Luxuria

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  1. THE CRUNK GHOST

    THE CRUNK GHOST 3PEATERS

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    an intriguing stranger
    an inviting glance
    forbidden photos
    a budding romance

    whispers, rumors
    flowers in the mailbox
    or a cobra in disguise
    tranny tricked again
    ju engree
    this world is a faggot
    luxuria​
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    test
  2. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    lol.. last four lines make me chuckle and say wtf.

    tranny tricked again

    what a provocative statement.
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  3. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    'a budding romance'

    i liked the word scheme like it was tight.. ez
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  4. somerandomguy

    somerandomguy 'Deja vu..all over again'

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    this part is actually good.. ^

    lol @ the end tho.
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  5. The Goon UK

    The Goon UK New Member

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    Short and sweet... i liked it

    -Goon
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  6. x calibur

    x calibur

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    I seriously lol'd
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  7. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    this was awesome, could have been better if you delivered a stronger message instead.
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