Love Is......

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by j$crILLa, Jul 16, 2003.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2001
    Messages:
    12,588
    Love is eternity
    Love is forever
    Love cannot be broken
    Love is addictive like smokin

    so whats Love?
    theres no answer, its a feeling

    Love cannot be baught
    Love can only be saught

    Love may never be found
    Love is all around

    so whats Love?
    theres no answer, its a feeling

    Love is me and my queen
    Love is pure and clean

    Love is me in my DeVille
    Love takes time and skill

    so whats Love?
    theres no answer, its a feeling

    Love is what you want it to be
    Love cant be felt, herd or seen

    Love is a feeling
    Love is truth and honesty
    test
  2. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

    Joined:
    Mar 30, 2003
    Messages:
    2,938
    "so whats Love?
    theres no answer, its a feeling"

    ^^^

    i liked that line a lot and i loved how you repeated it through-out, i can't even decribe how powerful i felt this piece was, another good job.

    stay up. much love, peace
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

    Joined:
    Apr 10, 2001
    Messages:
    17,331
    nicely written, nothing really stood out to me. Good job, keep it up

    one luv
    test
  4. Kareem

    Kareem Still Ballin

    Joined:
    Mar 18, 2003
    Messages:
    2,935
    shit's wack
    test
  5. vinous

    vinous New Member

    Joined:
    May 22, 2003
    Messages:
    405
    lol @ kareem, wat wud these boards be without him?

    a very simple but true piece. pz.
    test
  6. lpoet

    lpoet POET

    Joined:
    Oct 20, 2002
    Messages:
    12,678
    so whats Love?
    theres no answer, its a feeling

    so true

    nice drop
    test
  7. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2001
    Messages:
    12,588
    thank you

    and kareem- your suck a valuable member of RM
    test
  8. MzLashay

    MzLashay Livin'

    Joined:
    Jul 3, 2003
    Messages:
    62
    this was a simple and true peice
    test
  9. Optical MusiQ

    Optical MusiQ Let Tha Revolution Begin!

    Joined:
    Jul 18, 2003
    Messages:
    35
    Love is love & that's how it is.... You say truth in so few words yet impacts the mind indefinantly
    test
  10. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

    Joined:
    Jul 15, 2003
    Messages:
    798
    i liked this peice, though i felt it could have used something more, but it is still a great concept and peice as is..nice work
    test
  11. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2001
    Messages:
    12,588
    thanks yall
    test
  12. Nasty__Ness

    Nasty__Ness The Queen of Topicals

    Joined:
    Jun 25, 2003
    Messages:
    175
    The deepest part of this was the course lines... however I have some views to the ending that I feel differently toward... Love can be felt.. but ya can't touch it... it's just a matter of the diction used...

    not too bad of a piece... but could use a little bit of editing.

    7/10
    test
  13. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2001
    Messages:
    12,588
    thanks dog
    test
  14. UnknownLady

    UnknownLady Senior Member

    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2001
    Messages:
    818
    j$crILLa this is a good. I haven't heard from you in a while. Where ya been. Well I am on break at work and just thought you should know that this was really heart felt and feeling this from the beginng to the end. Keep it up and I'll be looking for more stuff from you.

    Holla
    test
  15. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2001
    Messages:
    12,588
    thanks alot, i been workin n shit also
    test
  16. shione

    shione New Member

    Joined:
    Aug 28, 2002
    Messages:
    27
    nice pieace..
    test
  17. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

    Joined:
    Jul 10, 2003
    Messages:
    2,243
    Optical beat me to my words this time, lol...So I will just say I liked it because my words have already been manifested upon this plain of existence...
    test
  18. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2001
    Messages:
    12,588
    test
  19. disciplestylez

    disciplestylez Broken Soul

    Joined:
    Jun 16, 2003
    Messages:
    88
    so whats love?
    there is no answer it is a feeling


    i love that line....


    peace and love
    test
  20. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 2001
    Messages:
    12,588
    ^thanks

    i appreciate the replies im getting
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)