in the blood.

    Feeling relief from the love, but still thinking what's happened.
    My mom's cluthing her head in pain so I feed her some aspirin.

    She takes it down with some juice. I place some towels in the room.
    Wipe up the blood and close my dad's eyes, he looked to fowl to be viewed.

    I explained to mom that I witnessed it all.
    We got our stories straight and then decided that I'd give them the call.

    I reach for the phone, dialed 911 and then ask for the cops.
    "There was a fight between my parents and my dad has been shot."

    They asked me alot to keep me on the phone until sirens arrived.
    I explained what happened and they seemed delighted inside.

    My dad was body bagged and taken, his portrait appeared in the carpet.
    In the form of his body as I'm plotting; I feel bitter and heartless.

    Moms is taken to hospital and I go along with her there.
    No charges were even filed cause we stayed strong through our fears.

    Not a true story, but now I still need a bong and some beers... Hope you enjoyed the read. Pz
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  13. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    since it doens't look like this dude is gonna show.. u can just give commentary on mine if you want....

    I'd like that as well
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  14. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    needless to say, ya name fits ya style...I can't comment too much more on it...The shit was hott...there are a few parts where it could use some editing, but other than that, good story...these seem to be the better ones comin off here about the parents gettin shot...
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  15. Quintin_Warden

    Quintin_Warden Online Terrorist

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    had the w32.supova.b.worm virus in my comp. back now. will be dropping tonight~1~
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  16. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    damn homi, lol, I feel bad for ya...what did you download to get taht shit?
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  17. Quintin_Warden

    Quintin_Warden Online Terrorist

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    ^ i left my comp. on, while downloading off kazaa n some guy messeges me and sais "worm virus, fuck you" or something like that, repeatedly. next thing you know after a month or 2 my internet company sais i have a worm in my comp. and its spreading throughout the network so they'll have to stop my service if i dont get rid of it. therefore i had to remove, and i tried but then my computer couldn't boot. to put a long story short, i took it to the technician and got it back tonight.. i hate hackers yp [funny]
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  18. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    winner=lyrical
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