Lord Where Are You.......

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by lpoet, Aug 8, 2004.

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  1. TheDelusional1

    TheDelusional1 HOLYSHIT!

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    I'm not real religious, but I really liked this.
    Excellent writing, and your scheme was nice.
    Good job!

    TD1
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  2. AliuqeT

    AliuqeT New Member

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    i lyke this part tha best
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  3. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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  4. mr nitty

    mr nitty A registered user

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    How long have you been writing? This is very good it makes me realize how much work I have to do. hehe Guess I should stop [vn2] before I start writing
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  5. serioustempa

    serioustempa New Member

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    Very mind stimulating, well put together nicely done. I enjoy'd the read. 1love
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  6. Black Liquid

    Black Liquid New Member

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    word that shit was right! nice flow to it. good looks on checkin my shit out too, i hope youll continue to do so
    -liq
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  7. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    All I ever wanted was to love you

    For when lips parted
    Words started becoming unfamiliar and unclear
    So I coated the truth with ignorance and
    Hid within my despair
    Hopeing someone would find me
    And give me the answers

    I once heard that you can dream with eyes open
    And tears don’t mean that your weak and
    Though the scabs have fallin off volumes the scars speak
    but i'm
    Still searching for freedom
    Still searching for peace
    still searching for meaning in
    semingly meaningless things

    .....

    GOD WHERE ARE YOU?


    and all i can say is damn...this piece spoke volumes to me...loves it!

    mad love
    test
  8. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    beautiful in deed
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  9. orbit the great

    orbit the great another gay white kid

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    this touched me
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