Love Broken

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  1. BeEgEe

    BeEgEe El Warm Shot

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    I'm thinking about you tonight, tonight forever
    The first kiss was perfect, but the hype was measured
    Could look into your eyes and see our life together
    Could look into your eyes and see the brightest treasure
    Now I can’t, stay up late-night and sketch her
    I think I can make it through, despite the weather
    Thought, maybe if I changed you would like it better
    So I did, but you were still right…whatever…
    Reason is slain
    Schemes so insane
    He’s so in pain
    Dreams down the drain
    Two star crossed paths tied tight together
    You said you wanted to be my wife… remember???
    All those breath catching passion filled nights together
    All those pieces of my heart that were sliced and severed
    I’ll keep the other half of me, just to spite the better
    Full of fakeness and lies, about you I could write forever
    In person, I could probably recite this better
    but I can’t
    So I’m thinking about you tonight, tonight forever​
    test
  2. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    "I’ll keep the other half of me, just to spite the better" - Love this line... the piece as a whole was really good...
    test
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