Lord Speak To Me (Another song i'm working on input please)

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  1. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    Lord Speak To Me

    Lord speak to me
    I really need to hear from you

    Sweet Jesus speak to me
    In need some guidance from you

    Here I am with my arms wide open
    I welcome you into my heart
    I want a brand-new life
    But I don't know where to start

    I had a long talk with myself
    I can’t go on living this way
    Lord please take my hand
    Show me there’s a better way

    I thought I knew it all
    But I didn’t know more then you
    When it comes to having problems
    You can say I had a few

    Being who you are
    You brought me through the storm
    When hurricanes came in my life
    You were my father in another form

    Lord I get so tired
    Of being stuck in the same place
    Every time I get over a problem
    Another one fills its space

    Walking with you isn’t easy
    Temptation is always there
    When I come to wants and desires
    I have a lot of those to spare

    The minute I take my mind off you
    My life turns upside down
    Lord speak to me
    And turn my life around
    Terry L. Sidney
    2/28/10
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  2. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    This was really enjoyable. I thought everything flowed nicely and sent a good message. this is good work here. Nicely done
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    mr.rip New Member

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    thank you i wrote this for my daughter to sing thank you my brother. i am happy to say that this that pass thursday god blessed me with the holy ghost now i can say that i 'm save and filled with the holy spirit. God is good.
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  4. anonyMISSme

    anonyMISSme New Member

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    first comes a poem.. but this isnt just poetry mr. rip.. this is God's work.. how can you go wrong unless something satanic was in it.. okay before all that.. its written well and im sure with decent music it'll be a good song.. id tell you tho.. you misrepresent yourself with that signature bro.. lol but good luck to your daughter and in your continuation of doing what he has set out for you to do.. maybe 10 years down the line we'll all be going to church singing your daughters songs.. ok much love peace..
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    its good bro. next, you should write one for God, about how strong you are because of him. Show him your confidence and strengthen your will. He loves to see we need him, and we search for his love. He also loves to hear when we have found him.
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  7. mr.rip

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    thank you very much i will do that. he is speaking through you to me.
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    I love it this was wonderful
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    Evg.poet As the Heart Speaks...

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    Awesomeness.... I love the truth and the realness behind your words. I know this will be a powerful and anointed song.
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  10. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    thanks guys its one of my favorites i wrote also.
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    to God be the glory everyone at church loved this song when she song it just thought i'd come back and up date you all on it. thanks for the support i did more songs after everyone herd her sing this one. thanks everyone glad you enjoyed it.
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  12. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    so you wanted honesty...

    take that positive feeling and say what you feel.

    i think that is could be more uplifting and show more your sense of freedom to find the true meaning of life than merely redemption - an enlightened man is a free man not only in spirit but in mind.

    let the song progess from beginning to end, as there is night there is day. The song has a sense of uplifting and this should be the ending. Edit the sequence of the verses.
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  13. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    this message brought to you by an affiliate:

    i approve of this poem! *thumbs up* yo u keep doin ya thing player! i def like this.. we should collab on a poem! im glad to hear that u got filled with the H.G.

    ask him for another dosage and another daily! keep them lines of communication open, his blessing are upon u and u r saved by his grace!

    u use ur talents for him and he will definitely reward u my brotha!
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  14. mr.rip

    mr.rip New Member

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    thanks guys much love to you all.
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