Love or Infatuation?

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  1. XeCutioN

    XeCutioN IdolEyez'd

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    aint did a written in a while..mostly jus blaze some fire herb and freestyle at parties or lay a few tracks blazed..im in indianapolis for the weekend, pent up in this hotel..no herb and a laptop so im bored.. this shit is on my mind and for once in a long time, i feel really happy so fuck it..

    my face sweatin, as my fuckin heart beats,
    like a fat kid, in all black, tryin to retreat
    when its one hundred degrees,
    knowin he cant handle the heat
    lost in those rosey red cheeks,
    lookin for ways to sweep, her off her feet
    my minds flustered, yet her scent's so sweet,
    i'd do anything, to meet her every need
    crack skulls if i have to, for her honor i'd tussle,
    after a long day, its nothin to caress every muscle
    in her body, she's the missin piece to my puzzle,
    feelings sky high, bout ta blast off like a shuttle
    so subtle, the way she knows what i like,
    she'd hold down the fort, i know she'd fight
    it's that tight, the way our personalities click,
    got me pickin up the mic, my mentality splits
    my flows again sick, my minds clear, tempers mild,
    even caught myself, a few times crackin a smile
    straight mackin my style, that kid Slim is back,
    from a broken heart, that had once been smashed
    she's mended the cracks, so tonight i must say,
    i pray we grow stronger, cuz id die for you babe..
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  2. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Ok ok homie .. you got my attention on this one ... I'm feeling it
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  3. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Yeah .. i think its ok for freestyle ... what about singing it? I was asked to write some r and b and I'm tryin to approach it lol ...

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  4. XeCutioN

    XeCutioN IdolEyez'd

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    thanks man!
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  5. LyricalMaze

    LyricalMaze The Scottish Warrior

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    tight few lines, nice flow, also nice to hear a positive subject, any girl material I'll be doing for the next while will be negative :(
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  6. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Why? Lol you just gotta get into pimp mode ... lol I really should write a book ...
    Refer to yourself as pimp
    Let them know you are the shit and then some
    Always holler at other girls right in front of them
    Tell em you want to bite em
    Ask em what kinda panties they got on
    Just be clever and keep it pimp lol
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